A Romantic Rendezvous/OS corner/new OS p118 - Page 85

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Posted: 13 years ago

Shubhu🤗 1st of all thankyou sooo much for such a beautiful surprise...when i noticed u wrote an os for me i was left with a huge grin🤗.The writer in u is finally back yayyy*does the happy dance*

Hey ur Mayu's bday is on the same day as mine😆 LOVELY!!! I always thought Mayank was a taurian just like me😆 dats why he's so awesome(again like me🤣)

Now dat my fav romance writer is back m just gonna say this again like i always do u rule wid romance hun nd this os was yet another proof of dat!

I loved the lil thing b/w MN in the kitchen wid her teasing him nd him getting irritated over it...so very MNish...loved the part wid the trio too,they rock!


Fav part hands down=the ending(M sure u know why🤣 ab tere saamne kya shareef banna🤣)


Nd she gifted her deep blue colored shirt(😆 i know why coz its ur fav color na😆)

Really loved it sweety keep on writing[J] thakyou sooo much again! I loved ur gift<3


LOVE YA KEEP ON WRITING SWEETY COZ HONESTLY U'RE JUST AWESOME AT IT!! THANKYOU SOOO MUCH FOR DOING IT FOR ME..TOOK ME COMPLETELY BY SURPRIZE😳


more things i forgot to mention😆


As Shilpa left the kitchen Nupur looked at Mayank & asked ," you really think i am a lousy cook??" " tumhare haatho se to main zehar bhi kha sakta hoon to ye khana kya cheez hai", said Mayank. Nupur's jaw dropped open at Mayank's filmy line. she hit Mayank lightly on his chest & said ," Mayank i am really serious."
"Nupur!!! come onnn!!! you know i was just kidding. of course you are a good cook but not better than my Maa." said Mayank smiling.Nupur smiled back at him," i know . but i am better than you."


I loved loved loved it...its like i am watching MJHT again...u managed to hit it at the right spot Shubhz...i love there cute banter nd can't help but remember how mayu was always like this...saying filmy lines to tease nupur😆 Her nakli ka gussa hona😆 nd Mayu ka manana😆

nd yeah that apron thing...u know encircling her placing chin on her shoulder kinda reminded me of cute kitchen scenes b/w them we used to get😳Yaaden taaza ho gayi by god😳
Edited by -Symphony- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
that was really very very lovely...

lovely os...

amazing...
-Symphony- thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
re-edited on pg 18😆 forgot to add few things earlier😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
res😃 yay u back!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
Res😃
Miss You ICians🤗
Auroni.92 thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
Loved this OS...
Its as cute as Mayur...
Write more...
And HAPPY BIRTHDAY again symphuu..🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
You have no idea how long it is since I read an MN OS..I have been trying to preserve MN intact without other characterisations creaping in,,,but u did a wonderful job shubhie..I just loved this story and seriously makes me wish things were this simple in MJHT like it were in the beginning :) But alls well that ends well.. Love the OS to the minutest bits 😃
🤗 Thank you for the links!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
Shubhie...I loved the OS! You know U shud write more often😆

ek toh its was so simply sweet on all three Sharma's parts...n I loved SA here too😆

n MN were as cute as ever ❤️ liked the part where Nupur was cleaning an already clean kitchen island😆
n also, I like ur writing style😃
Edited by Payal-15 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
finally all done on 118😊 sorry for taking forever you know how slow i am🤣🤣
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Posted: 13 years ago
to all Miss res.
when are you all editing your posts???😳😳

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