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Posted: 14 years ago
#41
edited my post in page 6- part 7
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Posted: 14 years ago
#42
wow...great part...👏

loved last part...its just...wow...

thnx 4 pm...

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Posted: 14 years ago
#43
very nice update.
mayur scene was so cute...osnicely written.
love mayanks continuous blabbing :P
lolz...he said ILU countless time.
par nupur ko phir bhi samajh me nahi aya...lolz
very nice update.
continue soon.
thansk for the pm.

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Posted: 14 years ago
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don't be nervs about it it was beautiful update sorry didn't comment part 6 but both were wonderful thanks for the pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
#45

very very nice update...

i hope... gunjan aur nupur ke beech k jo differences ho rahi hai..
vo jaldi kahatam ho jaye
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Posted: 14 years ago
#46
part 7 ws really fab dear!
i'm soo luving d hesitation on newly married couple...
Hayee.. dey r soo cute!
luvd it!
continue soon!
n thnx 4 d pm!
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Posted: 14 years ago
#47
thanks for the pm 😊
I wish we could see such scenes in mjht of mayur
do continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
#48

PART 8

MN house- the next morning

Nupur woke up earlier than Mayank. Freeing herself from mayanks arms, she slowly got up taking care not to wake him up, freshened up and started doing some odd rearranging of the house. With no one to talk to, she spoke to herself.

"waise cleaning ke baad yeh ghar bhi achha hai. Kitchen ki koi aur stuff nahin chahiye.hum dono ke liye yeh kaafi hoga. Gunjan jab aayegi tab pooch leti hoon ki yeh teek hai ki aur kuch lena padega. Woh doosra room ke liye curtains matching lana padega. Ghar ke saare curtains iski wall colour se match nahin karte. Aur cushion covers bhi. Par abhi kaise ..." and her eyes turned to look at mayank sleeping peacefully .standing by the bed, she stared at mayanks sleeping figure and took in his tousled hair ' baalon ko mat chooonon', his face appearing fuller without dimples with a hint of a smile on his face.

She felt the calmness seep from him to herself and bent down to kiss his cheek softly. She longed to caress his hair but held herself back as she didn't wnt to wake him up. Shaking herself from the daze , she went touring the two rooms making mental note of all the changes she would want do .she walked out of the front door and stood looking around deciding to buy few pots and plant a few plants .

"shaadi kitni achhi baat hai. Bui ne teek kaha, in sab ...drame ki baad bhi kush rehna hai.Agar bauji gussa nahin hote, tho aaj hum ghar jaasakthe the.chod nupur, abhi woh sab mat sochna.fresh hojao and breakfast ke liye toast banao.phir Mayank ko utao. "

Nupur turned and found mayank staring at her, lying on the bed on his back with his hands crossed behind his head .

"maine dekh liya." He said seriously.

"kya?" nupur asked surprised.

"tumne cheating ki ." he continued.

not understanding what he meant, she sat on the bed beside him and again asked him

"maine tumhe kajal ki bina dekhliya ." grin spreading across his face.For a second, nupur didn't get what he meant but then remembered their fight when he had once said that she may look bad without her kajal.

"achha! Waise mere chehre pe abhi kajal, bindi ,cream kuch bhi nahin hai. Tho ab kaisi lag rahi hoon?"

Turning his face from side to side, he pretended he was studying her face," aur tho aur baal bhi set nahin kiya hai." And gave her a pseudo disappointed look.

"mera sringaar ab se sirf mera sindoor hai.ek chutki bar sindoor." She said in the Deepika padukone style and gave him a side glance.

Both burst out laughing .

"subah subah nautanki ! ,"mayank said fondly,"waise kajal ke bina bhi achhi lag thi ho." He said with a mischievous look in his eyes.

Nupur again felt her cheeks redden,quickly stooped down a kiss on his cheek and before he could respond, dashed into the kitchen.

"jaldi se tyaar ho jao. College jaana hai." She called out.

Smilingly, he got up to get ready for college.

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The day before- Bhushan house

Adhiraj stopped the car just outside Bhushans house . sensing gunjans hesitation in inviting him inside the house, he volunteered,"gunjan its okay. Main ander nahin aana chahtha."

Smiling thankfully at him, she got down and suddenly stopped in her tracks. Bauji was near the main gate with her chachaji. Adhiraj who also saw them, got out of the car and bent to touch their feet. Bauji touched his head as aashirwad and Chachaji asked" kaise ho beta? Tumhe gunjan kaha mili?"

"teek hoon uncle. Hum sab kal Nupur ki naye ghar ko set karne mein help kar rahe the. Aur isko drop karne main aagaya. Dia aur Uday bhi shayad sham tak aajayenge. ", adhiraj replied .


The elder Bhushans stared at him in disbelief. Wasn't this the ladka whose wedding got cancelled with Nupur? And here he is with them trying to set up their house!!!!

Yeh aaj ke bachho ko samajna mushkil hi nahin na mumkin hain , thought Ravi Bhushan, ab Uday aur Dia koi hi lelo!

"thanks babloo beta. Ander aaoo."

"Nahin uncle. Mujhe kuch kaam hai. Aur bauji," he turned to face Bauji," agar meri wajah se...matlab mujhe few days pehle hi MN ke bare mein pata chala...aur yeh sab meri bhi Galati hain. Main ne shaadi ke liye insist kiya kyunki...," he remembers Suhaani and how he thought they had all made a fool of him but he cant bring himself to reveal all that happened. He has seen the bond between them and realises he would have perhaps done all the blunders they have done for each others sake.

Both the brothers are looking at him curiously.

" bas in sab mein meri galathi zyaada thi. Bauji, agar aap doondthe bhi na , tho Mayank se perfect match Nupur ke liye koi miltha nahin. Ho sake tho hum sab ko maaf kijiye."

He turned and drove away quickly . Both the brothers stared after him, one amazed at his guts and another feeling nupur had lost someone so wonderful.

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Adhiraj felt relieved that he had said sorry to someone. If only he had not agreed to get married to Nupur to spite all of them!!! If only he had spoken to his dad about cancelling the wedding !!! but he was blinded. Blinded by his feelings for suhaani, so much that by the time he looked around, Nupurs life was a mess. All he had thought then was how much he was trying to hurt suhaani. Well he had ended up hurting more than her now. But he would make it up to all of them now. He would stand by them especially Mayank come what may.

And Suhaani, well. It didn't look like she actually meant any word of that hate letter, did she? No , bilkul nahi. Maybe usne bhi meri hi tarah galthi ki, he thought his hopes rising when he remembered her behavior the past 24 hours and he smiled to himself.

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Excel College-

MN hurried to the staff room that morning as Mayank was supposed to start his work that day and he had to meet Shukla Sir about the same. They heard loud laughs from the staff room

as mayank entered and nupur waited for him outside cluthing her end of dupatta .

"good morning Nupur." Princi was smiling at her,"yahaan kyun kadhi ho. Chalo ander chalo." He gestured to the staffroom and went in followed by a reluctant Nupur.

"Hello Mayank." , he said ," tho, tum apne kaam jaane aye ho? Kuch zyaada nahin hoga. Apne padhayi library mein hi khatam kardena kaam ke saath. Tho Nupur, kaisi ho?"

Nupur smiled hesitantly. thinking 'abhi tak tho achhi thi, ander kyun bulaya?'

"Kyun mahodaya, aapne apni vivaah mein apne shikshakon ko nahin bulayi?" shukla sir added with mock annoyance.

Both MN exchanged glances. While they were sure everyone knew what had happened, it was embarrassing them no end standing in front of their professors and getting teased.

Friends were different but teachers?!!!

"Shukla Sir, abhi hamara bets inko batade kya?" , Deodhar sir added.

Bets kya bets?

"haan haan kyun nahin ? lekin woh bets nahin hai. Hum bas waarthalaap kar rahe the." Shukla Sir replied.

"Tho bholo Mayank, ye tum logon ka love story Shukla Sir ki wajah se shuru hua ya Deodhar ki wajah se " princi asked in a semi serious tone.

"sir matlab..."mayank stammered and exchanged baffled glances with Nupur.

All three started laughing at the looks on their faces.

"matlab yeh ki tumhari story meri Ahmedabad ki competition ki time pe shuru hua tha..." deodhar sir asked when interrupted by Shukla Sir added," mera man na hai ki aap ki yeh prem kahaani meri project se shuru hua tha."

Both stood still shocked, nupur digesting what her teachers were betting about and mayank wondering if he was with Uday and Benji instead of his esteemed professors.

All three continued to laugh forcing the two students to finally smile in awkwardness of the situation.

"Ok , chalo. Class ka time hogaya." Princi got up from his chair and on getting a parcel from Shukla sir , " haan yeh main bhulgaya. Yeh aap dono ke wedding gift hamare taraf se." Princi handed Mayank a small wrapped parcel.

Stunned and touched at this gesture, Nupurs eyes moistened while Mayank forced himself to say," aap ne mujhe college mein waapas leke bahut...Thanks sir."

"Khush raho." Princi smiled and shook their hands. After thanking the other two , MN walked out with the parcel held tightly in Nupurs hand . Neither could immediately talk. They held hands and subconsciously went to their classroom.

Mayank knew he was a favourite student and had always been scared that his relationship with Nupur would not be approved by them. It would hamper his studies and make him lose his focus , they would ve thought. He would never let them down. Not his mother who supported him inspite of his mistakes and not his teachers who was concerned about his wellbeing. He would keep his goals in sight.

Nupur could not understand why the teachers were nice to her unless it was because of mayank. Anyone would be impressed with him.and not just because he was a good student.

'woh tho sachha aur nek ladka hain. Uski help nahin karenge tho kisko karenge? Meri khushnasibhi ki yeh mujse pyaar kartha hain. Gunjan ko jab bataungi tab use yakin nahin ayega. waise shukla sir ka idea nahin hoga, principal sir ne hi diya hoga. ' shaking it slowly,she tried to find out what was inside disturbing half the class which stared at her irritatedly. Mayank pulled it out of her hands, put it in his bag and smiled apologetically at the others, shaking his head at Suhaani s questioning look.


Canteen- Lunchtime

Dia-Benji-Uday-Suhaani-Adhiraj-Nupur 'Samrat are sitting at one table and passing the god's idol ( any god u want to think of. For me its Ganesha as thats what is most commonly used in Mumbai and MN are in mumbai) which princi had given .

"seriously Nupur , yeh unbelievable hai!!" all of them have exclaimed again and again.


"yeh gunjan kahaan gayi?", nupur asked looking around at them all for the nth time.

"class mein se library gayi, abhi tak tho aana chahiye tha." Samrat said

"shayad mayank ke saath baith ke pad rahi hain."benji added as all of them laughed.

"yeh kya ho raha hai?" uday s voice rang loud in the emptying canteen.

The others turned to catch an embarrassed looking adhiraj and suhaani.

"kya hua?" samrats face went from uday to adhiraj to suhaani.

"pata nahin bhai." suhaani said ," uday BHAIYYA se hi pooch lo."

Benji burst out laughing at her exaggerated way of calling uday- bhaiyya and

uday ," yeh bhaiyya kisko bola? Main tumhara brother nahin hoon."

"tho aur kya ho?" samrat asked him trying to put him in a fix.

"main U-D-A-Y , uday hoon , meri already teen teen sisters hain aur sisters mujhe nahin chahiye. OK koi bhi aake bhaiyya bulalega.meri koi value hain ki nahin?!!." And stormed out of there towards Chinu . Benji ran after him to console him while all the others sat amused at their antics.

Samrat left with Dia for class , Suhaani and nupur left together while Adhiraj went to sports room. On their way, Nupur asked Suhaani what she was hiding and from whom.

"bhai ko mat batana. Yeh raj ne mujhe paas kiya- ," a small paper napkin on which was written- kya hum aaj sham ko mil sakthe hain?-

"ooohhh. Mujhe laga ki kuch hate letter ki baat chal rahi thi! "

"lekin nupur, main kuch keh nahin payi uday ki wajah se."

"aur kuch kehna bhi mat. Stop. Wait. Watch and then Proceed to win." Dia joined them. All three sat on the side of corridor.

"kyun dia", suhaani

"tum class kyun nahin gayi?" nupur

"boring class hai nupur. Sammy gunjan ke saath hain aur main tumlogon ko doondthe aayi."

"main gunjan se milke aati hoon." So saying nupur got up and went away.

"ab bolo, kyun nahin milna hain Raj se.?"

"uff suhaani!! Tum sach mein kya Sammy ki behen ho? Itni desperation guys ke saamne nahin dikhana. Unhe thoda wait karoan, thoda ..."

"raj ko pehle hi I hate you letter diya hain maine. Aur ab wait?"

"suhaaani, us letter ke baad bhi, adhiraj tumse baat karna chahtha hai. Aur iska matlab hai ki..."

Both the girls gleefully held each other and started planning- Op Raj.

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hi all of you, while MN are my focus, im not able to ignore the rest. so , can you please let me know if i can just use the serial parts for the others and concentrarte on MN only?? thoroughly confused. with all the others around romance between MN suffers!!! please let me know .
Edited by np18 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#49
😊 😃

thats me saying thanks for all your comments.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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it was a rocking chapter... loved it...😃
as for ur question... as u wish, i don mind others but just don't make their parts very big, coz MN are ofcourse more important for me...

thnx for de pm

~jiya~

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