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Posted: 13 years ago
this is going to be really interesting
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Posted: 13 years ago
Nice update shubhu...why Mayank does not want to show his paintings?
he is making himself mysterious...continue soon.
Edited by --Ruchi-- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
i am back with the update guys!!!😃

i would like to make it clear that i have never visited any tea plantation so my

account of it may have some mistakes. 😆😆 i request all of you to take it as literary licence & bear with me.😉😆

again the bit in pink is Nupur's dream.



Part-4



* They stood on the deck of a house which opened up to the beach.

She looked at the diamond on her finger shooting sparks in the light of

setting sun.yes!!! she was engaged & was so happy that she felt giddy . She

looked at him ,he stood at the table that held a champagne bucket & the

bouquet of blush pink roses he had brought for her.though he gave his full

attention to popping open the champagne ,she could see joy in his deep

eyes,his body language. the cork opened with a muffled pop & he poured

the champagne in two flutes. he offered one to her & they toasted each

other saying *to us!!!*

she sipped a little champagne then put it aside , then put her arms around

his neck. hugging him she put her head on his chest, he held her close with

one arm.

"you know ,i really don't need this champagne , i am drunk with joy." she

said. He smiled at her words ,sipping a bit from his flute.

" how do you manage to do it every time?? how did you decide on this

setting ,this place ?? how did you know i will love it??" she said in a muffled

voice as her face was hidden in his chest.

He put aside his flute then & holding her closer raised her face to look in her

eyes. " i plan on doing this only once in my life,so it damn be perfect. " he

said in an amused voice. her eyes widened & she scuffed him on his chest.

now he laughed out aloud," were you expecting some filmy,cheesy reply

princess?? sorry to disappoint you." " no my lord!! " ,she teased back," i

know you are incorrigible." They held each other close & laughed .*

their laughter rang in Nupur's ears ,she smiled in her sleep & hugged a

pillow close.

Nupur came down to the dining room & saw Mayank ,Shilpa aunty were

already there.

She greeted them & settled down to have

her tea. she was feeling strangely euphoric ,*may be it is the effect of that

dream *she thought.Nupur stole a glance at Mayank & saw he was

watching her with those deep intense eyes. she could not bear the intensity

in them & looked away.
" what are your plans for the day Nupur beta ?? " asked Shilpa. " i

am going out for the day for a fund raiser committee meeting & will be

back by evening. you can either stay here or go with Mayu . he will show

you around our tea plantation." Nupur perked up at that. " i would love to

visit the plantation ,if its alright with Mayank." she said . Mayank gave a

little shrug & said " by all means. you can come with me . we will leave in

another 30 mins . wear your most comfortable shoes.as we will have to

walk quite a bit."
They started driving towards the plantation in a spiffy

SUV.Mayank pointed out various things to Nupur. The awkwardness

brought on by the eyelock on breakfast table was forgotten.Soon they

reached the plantation. its was spread over a vast area , grown on slopes

in neat rows. Mayank explained to her that the plants were kept waist high

for easy plucking. he plucked a bud surrounded with two leaves .

"this is what makes the tea leaves. These buds and leaves are called flushes.

A plant will grow a new flush every seven to fifteen days during the

growing season, and leaves that are slow in development always produce

better flavored teas." informed Mayank." There are two major objectives in

the processing of tea. The first is to preserve the tea by driving most of the

moisture from the leaves. The second objective is to bring flavor out on the

surface of the leaves so that it can transfer quickly to the water during the

steeping process. After picking, the green leaves are spread out to wither

between 12 to 18 hours. During the withering process, the leaves lose most

of their moisture, becoming soft and pliable. This allows the leaves to be

rolled without tearing. Rolling breaks the membranes of the leaves

releasing the natural juices to collect on the surface of the leaf. After rolling,

the leaves are kept into large, cool, humid rooms to ferment. The

fermentation process produces essential oils from the natural juices. The

essential oils give each black tea it's characteristic aroma and flavor. The

fermentation process must be stopped at the point where the aroma and

flavor of the tea have fully developed. This is done by firing the leaves in

large ovens. The essential oils dry on the surface of the leaves and remain

relatively stable until exposed to boiling water during infusion.

now i will stop ,before you go cross eyed with all this information

overload." said Mayank laughing.

" no, no!! its really fascinating . " said Nupur smiling at Mayank.

" want to walk down the slope ??" asked Mayank. " sure !!" said Nupur.

the women who were plucking the flushes gave them both curious glances.

Nupur turned around to look up the slope as they reached the

bottom & gasped ,it was a beautiful sight . rows upon rows of lush green

tea plants interspersed with women in colorful clothes plucking the leaves.

she clicked several photos . after a while they walked up the slope &

Mayank took her around to show rest of the operation.

" we employ 50 people ,and hire more on temperory basis if needed". said

Mayank. " these are their quarters ." Mayank pointed towards a group of

cottages with sloped roof. some children were playing outside them . As

soon as they spotted Mayank they shrieked with joy & ran towards him

shouting ," Mayank bhaiyya!!!"

Nupur moved away to avoid the stampede. soon Mayank was surrounded

by the children ,all of them talking to him at once. they were sharing their

day at school with him , each child was vying for Mayank's attention. He

too patiently listened to every one of them. This apparently was a routine

occurence thought Nupur smiling at the group. Mayank then reached in his

pocket & took out chocolates & started distributing them.

Nupur was startled by a distressed cry & turned around to see a chubby

little girl of about 4-5 years running towards the group ,afraid that she

might not get her share of treat. suddenly she missed a footing& pitched

forward ,starting to fall. Nupur immediately rushed to save the child ,she

caught hold of the girl but twisted her ankle in the process. " ouch!! " she

cried out. she had badly twisted her ankle & the pain was so sharp that she

sat down where she stood. The girl whom Nupur saved got scared & started

crying.

this got the attention of the group & they rushed towards them. some body

picked up the girl from Nupur's lap . " whats wrong Nupur ?? " asked

Mayank in a concerned voice. Nupur held her hurt ankle ," i hurt my

ankle badly ." she clenched her teeth against the pain. Mayank sat besides

her & took a look at her foot removing her shoe. He moved it slightly

earning a gasp from Nupur. " i don't think its fractured Nupur. just badly

twisted ." replacing the shoe on her foot. " can you get up ?? i will take you

home ." Nupur tried to put weight on her leg & gasped in pain. Mayank

then asked one of the kids to get a chair , who ran away to comply.

Mayank helped Nupur to the chair. with in a few minutes Mayank brought

the SUV where Nupur was & helped her in . they waved bye at the kids &

started back home.
Edited by .SA. - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Very nice update.I read it even before pm.You said u have never visited any tea plantation bt u described it very well.It shows u have done alot of research.Thank u for update
GOD BLESS U.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Wonderful update Shubu😊..
Nupur's dream sequence was really beautiful and fascinating..Luv the way u maintain the mystery surrounding the connection between Mayur..
And the part on tea plantations..u have quite done some research on it..I learned something new today😆..The first chapter gave me an impression that Mayank is a reserved kinda guy..but he's really sweet...I was expecting Mayu to carry Nupur all the way till his vehicle..but that would've been too awkward for them at this stage esp Nupur with all the mysterious dreams she is having..waiting to know what happened..update soon😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesum update shubhs!😃
well researchd... i felt as if i ws actually learning the tea processing!😆

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Posted: 13 years ago
lovely updt
loved nupur's beautiful dream
cont soon
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
gosh shubhu as usual its amazing👏👏 I'm in love multiplied by infinity with the dream sequences of Nupur😍😍 theyre beyond beautiful😃😃 and the way you describe them is great too👍🏼👍🏼 love Mayank Nupur's casual bond😊😊 i prefer these type of relationships rather than the super awkwardness etc😆😆 the tea processing bit was amazing; and i got to learn a lot too😃😃 loved the tiny bit at the end between mayank and the kids👍🏼👍🏼 i always wanted to see MayUr as parents for that specific reason; both were so warm towards young children would've been amazing to see how well they looked after their own😊 but as usual got nothing except horrible horrible track😵😵 won't mention which you know😉🤣🤣 love nupur saving the kid from tripping and getting hurt herself in the process, its very Nupurish; she was never the typical SP lead type of character; yet her heart was definitely in the right place😳
continue soon loved it🤗🤗
Edited by StrongHope - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
that was a lovely update Shubhi :):)
and seriously that was quite a bit of info on the tea plantations...:P:P
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Posted: 13 years ago
Nice update...loved it
thnx for the pm

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