~!THE INSECURITIES!~ monaya os ~~

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Hey guyzzz this is surabhi here with one of my os on monaya I thought of the current tracks going on in their life n thought what will be the effect or rather their pov regarding this so I thought of penning down my pov I hope u all like it

Note-please don't think its against any person or any actor its jst my pov and the end will ba a happy one as we all know "all izz well" so I really really hope u don't take me in a wrong way

-n if u r having any problems regarding this do tell me I will ask the moderators to close this topic!!!

Sanaya pov:

Its been 2 months since my show "is pyaar ko kya naam doon" started 'the show is doing good but I don't know bt I feel like I am still not satisfied much ''..maybe rather than concentrating on my own show I am paying much attention to mohits show yeah that show only "hmph" n guess the actor opposite him tht "karishma tanna" oh my god!!!! Out of the whole lot of soo many actresses tht director only got karishma to work opposite him I mean after tht so called "meethi churi " episode I even don't want tht gurl to come near my mohit but guess what contrary to me she is acting opposite him'.."hmph" n now since the time mohit got the show we hardly get time to spend with each other I am busy in my show n he is busy in his only on weekends we get time to spent with each other but I must say that time is my utmost favourite time only n only with mohit *blush*

These were the thoughts which were trailing in sanays mind as she was in car going to her shoot

"shoot is soo much boring these days without mohit wish I could take him their" accepted sanaya with a sad face

Suddenly her cell rang n she saw the "director" name flashing on the screen

"hey" sanaya accepted the call

"hey sanaya I am sorry to disturb u but there is a somewhat change in today's schedule " said the director

"change hmmm ohk tell me vt's it"

"well today we thought of an outdoor shooting but there is a change in the scene according to the story line so we thought to take an indoor shoot rather than an outdoor one so i sort of thought of informing u before u reach the location"he stammered

"hah of course why wouldn't u isn't it very fast u told me the news I was going to reach the location in 5 minutes *hmph* " sanaya thought sarcastically

"ohk tell me"

"well it will be taking place in goosers studio"

"ohk I'll be there in 15 min"

"aww thank u soo much sanaya"

"yaaahh u should be " she thought

"its perfect with me I'll be there "

"ohk then bye "

"bye"

"driver make the way to goosers studio" she signed

"ok madam"

After 15 minutes

" *phew * after whole 15 minutes I actually reached the studio thnk god I atleast reached other wise how much I was bored in the car alone" she signed

As she came out of her car she saw commotion all over the place

"what the hell is happening here??" exclaimed sanaya

"sanaya ''.."

She turned n saw the director here

"actually sanaya some sort of shooting is already taking place but don't worry it will end up in 15 to 20 minutes till then I think u can go inside n take some rest n may be entertain urself with some of these"

She looked at him giving her some of the magazines she signed again n smiled

"yeah I kind of think off it thnks I'll just go inside n take some rest"

"ohkk n I m soo much sorry for giving u soo much trouble this day"he apologized

"u should be" she thought "its k I don't mind" she smiled again

As she entered the studio she was stunned to see the posters of the show "kyun ho gaya na???" the same show where mohit was the lead with tht karishma tanna thing *hmph*

As she went inside one of the office boy brought a chair and a drink for her she smiled

"hey excuse me as I remember u do not belong to the crew of our show than all this??? "

"maam actually I belong to the crew of the opposite show actually mohit sir has sent this for u "

She smiled n her gaze went towards the stage where mohit wearing a white sexy shirt with top 2 bottons open showing off his chest n wearing a black pant with his hair falling on his eyes looking ultra hot was practicing for some song sequence she was jst staring at him n in between he stopped n looked at her n show of his big "killer dude" smile which made sanaya blush

After some time one of her crew members brought the script of the scene for her while she was jst buzy seeing mohit practicing some song sequence steps with karishma n then she was interrupted

"maam???"

"huh ?? huh??"

"maam ur script the shoot is going to start soon"

"ohk give it I will prepare it "

As the boy went she could see some figure standing besides her as she twisted her head to have a look the strange she could see none other than mohit!!!!!

"aww mohit my baby how r u ??? " she smiled n hugged him tightly

"baby I am fine what happened to u ?? u look freaked out??? "mohit said in a caring tone while caressing her back

"wo baby today was a hell lottt tiring day for me so I am little stressed out" said said breaking the hug looking at his dark hazel eyes

"aww comeon baby u also know shooting days are soo much tiring na "

"yaah I know u sit na besides me for sometime I am really hell lot missing u mohit u the this shooting thing is soo much keeping us busy indivisually because of which we hardly get time to spend with each other" said sanaya innocently

"yeah I know baby but don't worry everything will be good its jst a time which will fly ryt???"

"yaa u r always ryt" she smiled "achcha u tell me mohit stage show??? Dance sequence ??? I am not getting anything???"

"well sanaya as u know our show is again a youth show so we are somewhat having some sort of college dance competition where me n karishma are representing our college n during this sequence we are going to understand tht we are In love with each other "he explained her the scene

"what u r in love with her???"sanaya was shocked

"arey baby its jst a song sequence n I think I am doing a show so don't be soo insecure sanaya u know tht mohit sehgal is always at ur command madam " he said dramatically

Sanaya laughed n pinched his cheeks n kissed him "aww mohit u r such a darling I love u soo much "

"I love u too sanaya" he smiled n both hugged each other

In few minutes they were interrupted by one of the crew members

"excuse me sir"

Breaking the hug" huh..??? yeah what happened??? "

"sir actually the saas bahu saazish people are here for an interview of urs n karishma madam's together

They are waiting for u "

"okay say them I am coming "

"okay sir" and he left as mohit turned to sanaya

"okay sanaya I think I must leave meet u after ur shoot at my place ohk??"

"ohkay mohit"

"b bye baby love u "

"love u too "

As sanaya saw mohits retreating figure their was something disturbing her n she herself don't know what was it????

And there was something which was disturbing mohit too but he did not disclosed it!!!

What are the insecurities?????

Will they be solved????

How will it be solved???


hey guyzzz if anyone have problem regarding this concept do tell me ohk i will close it😳

and if u by chance lyk it do leave comments

or silent readers do hit the like tab

i will be waiting for ur comments

love surabhi


n if u want pm then do tell me 😳


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part 2-page 9

last part-page 14

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..Ambika.. thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
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aww my bhukad...
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such a lovely os...
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my monaya are soo cute and adorable
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specially mohit...
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aww sanaya is insecure of karishma..
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so januable...
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love monaya so much...
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can't wait to see wat happens next..
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plz cont. soon...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Very nice story
loved the concept
its different concept
very interesting

sanaya insecure of mohit n karishma show oh thts so interesting
n y mohit is insecure?

N very nice title
please continue soon
n do pm me
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey that was awesomee...differentt..n awesomee...plzz continue asapp..
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hi darling...😊
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aur ha mujhe pm list mein add karna...šŸ˜›
plz do cont soon...šŸ˜†
pm karna bhulna mat...😈


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Posted: 14 years ago
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thank u so much
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Posted: 14 years ago
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unress kar dena warna teri toh...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: shooona



Very nice story

loved the concept

its different concept

very interesting



sanaya insecure of mohit n karishma show oh thts so interesting

n y mohit is insecure?



N very nice title

please continue soon

n do pm me


thank u soo much simran for the beautiful cmnt n fr liking it
yeah i will do it asap
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🤣 wait baby wait...šŸ˜†

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