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Posted: 13 years ago
Here is this week's update friends.😃

i hope you will like it. waiting for your comments . 😃



Part -5



Mayank stopped the SUV in the porch , got down , walked towards the passenger side & helped Nupur out. she gasped with pain as soon as her injured foot touched ground. she hobbled up the steps with Mayank supporting her . climbing even those 3 steps was sheer agony. Mayank helped her to the sofa & calling for Raghu kaka went towards the kitchen.
Nupur sat there looking at her foot & thinking gloomily* what a time to injure myself , how will i manage now.*
"bring all those things upstairs kaka." said Mayank coming back in the hall. he was followed by Raghu kaka.
"shall we go up to your room Nupur??" asked Mayank . Nupur looked doubtfully at her foot & the stairs . she just nodded her head uncertainly.
Mayank came towards her ,put one arm against her shoulders & other under her knees & picked up Nupur without any visible effort. Nupur was startled out of her wits.
" M.. Mayank !!! what are you doing ??" she stuttered. " what does it look like i am doing Nupur??" asked Mayank a little impatiently." i don't think you will be able to manage these stairs with your hurt ankle. so i am taking you up to your room. take some rest & we will put some ice on the foot . your foot will be as good as new soon"
"b..but..."trailed Nupur,falling silent as Mayank looked her in eyes. " but what?? you cannot manage it on your own , so that leaves Raghu kaka & me. i don't think we should ask Raghu kaka to carry you all the way up at his age. right?? " asked Mayank smiling naughtily. Nupur laughed at this.

as they reached the foot of stairs Mayank said smiling, " you can hold on to my shoulders Nupur. i don't bite, you know."
Looking at the winking dimple on Mayank's cheek Nupur put her arms around his shoulders hesitating a little. within a few minutes Mayank carried Nupur to her room . He put her down on her bed gently. then put a pillow behind her back & tucked one under her injured foot elevating it.

Raghu kaka knocked on the door & entered carrying a tray. the tray held an ice bag , a strip of tablets , water jug & two glasses.he put the tray on a bed side table. " Thanks Kaka." said Mayank . " may we have some tea ,kaka." " of course Beta , i will go make it then bring it up ." replied kaka.

Mayank settled at the foot of bed with the ice bag ,he put Nupur's injured foot on his knee & started applying the ice bag to the swollen area. Nupur felt a bit awkward but she refrained from saying anything because by then she knew how Mayank would react. the ice bag felt heavenly on her sore ankle. She just sat back & watched him do the job on hand with full concentration.
Kaka walked in holding a tray . he set it down & poured out two cups ,handed one each to Mayank & Nupur. Mayank put away the ice bag . Kaka picked up a plate that held sandwiches ,offering them to Nupur ,he said " here bitiya ,you need to eat something ,before taking the medicine . you should never take meds on an empty stomach." Nupur picked up a sandwich thanking kaka. Mayank did the same. they had their tea ,talking about general things.
Mayank took out a pill from its wrapper & gave it Nupur along with a glass of water. " you take some rest now Nupur , i am going down. just call if you need anything." "thanks Mayank !!! for every thing ,for taking care of me." said Nupur. Mayank waved it off & picking up the tray which held the tea things walked out.
* can he get any better ??* thought Nupur looking at him . * i wonder why is he still single?? girls around here must be blind or something.* then laughing at her own thoughts Nupur pulled up a sheet over & settled down.closing her eyes she went over the list in her head ,about the articles she wanted to write after her sabbatical.

with in a few minutes she drifted between the stage of sleep & awareness.
she felt a hand on her forehead pushing back her hair & a voice murmuring softly," i will always be there for you Nupur." she sighed in her sleep unable to decide whether it was real or her dream again.
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Edited by .SA. - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
res...😳
u know SIS...main yeha ane se pehle apke ff ke bare mein soch rahi thi ke i got ur PM...😆😳

Awesome update SIS.
loved it lodss
loved it to d coreee
loved d way Mayank took care of Nupur..
he is really a Sweetheart...
n abt Mayank carring Nupur in his arms without any effort...Sigh!!!
u know dat is one of the things i like abt Real Mayank i.e Arjun..d way he used to carry Nupur i.e Rati di i used to loveee dat sooo much...
it was alwwaysss a sight to watch..dream n sigh for...Gosh!!!
i really miss dem badly...
loved it lodsss
n han abt ur last line...
well...as for now i actually blv ke dat wans't any Dream dat was REAL n dat person was Mayank...😉😳😍
n well as i said earlier mujhe yeh lagta hain ke Mayank knew Nupur from longgg back n somewhere m feeling its a story related to re-incarnation...😳 well m super excited to read more n dat too asap from u...coz its always a treat to read from u...
i loved ur writing...
loved it lodsss
love u SIS...🤗🤗🤗
Edited by -Anila- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Short n very sweet update. loved it so much.
Irum. thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
I WAS thinking about this FF and wishing k aj update mil jaye . Very nice part.Aww...Mayank carried her in his arms to her bedroom and then taking care her foot.It was very beautiful
😍

I was thinking about this in last update.
And last main Mayank hi tha na who was caressing her.It was not a dream.
Thnx for pm.
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Posted: 13 years ago
just loved it to core...
the part were he said raghu kaka cant pick her up was amzing...
his care n affection.. n her thoughts ..lol..loved it...

but the mystery remains there...
loving it..
cont soon
Zehnaseeb thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
sorry for late reply, was in the middle of it but mum took me out shopping😆
as usual its plain brilliant👏 you have a very unique writing style which shows clearly in your writing😃 eek the lift reminded me of sajda😍😍 theres something super magical about them😍 especially the ones between MN😳 her awkwardness was well portrayed; i like the fact that despite the little bit of attraction she's conscious enough of such things👍🏼👍🏼 his answer to it was clever and naughty too😆😆 Mayank taking care of her was my fav bit from the update😊 its a pleasant thing that he knows hospitality😊 again not a very big deal😆 but nowadays the big bad boys are everywhere so😆 love how you leave the end as suspense each time👏 it makes readers want more👍🏼
keep up the fab job🤗🤗 love it🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome updt
loved the way mayank taking care of nupur
cont soon
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update Shubs ...
loved it :)
--Sanchu-- thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow Mayank caring Nupur in his arms...😍
*ok now coming back from my dreamland*

amazing update...i loved the way mayank took care of nupur and initially after resisting a bit Nupur gave in coz she knew how mayank would react to that...Superb!!
but again this update brings me back to where i started...the mystery!! yaar this mysterious affairs are killing...!! what is it that connects reality to the dreams nupur ????
please continue soon :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
Ye FF ke sath tu kya mystery kar rahi mere toh dimag ke bahar hai🤓Mayank knows her pehle se kya😲Kya locha hai bhai😕Btw while reading these lines I was like wow Mayank dude good going👍🏼😆

She just sat back & watched him do the job on hand with full concentration.

It was a fantastic UD shubz:)And thanks a ton for msging me whenever u UD...it helps alot considering mai ol nai apati pms padhne😳

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