Dreams - a FF on MN.last update p61

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fiza ahmed

@drfizaahmed

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#71

wonderful part...add me to pm list plss

so mayank knew it all

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Faria Ferdousi

@Faria.

Stunner

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Posted: 13 years ago

#72

Fab update.Very interesting n mysterious too.Mayur first meeting was very nice.Waiting 4 next part

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Zehnaseeb

@Zehnaseeb

Trailblazer

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Posted: 13 years ago

#73

the rain description is fantastic👏 i love the words you used to describe that it started to rain😃😃 theyre very descriptive😊 and now you're making me miss monsoons it never rains here and someone like me you can understand hates that😆 Vancouver was way better in this aspect, id always get wet in the rain than say to my mum the rain was coming from a diagonal angle so got wet with umbrella too😃🤣🤣 nupur is an avid reader so are mayank and his mum😊 first time i can relate to mayank too😆 i have a theory behind the paintings he does but won't say it yet since the story is at suspense point right now😆 i love how warm shilpa is😊 thankfully no evil saas business here😆 the dream she was having was so cute i always wanted a beach scene on them throws another tantrum😆 but its okay I'm getting everything i wanted through your FF😃 mayank finally saw her😃😃 yay😃😃 ending is fantastic👏 gives a hint of what the story is about without giving it away😃

thanks for the pm continue soon🤗🤗

Edited by StrongHope - 13 years ago

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-Symphony-

@-Symphony-

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#74

👏Its your second update and I am already hooked!!

Totally loved the intro😆 Better dan my shopping mall one i think😆

I see Mayank is already into her😲 Good going😛

Just one request don't make them fall in love too soon...give them the required build up...i kinda love those couples more who have a good build up before reaching to the point of love 😛

The dream was mysterious is there is deeper meaning to it😕

Like i always tell u i love how u pen down words...loving the flow nd the lil mystery this story binds to itself😳 Can't wait for their 1st interaction!! UD soon

sry for the delay shubhs...didn't get access to net yday🤗

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AWonderfulChaos

@AWonderfulChaos

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#75

God ! u have me totally spellbounded here! 😍I just want u to update crazily asap!!! I wanna read it all in one go :D see this much curious u hav made me! m loving it totally! update sooner sweet!

u r rocking :) 🤗 take care...n missing u so badly! cya soon :) 🤗

ps- m dying to read their first convo! t mysterious mayank who knows Nupur already ! update soon!!!

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mayur_eternal

@mayur_eternal

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#76

Hey Shubu..🤗

The second update was mindblowing...The whole situation looks totally mysterious and I am just waiting for it to unravel..Nupurs dream about Mayank and the fact that Mayank knows her beforehand...Is it sixth sense or plain coincidence? I like the pace at which the story is moving..And I'm even more excited about their first meeting.

Update soon...

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Divya

@MyInspirationz

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#77

SA... i loved the first part.. and the way you described the landscape.. I could visualise it... just like Nupur could feel the fury of the sea on seeing Mayank's painting

Nice start and Congrats for this new venture 😊