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PART 3
it was always irritating to see shilpa aunty disappear just like that in the serial. so heres my take on what might of happened.

Part 3

Shilpa, mayank and nupur are back in college, sitting on one of the benches outdoors.(remember one of which sam and mayank sat down discussing mayanks feelings during rose day –that one.)

Shilpa in the middle with mayank and nupur on either side.

All three are quiet- nupurs head is running with all that bauji said. Mayank is torn between wanting to console nupur and speak to his mom in detail about what happened.

Shilpa , realising all that was going on within them, starts conversation.

"tho...abhi kya karna hai?"

Both are still quiet.

"bolo..," still no answer. Sighing," yeh kya hai? Shaadi kiya hai tum dono ne. Aur woh bhi kitne romantic type ki shaadi. Bhaag ke shaadi karte , tho bhi itna mazaa nahin aata.yahaan dekho, tumhari dad shaadi mein shamil the aur mera wishes tha. Kitna achha combination. kitne saare twists hai is love story main. Kabhi nupoor gussa hoti hai tho kabhi mayu tum. Aur jab dono theek hote ho, tho bauji gussa hojathe hai. Very bad. I don't like it. " she said trying to lighten the mood and turning to look from one to the other , finally stopping at nupur.

Nupurs eyes fills up and she bends her head ,shilpa sighed and puts her arm around nupurs shoulders. Mayank s heart goes out to both the women in his life.

"kya itna bhi haq nahin banta tumhari upar tumhare dad ka nupoor? Unka gussa bhi jaayiz hain, hain na.unko bhi thoda waqt do adjust hone ke liye. Tum dono ki relationship ko samajne ka.aur tab tak, apne is nayi life ko waste mat hone dena.par ek bat tho hai nupoor, itne saari twists tho tumhare films mein bhi nahin hua hoga na." She adds teasingly.

Nupur looks up and smiles in return though halfheartedly. She is glad that atleast one elder person is not judging them wrongly.shilpa squeezes her cheeks with her free handand taking her arm off nupurs shoulders, turns to mayank.

"tho Mr Mayank Sharma, tum yahaan college kab shift hoge .?"

Mayank and nupur immediately look at each other guiltily. Mayank had gone and spoken to the princi about his job and readmission without considering that he had to ask his mother who still had her job in Bangalore. How much do you take a person for granted?

Mayank says haltingly," nahin maa..woh aap Bangalore mein hain tho hume bhi wahi..."

"lekin beta, wahan mid session mein kaun tumhe admission dega? Matlab nupur ko. Tumhare admission ke liye hi hume kitna mushkil hua tha. Isse acha yahi hoga ki tum yahaan wapas admission lelo. Yahaan tho tumhe sab jaanthe haina? "

"wo tho hain.aur waise bhi nupur ko admission dene se pehle koi bhi sochega .'mayank adds , attempting to tease nupur into retaliating but to his surprise, she nods in agreement.

"haan shayad mujhe koi college mein admission hi na mile. Par mujhe koi fark nahin padtha. Hum aapke saath hi aayenge." She says to shilpa.

Mayank knows how much hurt nupur must bhi to not even fight back. She was fine in the morning, he thinks bitterly.but as for now, she is right. We need to go with maa.

"haan maa, waha aap akele kyun rahogi.."he begins.

"dekh mayu, mera transfer tho aaj na kal yahin hone wala hai. Tho tab main wapas yahin aane wali hoon. Aur mujhe nahin lagtha ki tumhe abhi nupur ko apne friends aur behen se alag karna chahiye." When mayank tries to to say something, though he didn't really know what to say, she cut him short ,"ab bas . mujhe kuch nahin sunna hain. kabhi kabhi parents ki baat bhi manna chahiye. Tum dono ki fees and living ke bare mein pareshaan mat ho. Main .."

"nahin maa. Woh sab meri responsibility hai."mayank says , his usual stern nature asserting itself.

"hamara," nupur adds in a strong voice. She has been listening to mother –son conversation and thinking how much both of them are trying to make her comfortable.

Shilpa turns and smiles at her.she knows how life will be for them but she also knows that it is best for them if she lets them free. after all she has taught her mayu how to fly and its time for him to make his own nest anyway. The mother in her however still worries.

"okay fine then settled. Mayu, main tumhe Lalitha ka mobile number dedungi. Tum us se rehne ki jagah ke liye pooch lo. Aur main aaj nightbus se wapas jaaungi. Teek hai."

Mayank nods.

"lekin promise karo ki agar koi bhi problem agayi, tho mujhe immediately bataaoge."both of them nod dutifully.

"hai hai. Kitne ache bachhe hai! Tum logon ko college jaana hai, to jao . main apne office ka kaam poora karne jaarahi hoon. Kya pata, hopefully, mujhe transfer miljaye. Par darna mat. Main itna bhi good work nahin karne waali ki mujhe abhi se abhi transfer mil jaaye. Waise bhi tum dono ki beech mein kabab main haddi hone ka koi shauk nahin hain mujhe."

Both their faces changed color and mayank said," tum bhi na maa"

Shilpa laughingly puts her hand up to brush mayanks hair , he moves back instinctively with an irritated expression and says , "maa, baalon ko..."

"mat chon", both nupur and shilpa complete his sentence and all three laugh in unison.

They get up and walked to the gate where shilpa hailed an auto. Just as she was sitting inside, nupur hugged her tightly. Releasing herself, shilpa let mayank give her a hug and set off in the auto.

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omggg..lovely part...seriously mjht revisited...cont sun..
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part 1 lovely part...nicely written...pls cont
thnx 4 pm..
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loved this part..
Thnx 4 pm.
Payal_

yadein taja kar di tune by god...luv u

part 3 ws nyc!

Both turned towards each other and held hands . there were a thousand things to say and no words to say them. Suddenly the future seemed unsure but as nupurs hands squeezed mayanks, they smiled together and it wasn't so bad.

esp d dese lyns wr really beautiful!👏
luvd it!

PART 4

Bhushan household-the same day

Gunjan is going out through the door (u know the usual living room door of bhushans) when she hears her bauji s voice calling out ," kaha jaa rahi ho gunjan?"

His voice was heavy with the tension of the past 2 days .

"bauji, woh mein di se.. matlab .college jaa rahi thi.", gunjan replied in a scared voice, not looking straight at her father.

"is time? Sham ko kya college mein special class hai? ," asks baujii his voice reflecting that he knows where gunjan is going," ya phir meri choti si gudiya bhi abhi itni badi hogayi ki woh apne baujo se jhoot bholke kisi kisi se milne jaayagi."

Gunjan hurriedly walks back towards the couch where bauji is sitting and kneeling down on the floor , places her hand on his lap ,"nahin bauji, woh main bas aapko dukh nahin pounchana chahthi thi. Woh mein...," her eyes which have hardly been dry since the time she came back from gruhapravesh of MN in college, fill up again," woh...di ko kal se nahin mili , tho milne jaa rahi thi." Though nupur had come home with mayank and shilpa, the two sisters hadn't been able to talk.

Bauji looks at her ,"kaun di?", there is no feeling in his tone now.

"bauji, please aisa mat kijiye..di tho bas aapki kehne par hi shhhadi ki thi.warna usne tho decide kiya tha ki...,"gunjan tries to explain again the situation. She has been trying to do this since morning but her dad is unable to understand.

"mujhe kuch bhi nahin sunna hai. Agar tumhe lagtha hai ki tumhari di sahin hai aur main galat hoon, tho tum usiki paas jaa sakthi ho. Main samjoonga ki meri koi beti nahin."bauji says in a this- is- final voice.

"bhaiyya aap is par apna gussa kyun nikaal rahe ho?," bui comes in .with her is Ravi Bhushan (dia and uday s dad who had disappeared in the serial, remember)

"aur tu kitna royegi gunjan, ab chup kar." She settles on one side of her brother and exchanging a glance with her other brother ,continues" bhaiyya aisa nahin chalega. Jo hua so hua. Aap is bachhi ko kyun apni di si milne se rok rahe ho.yeh bhi wohi college jaathi hai, dia aur uday bhi wahi jaathe hai."

"to college mat jaaye. Waise bhi yeh to lagtha nahin ki yeh college padne jaathi hai." Gunjan guiltily remembers samrat., " agar Ravi ko apne bachhe college bejne hai to bejhe . mujhe apni beti ko nahin bejna hai." Gunjan looks at him with a scared expression , he had never been so rude to her. What if he really doesn't let me go to college?? Samrat , her heart tightens.

"aap baat kaha se kaha leke jaa rahe ho? Itna gussa aur woh bhi kis se? Apne hi to bachhe hain bhaiyya"

"haan bhaiyya. Aur waise bhi us ladke ki ma ne bhi unko accept kiya. Dia keh rahi hi ki woh bohot hi achha ladka hai."

"mayank tho college.."gunjan begins to be cut short by her father.

"mujhe kisiki gungaan sunne ki zaroorat nahin hai. Jise jo teek lage woh kar saktha hai." Bauji had got up from his seat and is walking away towards his room.

All the 3 sit quietly for a few seconds thinking how to make him feel better when gunjans mobile rings. she receives.

"hello, dia."

"where are you gunji? Nupur tumhe subah se 1000 times pooch chuki hai."

"woh dia, bauji..,"bui snatches the phone from her hand and says,"dia.nupur kahan hai? College mein. Teek hai. "

"kyun bui?" dia asks apprehensively.

"kyun ki bachhi. Kyun matlab kya? Matlab...tum phone rakho aur wahi rehna."

Bui turns to gunjan and says,"chalo aur apna dimaakh isthemaal karo. Nupur ki paas apne kapde aur sare cheez hai kya? Bichari to jaise thi waise hi chali gayi. Woh jo us babloo ki ghar bejne ke liye nupur ki saaman pack kiya tha wo sab gadi mein rakho . mein bhi chalthi hoon tumhare saath."

"par bauji.."

"bhaiyya se main baat kartha hoon, tum dono jaaon. ", ravi tells them

Gunjan is relieved, relieved that she can meet her di and hugs bui tightly crying.

The whole FF is more of what i felt had been left out in the serial but maybe the next parts will be slightly newer!