mjht revisited 2 - Page 23

Originally posted by: kirti123

nice part😊

thanks a lot for replying . meant a lot to me

Originally posted by: pearl10

it was such a beautiful ending...!!

hope show main aisa kuchh hota.😔

mn scenes r hilarious and romantic...😆

loved it!

thank u so much for writing this. and come back with another mayur ff-ss!

payal_

your idea in the first place but im glad you liked it. thanks

Originally posted by: shafyyy

lovely update

thanks a lot for eplying. meant a lot for my confidence

Originally posted by: mn-maniac

nyc ff... gr8 work! 😊
i wud love to read more of ur work... i have an idea... n wud b glad if u cn work on it... plz write something on nupur's recovery track after dhruv's exit... i personally felt the everything after the mayur morning scene was dumb and insenditive in this context... nupur should have been shown settling down properly... there shud have been proper gunur, sanu n ofcourse mayur scenes where they all start a new life together... also i reaaalllyyy wanted the rest of the gang to be a part of all this... dia's character was very stupidly wiped out suddenly...!! dodo n benia should have been a part of all this... think about it...

thanks for replying
and yes i do agree with you on the bad handling of the track but there were some FFs already written on it, nice ones too.

will definitely keep that in mind if i feel the urge to write again

Originally posted by: Bhawna_arti

Lovly😊

thanks a lot for replying

Originally posted by: drfizaahmed

holi k baad nhi khatam ker sakti thi...oki...

i was so ejoying this one seems like MJHT going on ...it was so gr8 journey...

the last update...

n whn mayank said the thngs after nupur came from hospital was my favt...

but true i love adhiraj suhani previous update part too..lol

pls cum bcak soon with another MJHT revisted...

thanks for replying.
me too, i also felt like mjht is still going on.

and im glad you liked A-S parts .

Originally posted by: sumonetolub

i particularly loved this line:

"NUPUR," he replied a little irritatedly," dekho please jao. Itne din se maine apne books ko chooa tak nahin aur kal phir holi hain , tho phir time waste hojaayega"

"achha , itne din se mujhe bhi tho chooa nahin. Choona chodo meri taraf dekha tak nahin. Mujhe tho miss nahin karthe!" she said in one breath and stopped .

i loved that we finally got mayur romance...the dialogues were really good for that part...becuz it wasnt all the typical scenes/dialogues for romance...i could totally envision mayur saying that

thanks so much for being encouraging.
and im sososos glad you liked those dialogues bcoz they are my fav too.

Originally posted by: -Faria-

its beautiful ending dear
veryyy nice
mayur part was damn cute
finally everything is fine...
loved ur FF so much
plz do write more

thanks for replying and will try to write as well

nyc ending!!!
der r 2 fav scenes which i luvd d most...
1st ws when bauji addresses mayu as *mayank nd not as *woh ladka*
nd d 2nd is des lyns...
"NUPUR," he replied a little irritatedly," dekho please jao. Itne din se maine apne books ko chooa tak nahin aur kal phir holi hain , tho phir time waste hojaayega"

"achha , itne din se mujhe bhi tho chooa nahin. Choona chodo meri taraf dekha tak nahin. Mujhe tho miss nahin karthe!" she said in one breath and stopped .

dis is soo MNish...😳😍

waitin 4 more ff's😛
thnx 4 d pms!🤗

Originally posted by: -SupriyaluvsMN-

nyc ending!!!
der r 2 fav scenes which i luvd d most...
1st ws when bauji addresses mayu as *mayank nd not as *woh ladka*
nd d 2nd is des lyns...
"NUPUR," he replied a little irritatedly," dekho please jao. Itne din se maine apne books ko chooa tak nahin aur kal phir holi hain , tho phir time waste hojaayega"

"achha , itne din se mujhe bhi tho chooa nahin. Choona chodo meri taraf dekha tak nahin. Mujhe tho miss nahin karthe!" she said in one breath and stopped .

dis is soo MNish...😳😍

waitin 4 more ff's😛
thnx 4 d pms!🤗

thanks for replying .
and thats my fav s too.