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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: -Faria-


Priyaaankaaa i want to give u a tight hug...



i really loved dis longgg update- wiase jaida long bhi nehi tha- thoda aur long hoti tou triple maza a jati..-sacchi..
u were not satisfied with dis update???hey why??? hmm u know all best writers face d same prob. kabhi bhi apni writing se satisfaction nehi milti..:(

priyanka i loved this super duper, mind blowing update
u know after reading this part i wanted to read more and more and thats why i said kash thoda aur longgg hota...!!!

both maynk and nupur loved their family a lot.
they can do anything for them- and we already knw it..
Nupur- shilpa aunty,mayus dad, janki ji, tam , uday scene was very nice
r wah maynk was very excited abt lunch.
bcoz nups said today she will prepare lunch for them...
i loved nups and shilpa aunty convo at kitchen
nups was trying to solve the problem b/w mayus mom and dad.
and she want to see them hapy.. shilpa aunty promised her to give a chance to their relation.. and i m happy for it.
dining table scene was wonderful- pura family ek saath- it was a nice eeling n and then maynk praised nups -he said nups is a good cook...r a wah nups was blushing... lol lol

heheheheheh maynk wanted to see his wife a bit hatke i mean hot and sexy. ye mayank bhi na kabhi nehi sudhrega- lirt karma tou koi usse sikhe..lol lol

wow nupur wore black saari and was looking damn pretty and mayu was mesmerizing by her beauty. R a ye tou hona he tha. U know u reminded me red carpety scene of arti- kya lag rahi thi ye dono black main'''

OMG party scene was fabulous'.

Maynk speech was very nice' he really respect nups '.mayu slapped dia. Accha hua she deserve it'

I really loved the way mayu handle the whole situation

And oil message+ kiss part was the best part of this ff. haye I m stil drooling on mayur dream land..

Priyanka u really very good writer ' the way u describe the whole thing I just love u ..hehehehehehehe..

BY GOD bahut accha laga ye udate parkar- aur sabse jaida accha laga ye jankar ki they r falling for each other.. yeee'.

Lol lol lol I think ' u r getting irritate with my long comment- but I couldn't control myself. Ab kar diya tou kar diya.. lol lol..

Waiting for next update'plz isbar jaida intezar maat karwaye '

Take care

Big Hug to you as well Faria for such a nice, detailed long comment.. I love it ...
I m glad you liked it ... yes both of them are falling for each other..Thanks for reading it..
Will update sooonnn
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Annu_Arti_Mayur

Priyankaaa...

u r the second person for whom i m using this emoticon...😳
GOD priyank...u r saying plz don't get tired reading it...bcoz its a long update...😲...😳...but i tu wished dat this update could never end for me...🤔😆
i was just going...like this reading this part...🤪😍😍
OOOMMMGGG Priyankaaa...it was such a beautiful part sweetyyy...😳😍
they have started talking ...behaving just like a hubbyyy n a wifeyyy...🤪
n they r unaware of this that they r actually behaving like a Couple...☺️
Mayank bilkul sahi keh raha hai...CONDITIONS change krni paregi BOSS...😉😆
the morning scene n there staring...🤪...made me blush...☺️😍😆
or mayank miyan tu flirt bhi kr rahey hain...n nupur begam ko is se koi bhi problem nahi hai...that he is flirting 😲...GUD...actuallyyy Very GUD...😳😆
awww...he complemented her abt the lunch...that he likes it...😳
n Nupur Removed the Pillows...hmmm...achi baat hai...its gud for them...😉😆
n mayank again late n drunken...😳 nupur ko is barey mein kuch krna pareyga...jaldi...😳😆


n mayank can't say NO to her...😳like he Couldn't say anything when she was applying Oil n massaging his Hairs...😳😍
omg she kissed him...😳😍
n Myank is being dependent on her...😲
ye wahi mayank or nupur hain na...😲*Rubbing my Eyes*...ye dono tu apni conditions kab ki Bhool gaye hain...mujeh lagta hai...🤔😆
acha sabak sikahaya mayank ne diya ko...n he was holding her hand all the time to support her...😳😍
i felt so gud when he said...we r a COUPLE...😳😍
n cherry on the cake was when he said...😳


his award is more special to me because I m receiving this infront of MY WIFE " Mrs Nupur Mayank Sharma" , I want you all to meet my beautiful wife Mrs Sharma


awww...🤪he is a sweetheart...😳
he held her by waist...while talking to media...☺️...naughty mayank sharma...dance pe chance maring...😉😆
the answers he gave...to the reporters...👍🏼😳
diya ko apni insult karwa kr sukoon nai aya shayad...😳 jo phir a gai...krwaney...🤔
well mayank hai na...😉always there for his BEAUTIFUL WIFE...😳😳
he was angry but nupur ne usay manay k liye han keh di k wo chaley gi...us k saath...😳
a place...where no one accept them...☺️
nupur usay samajhnay lagi hai...or mayank us ki sunnay laga hai...😳
well lets see...how they move there relationship nw...😉as both want to terminate those conditions...😉
an extremely BEAUTIFUL UPDATE Priyankaaa...😳👏👍🏼⭐️
i just LUVD it...❤️
n u r such a sweetheart...to give such 2 long updates at a time...😳❤️🤗
just continue soon sweetyyy...i m just eagerly waiting 4 the next part...😳
Annu😳🤗


Annu Big hug to you .I m loving your details comment.. so sweet of you..thanks for liking it ..Will update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: tukun2009

sorry was busy so couldnt comment i am really sorry but i read ur ff regularly i wanted to post all the comment togethe had already written and then it got erased😭 really sorry i promise i will comment regularly coming to ff chapter 13-16 were amazing👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏be it the meeting😊 their weding thir life after marriage.everything was super😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊na na na karte they are living married life😆😆😆😆😆well coming to the latest update.what a update👏loved every bit kya sabak sikhaya diya ko well she deserved it glad that mayank was suporting nupur😊hope they confess their love soon aur diya kabhi unke zindagi me na aye😡😡😡sorry for short comment.but seriously ur update are becoming best day by day.u have become a star⭐️⭐️⭐️ believe me.pls cont soon thanks for pm

Tukun thanks for liking the update n ur feedback... I m glad you liked the update,... feedback from you people does help a lot ...Will update sooon 😃
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: kirti123

wow loving the way mayur are feeling for each other

both the parts were amazing
finally mayank showed dia her place
fab ya continue soon
waiting to read the next parts 😊

Kirti.. thanks for liking it ...Will update sooon 😃
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: dj_adnanss

Priyanka it's a beautiful update and liked everything about the update..good to see both are changing and are ready to give a chance to their relationship...

Thanks for the pm...only thing i didn't get it in the update was when Nupur said to Mayank "BTW Pro and Personal lifes are different from one another and she has never experienced such thing in a real life" just want to know what has it to do with her profession??..
and a small request...take time for the next update as i am not that much active😆

DJ thanks for liking it 😃..
I think When Nupur said Professional n personal ... she meant that She is not shy in Professiona llife n mayank found her arroagant when he met her but now a days he find her blsuhing n gettin shy .. reason is Nupur is shy in persoanl lif
When she said she ever expereince that in personal life , she meant being with guy so close..
Hope ist make sense 😆😆😆
Well DJ i update once a week ..Try to be active more ..if i delay more than i will forget kya likhna hai 😆😆😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
Thanks Rumki for liking it ...😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
so sorry for late reply Priyank.
i was so busy.
bt just tell me, why u dint satisfy with this update???
it was sooo gud yaar...u knw, i hv read this update uncountable times ... specially mayur scenes ...they wr magical.
i just love love love this update.
so now dey both r falling for each other...
love d morning scene ... so nice ... nupur was all red ...
poor mayank ... he was so frustated k wo nupur ko kiss nhi kar paya ... lol
nupur was too innocent ... usse to romance ka R bhi nhi pata ... lets see mayank kya karta hai ...
he's master in romance after all ...
u knw, i love headache scene the most.
it was so beautiful ... d way nupur took care of him ... it was so nice to watch.
poor mayank ... nupur ne bina permission k usske reshmi balon ko chu lia ... aur oil bhi laga dia ... lol ... bechara mayank ...
this scene was so lil, but i love this scene...i can tell u why ... bt i just love this scene.
like morning scne ...hayyy , nups experienced her first kiss from her husband..
lovely ...
i like d way the story procedding ... just loved it.
like d party ... n love what mayank did to dia
she deserv more than it ... mayank ki shadi ho gyi ... phir bhi abhi tak uske piche pari hui hai ... disgusting ...
n tam also dint tell her anything to stop ... both sisters r same ... shamless ...
accha hua mayank ne dia ko thappad mara ... mere tarf se do-char aur lagana chiye tha ... how dare she called nupur gold-digger ????
nt nupr... she's d one gold-digger ...
waiting for mayur special party.
r they going to beach???? plz no ... plz sent them somehwere else ... like firmhouse
n plz put lil romance btwn them if possible.
part>B always ur strong point ...n here again u proved it.
continue soon.
thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 14 years ago

First time i m writing romantic line for mayank and nupur in this story and i have struggled at lot , i had to do research before writing, hope you guys will like this update, if not than please do not hesitate to give your negative feedback also, 😆😆

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Chapter 17

Before leaving ,maynak quickly made a call to someone without telling Nupur ,Its around 9.00 PM at the night, Mayank is driving to his favourite place n his beautiful wife is sitting beside him quite , his anger has gone down bit but still very unhappy with whole situation happened an hour ago, he just wanted to forget n suddenly he heard melodious voice coming from driver seat , he turned his face towards that side n saw the most beautiful pleasant site and that was his WIFE ( now a days he prefer using WIFE instead of Nupur). Mayank felt this whole atmosphere "long drive with Nupur "☺️was relaxing and romantic.

Nupur eyes were closed n her long black hair was flying with cold nice wind, he is hearing his wife I mean Nupur singing for the first timen realised "wow, my wife (mayank using my wife a lot now a da rather than Nupur ) has got the most beautiful voice " , nupur singing, Mayank looked at wife n cound not believe how beautiful she is , looking so elegant in black saree, mangal sutra, chuda & sindoor , Nupur was looking so angelic tonight with smile on. Mayank is definelty falling for her, her voice, her lips, her hair, her eyes, her body , he is faling for Nupur , he kept looking at her n her lips ☺️while driving n getting distracted, suddenly nupur opened her eyes n saw him staring

Mayank aap aage dekhiye please, accident ho jayega, waise kya dekh rahe the?😊, she reminded mayank politly with a smile

Oh Sorry Nupur, hmm apnee tariff sunnane ka man kar raha hai, sach kahoo yaa jhooth😆, Mayank replied back to her with a cheeky smile while looking at her lips and thinking sach bata doo, kee main uske lips dekh raha thaa and just wanted to kiss her fuller lips, it was damn inviting at this moment when both of them are alone.

Well Mayank I prefer to hear Truth, tariff kijiye meri😛, Nupur looked at him smiling n thinking Mayank u r very handsome man and he is indeed a good man, aaj party main jo bhee mayank ne kiya family ke reputation ke liyye kiya, he was there for me all the time, I feel good to be your wife, do not know what our future hold but present is so beautiful n and I want to make my present happy

Nupur, main tumhe dekh raha thaa , you are looking so beautiful n omg ,you have got beautiful voice, am I not lucky jiskee wife 3 cheej main perfect hai gana, padhana aur khana ,☺️ Mayank said smiling at Nupur , ( nupur I m not telling to complete truth to you, Nupur I want you , I need you , I want to kiss you , I want to make love to you and I want to be with you , I m feeling incomplete without you, u r making me crazy , I want to spend my life with you, is this love , if it is than I am in love with you ).

Mayank, aap bhee naa, main bahut simple ladkee hoo, actually u r looking very handsome today, aaj ke din aapne yeh prove kar diya kee aap kitne ache bte, bhai aur pa...than Stopped, I m lucky, 😃Nupur said proudly to Mayank with a bright smile but mayank saw sadness in her eyes (Nupur thinking about mayanks "conditions" and him warning her not to expect anything from this marriage) .She is falling for him, she is in dilemma whether to forget about those conditions n open to mayank about her feeling, she fell in love with mayank more today because she saw real mayank who caring, loving n adorable , did not see any arrogance but angry bahtu hota hai )

Nupur u r very modest, you do not know anything about urself, ab mujhe hee batana padega , kyon waise media is very happy to see Mrs Nupur Mayank Sharma, thanks for coming , it was worth it 😛Mayank is thanking nupur for coming with her, thinking usee party kee wajah se to humdono sath hai aaj abhee, i need to take intiative, I want to be with her , uske liye bolna padega naa

Mayank its my pleasure mayank, I enjoyed it apart from one unexpected incident, she said it smiling thinking I wish I can jus give him one sweet kiss for today.

I m sorry for that whatever happend, very sorry😕...he is aplogising for the unexpected drama

Please aap sorry mat boliya, Jo hota hai uske peeche koi reason hota hai, btw dadi saw us on the news when u were receiving the award n very happy n relieved, thanks mayank for making my family happy , your family too,😃 they must be relieved by that newspaper news now

Nupur, you r forgetting something... It's our family,😃 he reminded her that, mayank is truly changing, this guy who never believed in love, marriage, commitment, family is actually is changing his views

Both of them want to express their feeling but something is stopping them, what is that? Someone has to take initiative, let see who does it ? Mayank n Nupur reached to their destination,Mayank wanted to surprise Nupur about his favourite place, so he closed her eyes n took her to final destination by walking little bit from the car parking area, one he reached their , asked Nupur to open her eyes, she just fell in love with this place on the first sight and hugged mayank, he responded by hugging her back,☺️ both of them were close to each other n can feel the closeness, Nupur just wanted to feel this intimacy n mayank was just shocked because he was not expecting sudden hug from nupur , he wanted that hug long time ago but thoda time laga diya Nupur ne , lekin hug mil he gaya, this hug was passionate n both of them felt it n realised how much they want each other, when nupur realised that she had been hugging mayank for past few minutes, moved away with blushing face, Mayank saw that n thinking why this girl blushes so much '..

Nupur kya hua, I thought kee hug se bhee aage kuch hune wala hai, btw I was not expeting this hug, I needed it badly n you gave me, feeling good , mayank said it smiling but he meant it because he needed Nupur, her touch, her support , actually he wanted her

Omg Mayank, this is so beautiful, I cannot believe I m standing infront of the sea, it's so calm peaceful. Thanks mayank for bringing me here, now I know why this is your fav place? Nupur was so excited to beach who bhee evening when sky is clear n bright

Did you like it, I m so happy Nupur, yeh ghar mere dadaji kee hai but we used come here for weekend when we were young, fir to bahut kam aane lage but I m come very often, this place gives me happiness. Mayank is opening up to Nupur a lot n sharing things

Mayank, this is your dadajis home, you know he is blessing you from wherever he is that is why u feel good and calmhere, thanks for bringing me here , I m in love with this place, Nupur said all these things with a full excitement

Wow, I m happy n glad that we came here😃, shall we start celeberating btw we can dance together what say nupur?, Mayank has already made plan kee kya karna hai

Yes Mayank, I want to celeberate your achievement on behalf of our family n want to say thank your for what you have done today for them , Mayank thanks again for everything u did it today

Nupur please stop saying thank you to your husband so many times, woh chane kee jhad per chad jayega, he put fingers on her lips☺️, hold her hand and take her to the table where housekeeper has arranged all things

Wow this is nice, I like the cake, shall we cut the cake n celeberate, Congratualtion Mayank, keep rising n achieving many more awards, 😃She said is proudly n gave her side hug

Thanks Nupur ,it means a lot to me , let cut the cake together, Mayank thinking Nupur I will make sure that you never get hurt by me,I just want you to be with me for ever 'I cannot think anything beyond this

When it comes to raising the toast, mayank realised his housekeeper has brought two glasses n champaign, he knows by now that nupur does not drink ,so he told nupur tat he is going to check juice inside for her than both of them can raise the toast.

Mayank, I can have champaign , do not worry about juice, just raise the toast according the tradition ,agar main drunk ho gayee to tum ho naa sambhalne ke liye, I trust you 😃, Nupur just smiled at mayank I said it .

Nupur r u sure, you do not have to change for others, Mayank is bit concerned about Nupur might get drunk

Mayank , bilkool shant , shall we start, bahut bolte hai aap😆 , Nupur is instructing her husband to do whatever told

Okay Nupur, jaisa aap kahe, they both laughed, 😆😆😆...

They raise the toste , n drank champaign to celeberate maaynks success n than mayank asked Nupur to join him for a dance, slow pace music was on in the house n you can hears becaue house was facinf towars beach. Nupur accepted mayank request n joined him for a dance, both of them are closely dancing n can feel each others presence n that feeling making them get closer more n more, but both of them are craving for more, after romantic little dance , mayank n nupur went near the beach the sat their pretty close to each other and both of them are staring at the moon happily 😃

Mayank, look at the moon, kitna sunder hain naa, so beautiful, ye jagah kitnee sunder hai, I m in love with this place, nupur said it to Mayank

I know Nupur, this place is as beautiful as you, do you know that, Mayank looked at nupur thought, this is such a beautiful place n I m with my wife n cannot even kiss her, Maynk kitna soch rahe hai

Mayant kya aap bhee naa, yeh bataiyyeh aak kiske sath aate the bachpan main yahan, Nupur wanted to know about mayank childhood, why is so distant to his father etc etc

You know when we were young, we used to come hereall of us ,our life was very beautiful until I was 6 yrs old, fir sab change hone laga,I used to see maa crying all the time, papa drunk, busy, n sometime shouting at maa,,,everything started changing, I hate my dad for making my mum so unhappy, pata nahi unke beech main kya hua, it did affected me a lot, I wanted to stay with my mum but he sent me to boarding n away from maa, I hate him for what he did to me, isliye I come here most of the time to feel good,he said and his tone changed from happy mood to sad mood stragt away n he stood up to ready to go

Mayank, do you want to see your mum happy,? she just asked while sitting on the floor

Ye kaisa question hai, I live for my mum, I will do anything for her n her happiness, Why did ask this question😕? He was asking this by looking at nupur with confused mind

If you love your mum n want to see her happiness so please spend sometime with your father, that will make her happy, Nupur answered n stood beside him to see his reaction

Nupur, I have told you I do not like discussing about sad part of my life, r we here to discuss that, if you are interested in discussion that we better leave now? 😕, he always get annoyed whever someone discuss about them, that how he has become

Acha sorry mayank, ab nahi karoongi, Mayank aapko gussa bahut aata hai, calm down😕 but I still want to continue this celeberation before we leave from here, Nupur knew mayank gets disturb with the discussion n changed the topic, she has decided something to make this celeberation bit special for mayank

If you want to continue this celeberation than I want something from you while putting his finger oh her lips, r u ready for that 😳, Mayank winked at her n asked her politly by pulling her very close to her n he arm moved slowly to her waist

Hmm, Mayank tell me what you want,aaj aapne jo kiya mere liye aur hamari family ke liye , uske bad I wont say no, that will be your gift, 😳Nupur knew mayanks intension now n happy he wants the same also😳

Okay Nupur rather thanasking, why don't I show you by demonstrating 😳and than he pulled her more closely and nupur saw his bright face, their direct eye contactfor the first time, she felt shy. Mayank cupped her face in his hands and brought her face more closer to him, she can feel he warm breath, he kissed her forehead slowly to give comfort to start, Nupur was shievering with mayanks lips touching her forhead, she resposed back by hugging him more tight, mayank got the respoonsce he wanted n felt happy to know that Nupur wanted the same, than he kissed her eyes n said u have the most beautiful eyes , I fell in love with your eyes since day one , nupur could not say anything , she was expericing all these first time in her life and feeling special,☺️ Mayank is making sure her first passionate kiss from her husband should be special n memorable always😳 , then Mayank leaned near to her lips (very close from hers) and said Nupur I have been wanted to kiss you when we were fighting since day one and he then he placed his lips on hers, only to receive an equal response from her, both of them seems responsing equally at with the passing moment n kiss becaome more passionat and it only stopped when Nupur felt " she can't breath anymore! ☺️. Mayank was looking at her smiling n asked her "Nupur are okay" with a naughty smile but did not get any answer because she is still trying to breath after her passionate kiss from her husband, Nupur just experienced the best most beautiful moment of her life.

Nupur, how was the first kiss from your husband😉, You seems still breathless, not we need to sort breathing problem while kissing so we can kiss bit longer and for that we should kiss more often,😆 You see "Pracitce makes perfect",😳 he was amazed to see his wife blushing so much and she is still very shy to look at Mayank directly, Mayank knew she will take sometime to speak to he decided to continue to open about his feeling to nupur

Nupur, I need to tell you something very important, I have to do it, aaj se acha din nahi ho sakta, he cupped her face again so she can see him face to face, than he continued..Nupur Mujhe tumse pyaar ho raha hai, I m falling for you ,You are very special in my life Nupur, I just want to be with you , I started loving you , I do not know what to say as I m not good in expressing my feeling ,in one line " I WANT YOU",☺️ I want to make you my wife completely today, Mayank just said it , I think that's what he wanted, he is feeling relieved after opening up , Nupur please say something , I want to hear what you want but I m going crazy for you?

Nupur looked up n decided to speak to mayank because she wanted the same " Mayank you made me feel special today,our first kiss was so magical and special n I am glad I got that from the person I started liking☺️, I have fallen for you inspite of knowing all those conditions😕, I could not control myself not liking you, you r indeed very special person in my life☺️ . I just want to live for today n I think your closeness, support, loving n caring nature make me decide to go ahead with this relationship although I do not like your anger side

Suddenly Mayank realised his conditions and starte laughing "Nupur I was fool to discuss all those conditions😕, can we erase those conditions and discussion😃, us samay mujhe maloom nahi thaa kee main dunia kee sabse best ladkee se shadi kar raha hoo n that girl will make me go crazy😃, As you said we shud live for today😃, if our present is good than future will be good automatically, Nupur I was arrogant and full of attitude kind of guy, have u realised you have changed me, you made me responsible towards families tooo.😃

Mayank, aap sach kah rahe hai kya, do you really want to erase all those conditions😃,I have fallen for you after our marriege ,I m glad you r first man in my life and I can say proudly " you are right man😃" and she kissed him back on his lips by pulling him towards her and this time kiss was more of telling each other that " We both want to make this relationship work" n surrender each other,this time kisee stayed bit longer n but this time also she had to pull out after getting breathless, Nupur u need practice😆 , did not I told you , Mayank looked at her n kissed her gently on her neck n that made nupur insane n hugged mayank back tightly.. these two were having perfect romantic moment they have been waiting ...

Nupur , I want you , I want us to be one😳 , R u ready for this , BTW you are very good kisser but need practice to kiss bit longer 😳Mayank asked direct question to Nupur looking at her eyes , deepdown he wanted to hear YES from him

Mayank I want to be yours compeltly, its only you who can complete me ☺️,please give me sometime is that okay for you? can you wait , only few days,😕 and she kissed him back on his cheek this time and asked the question😳.

Nupur I can wait for you, jitna tumhe time lena you can take it, I will be waiting for that special day😳, I m happy as long as I can see you beside me , I want to be their for you whenever you need me 'Mayank comforted Nupur by giving another kiss on her lips but this time it was gentle kiss to her to assure that " main tumhare sath hamesha hoo😳"

" I love You "😳❤️☺️ , both Mayank n Nupur confessed their love by saying these three magical word " together by looking at each othes eyes with a smile on and hugged back by promising each othe that "soon we will be together as a husband wife☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️...

Edited by ..Priyanka.. - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: SujaLuvsMayur

so sorry for late reply Priyank.

i was so busy.
bt just tell me, why u dint satisfy with this update???
it was sooo gud yaar...u knw, i hv read this update uncountable times ... specially mayur scenes ...they wr magical.
i just love love love this update.
so now dey both r falling for each other...
love d morning scene ... so nice ... nupur was all red ...
poor mayank ... he was so frustated k wo nupur ko kiss nhi kar paya ... lol
nupur was too innocent ... usse to romance ka R bhi nhi pata ... lets see mayank kya karta hai ...
he's master in romance after all ...
u knw, i love headache scene the most.
it was so beautiful ... d way nupur took care of him ... it was so nice to watch.
poor mayank ... nupur ne bina permission k usske reshmi balon ko chu lia ... aur oil bhi laga dia ... lol ... bechara mayank ...
this scene was so lil, but i love this scene...i can tell u why ... bt i just love this scene.
like morning scne ...hayyy , nups experienced her first kiss from her husband..
lovely ...
i like d way the story procedding ... just loved it.
like d party ... n love what mayank did to dia
she deserv more than it ... mayank ki shadi ho gyi ... phir bhi abhi tak uske piche pari hui hai ... disgusting ...
n tam also dint tell her anything to stop ... both sisters r same ... shamless ...
accha hua mayank ne dia ko thappad mara ... mere tarf se do-char aur lagana chiye tha ... how dare she called nupur gold-digger ????
nt nupr... she's d one gold-digger ...
waiting for mayur special party.
r they going to beach???? plz no ... plz sent them somehwere else ... like firmhouse
n plz put lil romance btwn them if possible.
part>B always ur strong point ...n here again u proved it.
continue soon.
thanks for the pm.

Thanks for liking part 16 A & B ..🤗 and thanks for giving such a nice n long feedback ... i have updated chapter 17 bit early this time but only one part ... 😃
Please read it when u have time n give ur positive feedback...thanks again
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amazing update...finally they confessed their feelings

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