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index-
Part 1 and 2 -page 1
part 3 - page 2
part 4 - page 3
part 5 -page 4
part 6 -page 5
part 7 page 6
part 8 page 8

part 9 page 9
part 10 part 10
part 11 page 12
part 12 page 14
part 13 page 16
part 13b page 17
part 14 page 19
part 15 page 21
part 16 page 23
part 17 page 25
part 18 page 27
part 19 page 28
part 20 page 30
part 21 page 32
part 22 page 34
part 23 page 35
part 24 page 36
part 25 page 39
part 26 page 41
part 27a page 43
part 27b page 43 (last part)
Hi okay, ive been reading all FFs the past few days and cant resist penning down somethings which have been going on in my head for ages. finally pulled up enuf courage to post it. i dont know if it shud be posted here or only in the FF section(sorry mods) but the first part atleast will go here.


and the story is not really different, its just that certain places where perhaps i expected different handling of the track.

please feel free to comment if anyone s reading it!


ooof. here i go.


Part 1

The time after the wedding, both MN are still in the college room. Post the wedding night scene, uday has successfully spread the news of surprise wedding to everyone in college.

Dia , benji , suhaani and samrat are waiting for the newly wed couple near cafeteria, thinking of how mayank is going to react to the college getting to know about the wedding. Gunjan hasn't yet turned up in college.

Sammy has mayanks mobile with him to which mayanks mom calls and asks about what happened. Sammy fills her in and she says she will come to the college to meet them by noon sounding angry and upset.

MN come towards the cafeteria , most heads turn towards them which for the first time mayank cannot ignore as successfully as nupur does.

"gunjan kaha hai?", nupur asks dia who shakes her head indicating that she doesn't know.

Just as they reach the gang , uday screams standing on one of the tables- " dekho, welcome to the newly wed couple MAYANK and meri pyari same blood groupwali sister NUPUR. Aur jisko bhi wedding gifts dene hai, woh mujhe de sakte hai ya benji ko bhi." And claps his hands happily. As he turns around , he catches maynaks angry glare and stops clapping.

Jumping down from the table, he tries hiding behind Sammy saying," yeh shaadi ke baad bhi nahi badlega? Benji..." he calls and runs away pretending to search for him.

Mayank is still glaring at uday , nupur tries to divert his attention by tugging his hand and the rest of them try to control their laugh.

Before mayank can say anything to uday, theres a shrill scream ,"kyaaannn??!!!" , its vatsala (remember that cute thing who looked at both sam and maynak initially). All heads turn towards the scream and vatsala gets embarrassed, stammers..." matlab, such mein? Mayank ne shaadi ki??!!! Aise hi??!!!! .."

"aur woh bhi nu..." starts annie and stops in between .

"aap logon se koi matlab?", dia s voice cuts in sharply before anyone elses. "go back to classes...kiddos."she glares at annie. She cannot forget that in the RV episode, annie disappeared and never supported her.

Some guys come fwd and start congratulating both nupur and mayank, some girls including vatsala join in and while nupur grinningly accepts their wishes, something vaguely resembling a smile sets on mayanks face.

He is trying to escape and on catching sam sitting on the table near chinu, he walks towards him and shakes his head," uday ko bholo mere saamne nahin aana ."

Sam laughs," cmon dude, look at aapki wife ki hands'completely bridal. Who couldn't make out?" and on mayank still looking worried,asks," kya hua? "

" woh maa..."begins mayank .

"haan. Main batana bhool gaya. Aunty ne kahan ki woh noon tak college pahunch jaayegi" sam tells him but doesn't add that she sounded upset..Mayank nods his head, since he has woken up, his head is filled with various reactions that his mother may give.while he is sure that nupur is definitely his moms first and last choice, he is worried she will be disappointed in his behaviour especially as he went in place of adhiraj and all the confusion that followed. He feels he let her down.

By then the rest of the gang- dia, suhaani, nupur benji- join them.

"kya hua?", nupur asks looking at mayank.

"wohi to aapko bataana hai, Mrs Sharma.", samrat answers back. Nupur s face turn crimson on hearing Mrs Sharma for the first time ." wohi appko bataana hai ki kya hua kal raat ko?"sam continues.

Both dia and suhaani start grinning as nupur turns red and mayank replies back angrily," samrat tumhe mazaak suj raha hai. Tumhe pata bhi hai ki kya hau kal?"

" nahin , Mr Mayank Sharma. Hum tho bachhe log hai. Aap ko hi bataana hai ki ..."benji replies much to the new couples embarrassment.

"hello mayank. Congrats. " says a voice from behind . Mayank turns to face adhiraj and takes his out stretched hand. With still a strained look on his face, mayank thanks him.adhiraj turns to nupur and wishes her as well to which she smiles and thanks him. Suhaani is staring at the whole scene.

"Chalo, pehli baar asli nupur ka asli smile dekhne ko mila." Adhiraj says with a smile at nupur and looks at suhaani.

" kya farak padtha hai adhiraj? Tumhe to nakli hi pasand thi." Replies nupur also with a teasing smile and looks at suhaani.

"I am sorry, kal jis tarah se mere dad ne tumse behave kiya..."adhiraj begins to nupur. Nupurs happy expression begins to change and Dia, noticing it , cuts in

" leave it guys. Abhi un sab baton se kya faayda? Forget it."

"haan adhiraj. And anyway thanks for all your support yesterday." Mayank adds.

Adhiraj shakes his head and starts to say something when uday comes and standing close behind benji tells mayank that princi and shukla sir are both calling him to the office room in 10 min .Mayank and nupur look at each other. Did they get to know about the wedding? Of course they would have. thanks to uday. mayank turns to look daggers at uday.

"chalo main bhi office room ki taraf hi chal raha tha. Princi se mujhe apne contract khatam karne ki bare mein baat karni thi." Says adhiraj

"contract?", suhaani asks questioningly.

Turning towards her, adhiraj replies," mera basketball coach hone ka contract.Its over now .Mera yahaan kaam hogaya" he explains.

Everyone is quiet for some moments , not knowing how to break the uncomfortable silence.

"dids , kya yaha koi statue khel raha hai? Kisne kaha statue. Mujhe to kuch bhi suna nahin diya," uday loudly whispers to dia.

"shut up dodo." Dia says but smiles suddenly looking at him affectionately and everyone starts laughing including mayank.

The situation which seemed complicated seems of no importance in light of the laughter they all share'adhiraj coming to look for nupur, falling in love with suhaani mistakenly, suhaani coming in search of her brother samrat, adhiraj getting fooled and then spitefully wanting to get married to nupur while fighting with both sam and suhaani, sam accepting and supporting suhaani finally the whole wedding scenes---all disappear in that laugh.

"i think ab mujhe chalna chahiye, princi se milne. Agar princi ne mujhe college se bahar jaane ko kaha tho mujhe naukri bhi doondna hai." Mayank jokes. Nupur immediately looks worried," kya tumhe college se kyun nikaalenge ? tum tho topper ho, tumhe kyun kaam karna hai? shaadi ki hai, koi murder nahin. "

"main mazak kar raha tha nupur. Par kaam tho doodna hi padega na. kyunki ab meri ...matlab hamari ..., "mayank looks at her with sudden affection creeping in his eyes inspite of himself and stops.

"ooohhhooo", benji grins.

"nahin. Tum apna padhai karo aur main kaam karoongi. Waise books se pyar to tumko hai. Mujhe nahin", nupur continues stubbornly.

"actually mayank agar tum seriously kaam karne ki soch rahe the, tho princi se pooch sakthe hain. Matlab jaise main coach bhi hoon aur student bhi hoon , waise hi tum bhi..." adhiraj adds

'mayank tum bhi basketball coach ho? Koi mujhe kuch bhi nahin batata."uday complains

"shut up dodo. I know mayank, shayad princi koi aur part time job tumhe dede."dia adds

"to tum college nahin chod rahe ho?", suhaani asks looking at adhiraj.

Everyone turns to look at her. She blushs a little and adhiraj s face breaks into a smile.

"nahin. Main coach nahin rahoonga bas."he tells her and turning to mayank ,says "chalein?"

Both of them leave with sam and benji giving them a thumbs up sign. When suddenly.

( replay nupurs suniye scene...i cant beat it!!!!!!!!!!!)

Ab tho naukri pakki hai!!!

(mayank gets laughed at by princi but gets the job of odd boy- in library and as admin assistant but minus his fees, thanks adhiraj who goes toward his class.)

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its a little too long. didnt realise it. fingers crossed.

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thanks a lot . as ihave written almost 4 parts together, i guess i can post it today itself
.

and as i basically like nupur a lot, i might tend to write more about MN


Part 2

(mayank gets laughed at by princi but gets the job of odd boy- in library and as admin assistant but minus his fees, thanks adhiraj who goes toward his class.)

Mayank knowing fully well that nupur would be waiting for him in the cafeteria, goes there and finds her sitting alone .the gang has left for classes. He joins her and tells her what happened. She is excited and holds his hands placed on the table impulsively.

"chalo, celebrate karte hain. Tum kya loge? Waise mujhe bohot bhook lagi hai. Breakfast bhi nahin khaayi."

"tumhare paas paise hai?", mayank asks her. She looks at him uncomprehendingly at first and then it sinks in. They are on their own. With neither of them having a paisa in their purses. Come to think of it, no purses as well. Both of them stare at each other and though mayank knows nupur would not have thought of such routine things and he is breaking her bubble by reminding her , he cant help it as well. He suddenly feels anxious and nupur senses it. She puts both her hands on his and squeezes them , hoping to convey her love and trust in him, her faith in his abilities and reassuring him that things will be fine.

Thud. a tray full of aloo parantas and curd on the table. Both of them instinctively remove their hands and look up to find chinu .

"kya nupur didi, aapke shaadi mein nahin bhulaya. Chalo koi baat nahin, mere taraf se aap dono ke liye shaadi ki baad ka pehla khana- aloo ke paranthe canteen ki account se. Mayank bhaiyya , aapko main milkshake doon." Chinu ...

Both are lost for words.and mayank shakes his head indicating he doesn't want anything else. chinu walks away. Both look at each other , nupur serves and they begin eating quietly.

But nupur being nupur, suddenly screams- "chinu bhaiyyaaa." Chinu comes running from another table. the canteen is beginning to fill up".kya hua nupur . mirchi zyada thi?" mayank asks anxiously.

"nahin . kya mayank tum bhi na. Itne ache se bana hua paranthe kabhi khaya hai kya? Chinu bhayya dil khush kardiya aapke paranthe ne aaj. Aap mera ek aur kaam karoge. Agar gunjan yahaan aaye ,tho usko batadenge ki main...main bahar...nahin library ke peeche ki steps pe hoon"

"nupur.."mayank interrupts . that is their usual meeting place in the class breaks.

Chinu nods smiling and without giving mayank a chance to say anything more, she drags mayank away from the canteen.

Just as they enter the corridor towards their usual meeting place, both of them stop in their tracks . its shilpa aunty ' well mayanks mom

(replay scene of the serial.)

Just add this one liner- nupur asking shilpa after shilpa wishes them,"kya aap bohot naaraz hain? Isme sach much mayank ki koi galathi nahin hai" earnestly. Hoping with all her heart that the one person whom mayank looks upto is not offended and does not mistake him. She knows how important his mom is to him.

(replay scene at the bhushan household with bauji and shilpa aunty discussing the whole scene and bauji not relenting and finally cutting nupur off by saying aap hi ke bachhe hai shilpa ji aap hi unhe aap hi sambhal iye etc.,and the final , main nahin chahtha ki kisike bhi bure asar gunjan par pade.)

Uuggghh bauji- can i ever forgive you???? Sorry . Poor nupur.anyway this seemed more like a filler


Edited by np18 - 14 years ago
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do pm me when u update it. i like it. it's not like the one happened in drama.i want mayur to be happy and together
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Lovely FF dear cont soon..nd do pm me next time
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awesome start dear..pls continue soon...
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awesum ff...
luvd it...
reminded me of dose days...
pls continue soon..
n can u pls pm d next tym...
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