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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update
loved it lods
Beautifully written
loved it to d coreee
First time i hv read such a scene as we r used to watch it on tv
n hatss off to u SIS...👏
loved d way u described abt the Mandir n atmosphere...
Gosh! i hope MN will be alri8
continue super soon plzzz
loved it
love u lodss SIS...🤗🤗🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome part..now waiting what happens !! do cont soon :) take care <3
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Posted: 12 years ago
beautiful FF
loved it so much
plz do cont it
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Posted: 12 years ago
Edited by .SA. - 12 years ago
.SA. thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
hello friends , i am back with the update. i know i promised you all that i won't be late with update but the circumstances prevented me from updating sooner.
sorry to have kept all of you waiting.
Edited by .SA. - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Part -16

Nupur entered the woods ,due to the tall ,thick trees it was already dark inside. her

heart was beating fast , she had no idea how she was going to find Mayank ,but she

did not stop. *should i call him ??* thought Nupur * no i cannot afford to distract

him with a call , what if that thug lakhan is already here , he may be able to

pinpoint Mayank's location if he hears the cell ring.*

Nupur tried to walk quietly but the could not manage it as the dry leaves on the

ground made a crackling noise under her boots. she stopped to get her bearings &

listened for any noise , any disturbance that could indicate the where abouts of

Mayank & the forest guards , but all she could hear was her heart beating like a

drum.

Nupur started walking again ,trying to look for the fluroscent paint that Mayank

had shown her the day they had come for the hike. Spotting the paint glowing on

the trunk of a tree, she moved towards it. Suddenly two hands came out from

behind the tree , a arm held her around the waist & one palm covered her mouth.

Nupur started struggling ,trying to dislodge the arm & the hand .

she was pulled in the bushes against someone's chest. A low voice murmured in her

ear , " shhh Nupur!!! stop struggling its me Mayank."

Nupur turned her head & saw the familiar chocolate brown eyes. Mayank let go

off her ,she threw her arms around Mayank's neck & hugged him close,sobbing in

relief. Mayank hugged her back & murmured in her ear ," follow me but try to be

really quiet."

Mayank entwined his fingers with Nupur's & started walking stealthily inside the

jungle . Nupur walked with him , stepping on exactly the same spots Mayank had

stepped, thus avoiding the dry leaves & their crackling noise.

* I think we've reached some where near the stream* thought Nupur * i can hear

the bubbling water.*

suddenly Mayank stopped under a tree & Nupur collided with him.He looked up &

signaled. A harness tied with a rope came down from the tree,Nupur was amazed,

she looked up could not see anything due to the dense leaves .

Mayank put the harness around Nupur's shoulders & tugged at the rope. Nupur

was hauled up slowly & carefully. When she reached at the top Nupur was helped

up the machan ( a kinda platform built on trees ) by Deviprasad kaka. with in a

few minutes Mayank too climbed up the machan.

Nupur wanted to ask Mayank so many things ,which Mayank guessed looking at

her face & murmured," not now Nupur!!"

so Nupur kept quiet & looked around , the machan was sturdily built with lots of

hay spread on it make it comfortable to sit. there were some water bottles kept on

one side from which DP kaka offered her one, there appeared to be some food as

well. they had provisions for a long wait.

* i must let Shilpa aunty & Mona know , i am here with Mayank & safe, otherwise

they might worry.* thought Nupur. She took out her cell from the pocket &

Mayank asked her under his breath ," what are you doing Nupur?"

" i am msging aunty that i am safe , with you & not to worry." replied Nupur .

" i have already sent her msg about that but you can send too , if it makes you feel

better.just put your cell on silent mode." Mayank said.

Nupur was surprised to hear this,but did as Mayank said. In a few minutes the

cell vibrated in her hand signalling the incoming SMS. * Mayu had sent me a msg,

you be careful Nupur beta.*

Nupur looked at her watch , they had been up there on the

machan for almost 3 hours ,doing nothing but waiting for something. since

Mayank forbade her to talk ,there was no way of knowing what was happening &

what they were waiting for. slowly Nupur's eyes became accustomed to the

diffused light inside the jungle. Suddenly they could hear a trilling sound which

appeared to be some sort of bird, but hearing it Mayank & DP kaka became alert.

Mayank held Nupur's hand & said " that was my signal, Nupur you stay up here

with kaka, just stay quiet no matter what happens, you are safe here. i will be back

in some time. " Nupur held his hand for a few moments & looking in his eyes said,

" please be careful Mayank." " I will be , don't worry." Mayank said & looked at

kaka ,who had moved towards the edge of the machan & was looking down.

Mayank took advantage of the opportunity & kissed Nupur's forehead, before

climbing down the tree as stealthily as he had come up.

Nupur sat there in a trance, had Mayank really kissed her or did she

imagine it. She could feel the warmth of Mayank's lips on her forehead, slowly she

touched her forehead & smiled dreamily. Then she snapped out of her reverie as

she remembered the current situation , so she carefully moved to the edge of the

machan next to kaka ,who was looking down intently. Nupur tried to look too but

could not see anything. Kaka handed her a pair of binoculars & pointed to the spot

he wanted her to watch. Nupur watched the spot Kaka pointed to & now she could

make out some shapes , it appeared 2-3 ppl stood there concealed in black blankets

or covers or something.

There came another trilling call but it was entirely different from the first one. the

ppl hiding behind the trees appeared to become alert. Kaka pointed to another spot

& Nupur saw Mayank hiding behind a bush. she waited with bated breath. now

came a call like that of a fox . then there was the crackling sound like the dried

leaves were walked upon. Nupur trained her binoculars towards the sound & saw

a group walking in single file. Nupur could see axes slung across their shoulders.

the axes glinted in the dull light. * what if these thugs decide to use their axes *

thought Nupur , her heart beating fast at the thought. * oh God , please keep every

one safe. help them capture the culprits without blood shed.* she prayed.

As soon as the group reached under the tree ,the machan was perched on , Nupur

saw a flurry of movement, ppl came out from behind the trees surrounding the

group from all sides. before the thugs could do anything ,they were covered with

heavy blankets & were tied with ropes swiftly.

Nupur was amazed at the speed with which the forest guards & Mayank's ppl

worked to capture the thugs, she let out a relieved breath ,looked skywards &

closing her eyes thanked God for keeping everyone safe.

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hope you all like it.😊
waiting for your comments as usual.😊
Edited by .SA. - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
I love being first🥳 its seriously been ages no since it was me; finally have my position back🤣🤣 your note again saying you don't have to feel guilty about not being able to update on time🤗🤗 especially after all that has happened in the past few days🤗🤗 and plus your update as usual made up for it😊 Love the entire thing like always. It was fast packed and entertaining from the start until end. Again repeating; I adore the fact that Nupur isn't a SP AN😆 the minute she realized Mayank's life is in danger she rushed off herself which is admirable and completely our type😛😆 Their hug was beautiful <3 <3 i swear MN's first hug in the jungle replayed in my mind coz of your description made me all senti😔😆 and eeek the forehead kiss is amazing; especially Nupur's reaction to it i swear the way you built up the story at the end had me convinced that mayank would get injured or something😆 but then i got to the end and realized shubhu isnt a sadist thats me🤣🤣 Perfect end to the chapter; super glad everyone's safe and the thugs got captures😃😃
thanks for the PM🤗🤗
Edited by StrongHope - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Great update..
Thank god mayank is safe..
Continue soon and thanks for the pm..
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Posted: 12 years ago
It was awesome part...

Awesome...
Mupur and Mayank finally able to bade those culprits..
Loved the way Mayank pulled Nupur and let her safe place...

that's really an awesome part
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome updt
cont soon
thanks for the pm

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