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Posted: 13 years ago

Shubhs !!! kitti chhan lihites tu 👍🏼*pat on your back*

Mayank is total sweetheart loved the part when he carried her (reminded me all MN lifts😍) and his words you can hold on to my shoulder I don't bite u know…. Gosh this guy😆

Is this story about pichle janam inspirde by arjun's fav song "tera mujhse hai pehle ka nata koi , yun hi nahi dil lubhata koi…😆😳

And last line seems real to me not dream ………haina😳

Update soon

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Posted: 13 years ago
very nicely written, SA ... liked it 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
Omggg...it was just sooo...
😍😍
Nupur is sooo right...How can he be still single..girls must be definitely blind there🤣
The whole atmosphere of him carrying her up was sooo roamntic..😍
Loved it😍
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Posted: 13 years ago
Lovely ff...a very interesting concept...seems a re-incarnation of both...looking forward 2 further updates...pls continue soon 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey friends !!! first of all i would like to apologize for not giving you all a update ,last week. i was not well ,there fore could not type it out.
here i am with the update now & hope it will make up for the lapse.😳😳

like always the bit in pink is Nupur's dream.




Part-6


She opened the lock to her flat, flipped off her sandals & flung her hand bag

on a sofa & began pacing the room agitated. she just had an altercation

with some of her friends.what had started as a bit of leg -pulling had

suddenly taken an ugly turn & ended in a fairly heated exchange .some

things were said ,which disturbed her immensely.she paced some more

,thinking dark thoughts. then she picked up her hand bag & took out her

cell. *i will just call him up* she thought * i will feel better when i talk to

him .* " the number you are trying to call is out of the coverage area" .

announced an annoying voice .

*damn it all !!! * she thought * this is the worst day of my life .* she felt

totally alone & ugly doubts started to raise head .

Nupur sat on a rock ,her feet immersed in the pool

,created by the water fall ,the one near the Oakwood estate. she sat there

lost in her thoughts, throwing pebbles in the pool. she was very disturbed

with the dream she had the night before. It had left her shaky. she'd

awaken abruptly & was unable to sleep for the rest of the night.

she had come down from her room listless & had a single cup of tea with

Shilpa aunty & excused herself from breakfast saying she needed some

excercise after lying around for a week with her twisted ankle.

somehow Shilpa aunty had sensed that she was disturbed & did not want

to talk ,so she had let her go without any pesky questions. *Shilpa aunty is

a very sensitive & sensible lady * thought Nupur * she knows when to pry

& when to let go.*

Nupur heard the crunch of gravel under someone's foot steps ,she turned

around to see Mayank walking towards her with a wicker basket in his

hand. she gave an uncertain smile & asked him," Mayank!!! what are you

doing here??" Mayank said ," well !! it depends upon your mood Nupur."

Nupur was confused ," m..my mood?? " she stuttered. " yes your mood. if

you are in a agreeable mood then you have a companion for the treat in

this basket." said Mayank ,raising the basket. " but if you would rather be

alone ,then i am just the delivery boy who brought you the most important

meal of the day ." he smiled at her charming her totally. " so what shall it

be Madame Nupur ?? a companion or just a delivery boy??"

Nupur was totally mesmerised.She was done with the brooding over the

disturbing dream, she decided. besides it would be ungracious & churlish of

her to send Mayank away after all the trouble he took for her.

" how can i send you away Monsieur Mayank, " said Nupur

laughing mischievously ," after all the trouble you took for me?? " now it

was Mayank's turn to be bewitched.He stood there looking at Nupur with

out blinking. Nupur got down from the rock & walked towards Mayank

,who was still staring at her, she waved her hand in front of Mayank's face

saying ," earth to Monsieur Mayank ,you are needed down here. " Mayank

came out of his trance & they laughed together.

They chose a spot near the pool to have their impromptu picnic.

they spread out the mat & took out the items. Nupur found that she was

really famished . they enjoyed the sumptuous parathas in companiable

silence. Mayank took out a thermos flask of tea & poured out two cups as

Nupur gathered the debris of their meal.

" so Nupur are you now ready to share ,what ever that was troubling

you??" asked Mayank in a simple & straight forward manner. Nupur took

the cup that Mayank offered, bit her lower lip & looked into the cup .

Should she tell him ,she was having very vivid dreams about him she

debated in her mind. she stole a glance at Mayank & saw he was watching

her patiently. she quickly looked away.

In the end she decided not to tell him about the dreams .she'd feel too

uncomfortable sharing them especially with Mayank. " nothing much

Mayank, could not sleep properly last night ,so was feeling restless &

thought the open air would do me good."said Nupur evasively.

as she was not looking at Mayank she completely missed the hurt feeling

that passed over Mayank's face. he guessed she was not sharing the truth &

that hurt him, but he schooled his feelings & decided to let the matter drop.

"ok ,if you say so ." said Mayank," this is my favorite spot too. i come here

when ever i have some thinking to do."

Nupur was startled at Mayank's if you say so comment. she realised that

Mayank guessed her evasion , she felt a bit uncomfortable.but she took her

cue from Mayank & let the subject drop.

" Nupur i am off to the plantation now. we could go for that hike i

promised you tomorrow if you feel up to it." said Mayank.

Nupur beamed at him & said " of course !!! i am 100% fit now. lets us do it.

i really want to see the woods ."

" its a date then." said Mayank " i am going back now , want to come or do

you want to spend some more time here??"

Nupur's heart skipped a beat at Mayank's Its a date. as she walked along

with him towards the mansion ,she started to think what a real date with

Mayank would be like.
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here it is friends. waiting for your comments.😊
Edited by .SA. - 13 years ago
Irum. thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
Very nice update.
Nupur again had his dream.
Yaar lgta hai yeh mystery meri jaan le gi.
Mayank knew that she ws disturb bt felt hurt when she did not shared.Mayank understood her.Jese naa jane kitne saalon se janta ho.
Kahin in dreams k pichey Mayank ka haath to nahi.
Plz take care of ur self.
Thnx for pm😊

Edited by Irum. - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
BRILLIANT :)

however i wouls now want to know the reason behind nupur's dreams and what secrets it beholds
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Posted: 13 years ago
Another nice update 😃 I'm really excited 4 their 'date' ...:) continue soon n hope u r fine nw:)
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Posted: 13 years ago
nyc update shubhs!
excited for their date! <3
take care of ur health!🤗

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