~!THE INSECURITIES!~ monaya os ~~ - Page 11

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Posted: 14 years ago
Fabulous OS SURABHi 👏 👏 👏How sweet part this is...Its,too good Yaar!👏 very well written Parts. I loved it. Perfect complete ending...And,most Important thing, I know you are Fabulous writer so,eagerly waiting for your new Rocking Story😊 .Thanx a lot 4 PM.
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Posted: 14 years ago
it was lovely ending Su
so januable ...loved it

gr888888888 work

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Posted: 14 years ago
I'm so sorry for commenting late!
But loved your ending!
Finally their shared they insecurities with eachother!
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Posted: 14 years ago
Han to Surabhi Ji...
First of all Thank you very very Much for updating this SS...😛
Finally Yaad aa gya apko...😉
okkk...now coming to update...it was really fantastic and wonderful ending...
u have written it very beautifully n sketch so natural and lightly Monaya whole environment while they were talking abt their insecurities and engagement..👏👏👏👏...
i just love this whole scene❤️❤️
Fabulouse and Awesome ending...Balcony scene was too guddd...😳
i am veryyy happy with this so beautiful part.😊..n also with you writing style..😆😉
Real Monaya ka touch bht ache se maintain kia tu ne...very good👏👏👏👏
chal ab koi or jaldi se start kar...aesi hi achi achi si...😉😆
thanks for pm...
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey sur🤗it was fabulous update loved it very much 👏the ending was just soo perfect everything written so beautifuly👏.thoroughly enjoyed reading it😃firstly mohit n moms phone converstion was soo real loved the way she told him to take their relationship to next level and not just BFnGF😉loved the balcony scene mohit remembering all those moments spend with san it was very emotinal scene loved the dinner arrangements ,decorations he made only for his ladylove n loved the scene where san gets all mesmerised seeing the dec n when she shez mohit her blushing☺️😍u have wriiten it superbly👏loved their talk at dinner the way they spoke abt their insecurities abt trust then thinking of getting engaged to make their relationship secure😉and lastly the balcony scene then their cute nok zok in bet while having desserts 😳n lastly the balcony scene san sitting on mohits lap😍n both sharing each other abt their insecurites when they would see each other with other costars😉loved each n every scnene👏n the end part also was too wriiten very nycly abt how inscurites can ruin realtionship. do write more such os keep it up👍🏼n thanks for the pm


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Posted: 14 years ago
hey surbhi thats awesome plzzz continue
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Posted: 14 years ago
👏aww...it ws a luvly part..quite an amazng endng👏..such a realistic portrayal of monaya😊...ur each &evry wrd regrdng insecurities is so very tru..do write some more os on monaya...

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