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Posted: 13 years ago

#111

It was utterly beautiful Shubhu😳

I am totally loving the pace of story😃

Seems like u did alot of research in tea plantation😆 Toh kab bula ri hai ghar pe chai k lie?😆

Like I said earlier I loved the dream part😉 but that doesn't mean I didn't enjoy the reality😆 Mayu is good wid kids i see😲(Unlike our Mayank of MJHT😆)

Lovely ud re keep writing🤗

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anuja

@Annu111

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Posted: 13 years ago

#112

Originally posted by: .SA.
Hello friends!!!
after writing about 13-14 OSs on my fav couple Mayank-Nupur i am venturing into a new territory for me FF. i hope all my readers will support me in this too.😊
i promise i will try to update this FF in a timely manner.😆
so guys here is the Intro of my FF.

Dreams...

She woke up with a start. her heart was beating fast,mouth was dry & she was sweating. she picked up the glass of water from her bedside table with shaking hands. she forced herself to sip the water slowly . gradually her shakes stopped ,breathing turned normal . she got out of her bed , opened the door to the terrace & stepped out on it. braced her hands on the railing she looked at the sea .
The dream had come back. it could not be called a nightmare ,but it always left her a bit jittery as she always managed to wake up from it.those deep chocolate brown eyes that looked at her with so much love & longing, they had a untold power on her even in her dreams.
she had been having that dream for as long as she could remember. at first just flashes , but as she grew up she could remember the details of it.
these days it came with vivid details , she had started a journal of sorts where she jotted down the things she remembered from her dreams.
*its high time i did something* she thought.
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hey shubhu🤗

congoz 4 ur first ff

i know i m bhery bhery late 4 it but still😳

arre waah kya solid suspense wali starting hai👍🏼

chocolate brown eyes haan☺️

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anuja

@Annu111

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Posted: 13 years ago

#113

the first update is awesome😊

loved the way u described the natural beauty of the place.

love u 4 bringing in shilpa aunty❤️hope to read cute trio moments later in this ff😃

i like the way u have portrayed nupur's character..she seems dedicated to her work😊

and mayank's painting🤪kash ki mai bhi dekh pati😆

and the anger reflected from the painting reminded me of the sadu and akdu mayank of initial mjht days😍

ps:i loved the room which shilpa aunty gave nupur to live😆i love room with balconies when the surrounding is full of natural beauty..kash ki mera room aisa hota🤣