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.SA.

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Trailblazer

Posted: 13 years ago

#821

Originally posted by: acAasthamayur
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Wow this one shot was like a surprise for me😊
You already know na I love after marriage one shots of mayur more:)As usual it was very sweet and full of happy moments<3
The way nups was waiting for mayu was too adorable shubhu I am glad you kept that part...couldn't help smiling all the way through it...its an amazing feeling when someone waits for you...though not for the one who waits LOL. It was so romantic on mayank's part to actually bring the flowers...it means he was expecting her to wait...aww how cute<3
Coming on to romance part...must say Shubhu it comes naturally to u girl! Its always so easy going in ur one shots...i loveit😃
U knw i took a brk from studies and read this and it totally refreshed me😳thankyou sooo much...keep wring more nd more<3and I am so sorry for the delay...exams are in a couple of days

thanks Aasthu for loving my work & taking time to comment on it.🤗
you deserve a reward for being such a good girl.😆😆
so your reward is coming up soon in your in-box. it will refresh you like nothing else will.😉😉
i hope you will excuse my short reply to your comment when you get this.🤣🤣

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Payal-15

@Payal-15

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#822

Originally posted by: Payal-15
Awesome OS Shubhie...the thru thick n thin one...👏

well, was it not for all Pallu(s)...even I liked it😆

but really it was cute to see Mayank enjoying Nupur's care n concern, usually its the other way round...not that she didn't but he just took over that part on himself mostly😳

btw I always loved Nups' attitude towards Bauji's words...she didn't go out wanting to prove it and all but ya Mayank n Nupur proved themselves nonetheless...!!!!!!!!
keep writing😃

updated comment so quoting😆

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-Symphony-

@-Symphony-

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#823

Originally posted by: shubhsArti

thanks Aasthu for loving my work & taking time to comment on it.🤗
you deserve a reward for being such a good girl.😆😆
so your reward is coming up soon in your in-box. it will refresh you like nothing else will.😉😉
i hope you will excuse my short reply to your comment when you get this.🤣🤣

😛

chal is bar maf kia😆

waiting!😳

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AWonderfulChaos

@AWonderfulChaos

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#824

mujhe secret pm kyun nahi aaya, Jo Asthu ko aaya ?? ? 🤔

Anyways this was utterly very very very cute! the original MNish types..!! I loved the understanding n the love..gosh it mae me relive MN seriously :) awesomely written sweetie! plus the ending..yep MN are the bestest combo ever :) love d it thoroughly...

Great idea by Pallabi and awesomely presented by u my dear ! love dit! can say that n no. of times!!

take care..keep writing! love yaaa...🤗 sorry in a rush so short comment! n ms. Kanjoos...BIG REPLY😳 😃

Godbless ya always..keep smiling!🤗