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Posted: 14 years ago
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it's awesome... cont soon...😊
plz pm me if u can.😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
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part -2 continues...


As sanaya saw mohit's retreating figure she don't know y but her heart pinched from the pain which was unexpreseble or unbearable she beared the pain which was unknown to her unknown to the reason why she felt lyk tht ?? her eyes were still glued to the retreating figure of mohit which she could see much less than clear but she could see it'.she could see how mohit and karishma together faced the reporter and the camera of the saas bahu saazish team and as the reporter was asking them questions how they were smiling.laughing n giggling n answering all of the questions this reminded her'''.this reminded her of the mjht days when they together used to face off the interviews and camera's together n spend the best moment of their lives together n she also knew how funny mohit was n it was always fun for any actor who worked with him as he always cracked jokes which make others hell lot laugh and she was kinda jealous as this time karishma was with him instead of her

It was true thet they will not be able to do any other show again as she was stuck up with "is pyaar ko'." And he was with "kyun ho gaya na'" but why was he ignoring her???? Ignoring??? Was he really ignoring her???? Or she jst felt like tht ''maybe its her useless thought but she can't see him working with karishma ''.but why ???? does she lost trust in him or was she just insecure ???? insecure yess she got the answer of her question she was being jst insecure '.insecure of loosing him '.his love'..his faithfulness '.n what not''.

But she loved him n moreover she trusted him but then why is scared of loosing him??? Does mohit also felt like tht '.like being insecure??? But I still remember in an interview I answered "one thing about mohit I like is that he never feel jealous or not like a competitive sorce of person" yaah of course she remembered that as mohit only make her believe tht he will not feel jealous if sanaya have some ultra close scenes with her co-actor n she accepted it but was it true???? Was she able to read what was hidden in his eyes??? We all know no one is born perfect os else we can say have a mind n sense like "god" he was also a person who loved her like anything '.if any other person was there instead of him would say that he is not haapy seeing his love doing intimate scenes with any other guy but he did'nt and she was happy she never tried to understand him understand his eyes'.n that was the point where she lacked '.

She was not able to see mohit with karishma then same goes for him too'there must also be the reason tht might was killing him from inside

When she started her show mohit still had not got his show''while she was busy in enjoing her shooting n all he must all have felt like being like left out''he had no body in Mumbai with whom he could his free tym his parents were in delhi sooo he was being away from them '.he had no one with whom he could share his feelings as she was buzy in her show then y is she complaining now???? Y???

These questions were killing sanaya from inside and to relieve herself her mind n her soul she has to ask mohit or rather clear all the misunderstandings or thoughts or insecurities which were killing her so the answer of the question was sanaya,clear all the insecurities with him n yeah thts full n final

As these thoughts were crawling in her mind an announcement broke her chain of thoughts

"mohit and karishma get ready for the shoot its going to begin 'the song sequence"

She saw them laughing n getting ready for the shoot n then barun came

"hey sanaya"

"ohh hey barun hows u ??"

"m great so everything prepared for shootimg"

"yeah I think soo "

"cool so y not start preparing the dialogues ??"

"yeah for sure" she smiled

N then her gaze again went to the stage were mohit and karishma were shooting the song sequence it was a really good song but some scenes were close were they have to stare in each other eyes ,hug each other , n all this was bugging sanay so she left as she was not able to see mohit with "karishma " and doing those scenes which she always thought herself doing it with him rather than any other gurl and when it comes to karishma tanna then she was definitely going to kill this girl even if she thought oh stealing her boyfriend from her she could still remember the question being asked by shabbier alluwalia to karishma "kya aap kisi ka boyfriend churana chahengi???" n she answered "its depends it depends ki who dikhta kaisa hai ??" n then those idiots brought mohit in between the stage "I mean what was was the need n hah guess what she answered " "he is cute but height u know " n nohit also stood at his toes

Ohh goooddd this thought is killing me from inside "sanaya I think u have stresses urself too much go do the shoot maybe tht will lighten the stress and everything"

N then she went with barun to practice the dialogs with barun'''''''''.

Mohits pov begins'''

*Phew* atlast done with todays shooting stuff ..its hell lot tiring '..yeah I know song sequences are pretty easy than remembering all those dialogs stuff but remembering those dance steps is really tuffiest thing ever ever n forever '..

Well now so I am done with the shooting I must look around here n search for sanaya "agar dinner ka invitation dena hai toh thoda romantic toh hona padega" he blushed n started roaming around the sets in search of her lady love then he asked one of the office boy "hey listen''do u know where sanaya is ryt now???" he asked

"ohh yeah sir actually maam is there in her make up room"

:oohhkk thank you soo much"he smiled n lead his way

As he saw peeped inside the saw he saw sanaya rehearsing her dialogs with barun

"kyunki main chah kar bhi tumse nafrat nhi kar pati" she rehersed

"main chah kar bhi tumse pyaar nhi kar paonga"

"is pyaar ko kya naam doon??"

N then he felt he should not disturb the two while they were reharsing

So he spoke to office boy

"listen can u please do me a favour whenever sanaya gets free please ask her to meet me at our place ohkk"

"ohh yaah sir I will do it but why don't u ask her by urself she is inside the room"

"who actually she was buzy na so I thought I should not disturb her at this moment"

"ohh yeah sir I will tell her "

"thank u soo much" he spoke humbly n went off the sets sat in his car n rushed to his home sweet home

Precap: monaya confession of their insecurities

---insecuriteis to be solved

hey guyzz thank u soo much for leaving behind such lovely comments i am really very please tht u all are liking the concept n story i hope u all like this part too n yeah do hit the like tab n doo comment

any confusion or problem??? every thing is invited😳


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surabhi😃

Edited by sweetsurabhi94 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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RESERVE (Comment after reading both Parts)
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey darling...😊
its really a nice part...👏
i think its obvious that anyone gets jealous to see their so close love wih someone else...😡
waiting for next part...😉
waiting to see their confession abt insecurities...😍
cont soon...😛


LOVE U...❤️
SREELU...🤗

Edited by sreelu.januable - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey meri jaan surabhi
O.m.g u cnt belve how much i hate to stdy:(
It was realy my luck i came here to see ur pm n i was realy wshng to see the update n what i realy got it aww thank u so much love u so so much!
Nw the part
Totaly rockd awesme mindblowng fablus fantastic magcl lovely sweet n lastly emotinal
Aww totaly in luv wth monaya again.
Sanaya pov writen so awesme .jealusy in securty so much real aww i realy luvd how she relze it m8 hapen wth mohit...totaly mindblowng realy a lots of claps..
N then mohits pov superb as usualy his caring side aww lovd it so much...
Cnt w8 4 nxt
Plz plz plz jaldi updte karna abhi
Sachi my top mst fav monaya os
Realy cnt w8
Thank u so so much
Lub u
Take care
Urs meri:D
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Posted: 14 years ago
#56
sooo nice concept dear thanx for pm me
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Posted: 14 years ago
#57
Awesome Update..
Sanaya's insecurities were explained perfectly!
No complaints and No Confusions just carry on..
I love it!!
Thanks for the PM and don't forget to do that in future! Continue Soon.. Pre-cap sounds interesting!

Love, Nivriti
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Awesome update. Loved it. U have wrote their pov very nicely. Do cont soon. Thanks for pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
#59
Okie! Finally done reading it!
Aww! Sanaya was feeling jealous of Karishma!
Continue soon!
Precap is interesting MoNaya will confess their insecurities!
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Posted: 14 years ago
#60
amazinggg,simplyyy outstanding...
plzzz cnt soon.
luv u
vritika

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