Dreams - a FF on MN.last update p61 - Page 5

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Posted: 13 years ago
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like i said kal its absolutely fantastic👏👏 i love how you describe minute to minute detail without making it boring😊 reminds me of JKR😆 yes my patri doesnt go past HP and JKR when it comes to writing😆 love the way you described nupur's character😃😃 its perfect👍🏼 the house description is also fab😃😃 i could literally visualize it😊Oh so mayank is mona's cousin not bad😉😆 (PS: mona reminds me of mona singh all the time😆) yay shilpa is in the story🥳 love you for this🤗 i missed her later in mjht was watching old scenes of theirs too the other day when nupur called up his house before rose day and his mum picked up and she screamed dekho mujhe tumse koi baat nahin karni hai, apni mummy ko phone do mujhe unse shikayat karni hai🤣🤣🤣 painter: nice profession and unique too😃😊 love the ending👍🏼
thanks for the pm loving every bit of it🤗
Edited by StrongHope - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#42
beautiful update Shubs..🤗
loved it..❤️
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Posted: 13 years ago
#43
Beautiful update shubhu..loved it❤️
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Posted: 13 years ago
#44
interesting updt
cont soon
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
#45
That ws very beautifully written...The detail description of the place and house make u imagine all..
And the last part ws even more interesting...eagerly waiting to meet this mysterious painter...i mean mayank..😆
Loved it..cont soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#46
🤗...shubu!!!!!!!...🤗 ...amazing update !! a real great start...plus still maintaining the mysterious element...donno Its only me who is getting that mystery - mystery feeling ...LOL :P
Anyways I loved the way u penned down the part...the way u described each n every details was really gud :) and staring started frm now only hun ! the furious Mayank, is he ?? 😆 lets see...do continue soon...😃

and thanks for the updates..😳 🤗


Edited by --.munchkin.-- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#47
😆

Originally posted by: .SA.

i won't glare just this once Munchkin.😆
🤗 yeah you have been forever after me to write a FF. and don't blame me if i don't update.😆
cause you know what an erratic writer i am.
JTYJN??? 😆😆 no my story is nothing like it.
patience munchkin!!! Mayank to hero hain na to hero wali entry lega.

as for keeping romance level high ,🤔 🤔 i don't know.😉😆

don't you remember what happened when i turned the level a notch higher in my OS??🤣🤣

woh toh pehle ki baat thi n that was a mistake i guess ! I dont know! me wants romance...ab tujhse nahi yeh demand karungi toh kisse karun ?? 😉 🤣

So, chup chap meri baat suno..😳 waise bhi mjhe feeling aaying, this mayank wud b very romantic sa..😉😆
Edited by --.munchkin.-- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#48
interesting...

really nice start Shubhi :)
do continue soon :)
will be eagerly waiting for it :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
#49
Awesome Start SIS...👍🏼
That was class apart...👏👏👏
loved it to BITS...😍
Beautifully written wid sooo much ease n grace...😳
jst loved it to d coreee😳
i was actually being able to imagine Every single thing of dat update...
d countryside, d house, d Painting n most importantly Mayank looking at Nupur intently...at d end...😍😍😍
Hats off...⭐️⭐️⭐️
it was Awesome...
jst loved it to BITS...
do continue super soon plzzz
love u lodsss...🤗🤗🤗
Edited by -Anila- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#50
Congrats fr new ff...
and update was jst fabulous...all the description was mindblowing

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