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Posted: 13 years ago
#31
nice updt
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
#32
i can understand what you want to say
becoz at the time of reading not feeling to read

thanks for PM😃
nice update

what is your name😆
i just want to say you are beautiful writer and i have read your other ff also
you have portrray their emotion very beautifully😳
Good work👍🏼
keep it up😃
Edited by -JayaRC- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#33

wow!! loved it...


thanks for the pm..
continue soon..😃



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Posted: 13 years ago
#34
great part girl...i love how this is all progressing...update soon 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#35
nice update thanks for the pm 😛
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Posted: 13 years ago
#36
nyc updates ...
luvin it!
cont soon!
thnx 4 d pms!🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
#37
wow just read ur ff
loved alll d parts
plzzz update sooon 👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
#38
i am just loving it!!
Do continue soon
btw to be honest this ff is my fav out of all your previous ones😳
tc
and do pm me
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Posted: 13 years ago
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PART 5
( nupur back home- uncomfortable still around mayank - gunjan and sam patching up- nupur was supposed to go buy clothes)

Excel college- samrats cabin

samrat turning the paperweight..Mayank enter with gunjan.

"yeh lo mera leave letter. Tum shukla sir ko dedena. Maine unko inform bhi kiya hain aur next week ka timtable bhi daal diya hain. Samrat... tum sun rahe ho?" mayank sitting on the chair in front of him gunjan went and stood next to sam. samrat nodded

"kya baat hain? kisine kuch kahaan?"

samrat shook his head," nahin, Bas main soch rahaan tha ki hamaari actions ki, decisions ki kitne saare results hosakthe hain ." both M-G exchanged glances

"matlab"

" nupur ki ek decision ne hum sab ka life change kardiya na. "

"tum kya kehna chahrahe ho?ki di ne galthi ki?" gunjan asked.

"nahin...bas soch raha tha ki agar nupur ne aisa nahin kiya hota tho shayad hum dono aaj.." and stopped , gunjan was embarrassed...samrat looked at mayank who was also looking hurt.

"samrat , tumhe hum par gussa hone ka poore haq hain , hum logon ko tumhe bewaja sazaa nahin dena chahiye tha.." though it was mayank speaking gunjans eyes were saying the same.

"shayad..par main apni baat nahin karraha tha. hum teeno ko chodo ,nupur ki life kitni alag rahi hogi na ,teen saal mayank...teen saal tak.."

"samrat, tum kal raat bhi yahin kehrahe the. Par di teek hain. Aaj main subah uski saath shopping karke aarahi hoon. agar kuch hota tho wo mujhe zaroor batati. Usko thoda time adjust hone ke liye. Hain na jiju?"

mayank looked at her happy eyes , joy brimming out and nodded uncertainly. But samrat looked keenly at him and knew something was missing.

"ab chalo. Jiju ne di ke liye kuch gift liye hain, usko pick karke phir hum sab bahar chalenge saath mein." gunjan tried to pull sam from the chair . He smiling asked kahaan jaana hain chashmish? His phone rang.

"hello... Ji inspector... Haan chot mujhe hi lagi thi... haan medical reports bhi hain...okay sir...hum aajayenge kal Mrs Sharma ke saath ...KYA? " he had stood up" kab ...achaa ... Thanks inspector." mayank and gunjan looked at him questioningly .

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MN house front room

all three walked inside and gunjan called out for her Di. Nupur came out of the kitchen wearing a beautiful new salwar , plain red , short top types with black bottom and crepe dupatta and talking.

"tum log aagaye? Mayank mera dress dekho! Hum ne tumhaara saara paisa khaali kiya mayank. Waise main akeli nahin, gunjan ne bhi shopping ki. Abhi kahaan chalna hain?" she spoke continuously but her voice betrayed her- a slight tension, too fast rushing over her words and artificial.

"di tum teek ho?"

"haan gunjan , aur kitne baar poochogi? abhi dekho main tho mast hoon." nupur laughed artificially

"tum kab sudrogi nupur?" mayanks voice came out quietly.

"matlab? Ab maine kya kiya?"

"tumhe wahaan akeli jaane ki zaroort kya thi?" he asked her his voice slightly raising. Samrat immediately placed his hands on mayanks shoulders warningly.

Nupur looked from one to the other.samrat spoke up.

"inspector ne kahaan ki tum station gayi thi. Mujhe bulaane keliye phone kiye the."

" haan, tho kya hua samrat? "

"di tumne mujhe bataya kyun nahin? Main bhi chalthi tumhaare saath."

"tumhe tho college jaana tha na samrat se milne. Tho maine socha ki main chalijaathi hoon."

"nupur, inspector ne kahaan ki tumhe wahaan identification ke liye bhulaya tha." samrat

nupur didnt answer. And avoided looking at mayank. Gunjan placed her hand on nupurs shoulder and exchanged a glance with sam. Mayank stared at nupur questioningly.

" tho nupur, identification hogayi? Dhruv ki?" mayanks voice was steely.

" mayank, main nahin jaanthi thi ki wahaan dhruv hoga. Mujhe laga ki bas kuch sign karna hain aur chali gayi. Waise bhi tum sab kaam mein busy the... aur mujhe pata nahin tha ki samrat ko bhi wahaan aana tha. And by god mayank!" her voice had become shaky " ab kya mujhe har ek kadam rakhne se pehle tumhaare permission leni padegi? Gayi tho gayi. Problem kya hain?"


"problem yeh hain nupur ki tumhe yeh samaj mein nhain aatha hain ki tumhaare saath main juda hoon. Ki tumhe kuch bhi akeli karne ki zaroorat nahin hoti hain phir bhi tum karthi ho. Kyun? Kya tumhe bharosa nahin hain mujhpar?" mayank hadnt raised his voice but the whole air was filled with his displeasure.

he stepped forward towards her little angrily with his hands out and she immediately moved back ,back of both her hands shielding her face instinctively.

There was a pindrop silence as the action sunk in all their minds- gunjan was horrified, mayank looked like she had slapped him and samrat realised his suspicions had been right.

Nupur lowered her hands and herself became aware of her action. She recovered first and bristling said,

"aisi baat hain tho chalo teek hain maanlethi hoon .sorry. Aage se bolke jaaongi...waise bhi mujhe tho aadat si padgayi hain kuch bhi karne se pehle dhruv se permission lene ki . Kuch mushkil nahin hogi," she said looking at all three of them ," ab tho maaf karo," and stopping at mayank, " khush?" she asked forcing herself into a smile.

"di!!!" gunjan stopped her in a shocked voice.

" main mayank hoon nupur." his hurt voice came out . The unsaid words -main dhruv nahin hoon- hung in the air.

Nupurs eyes started filling up. Gunjan intervened and put her arms around nupur.

''jiju chodo na. Di keh rahi haina ki usko pata nahin tha. Its okay di. Koi baath nahin. Tum please rona mat "

mayank stared at her. She was not crying but quiet though her eyes had filled up. samrat said," chashmish shayad hamein ghar jaana chahiye. Chalo."

"nahin samrat..." gunjan held nupur closer," di , please. Subah se hum kitne khush the. Jiju aap bhi. Itna achha sa planning ki hain bahar jaane keliye. Abhi hum sab roke yahin baithe rahenge tho... di tumhine tho kahaan tha tumhe aaj chinese khaana hain."

"nahin gunjan , mera mann nahin hain. Tu samrat ke saath chali jaa."

"mujhe bhi nahin jaana hain gunjan."

"par di ,mujhe tumhaare saath jaana hain. Teek hain , chinese nahin tho..."

"japanese." samrat pitched in.

Gunjan glared at him but nupur didnt.

"samrat! Japanese kya hota hain? Di ko thai achha lagega."

" nahin chashmish. Bilkul nahin. thai?" by then it was clear that they were all trying to forget feeling bad , trying to be normal.

"please gunjan tu jaa. Mujhe bhook nahin hain."

"tho kahin aur chalthe hain. Movie?" gunjan asked.

" nahin disco!" samrat

"disco? Nahin."

"college." mayank added unexpectedly looking only at nupur. Sam and gunjan looked from mayank to nupur. She didnt say anything.

" great! Chalo. Jaise ki hum roz nahin subah nahin jaate college aaj shaam ko bhi jaayenge." samrat

"samrat , pata hain tum mujhe kiski yaad dilaarahe ho?" nupur asked him suddenly as she wiped her eyes and started moving out towards the door with gunjan.

" excel college ke cool dude samrat ki?!"

"nahin uday bhaiyya ki." she said and walked out. Gunjan smilingly followed her .

Samrat made a face at her, put his arm around mayank who also smiled ,pulling him along, went out.

all of them determined to make the day end good, bugged of feeling low all the time.

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hi hope this was okay. ive lost my parts 7/8 and ve to retype it---GOK where it went. anyway thanks for reading and for the comments.


Edited by np18 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#40
tht was soo nicee love it

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