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Posted: 13 years ago
Awww that was lovely Shubs...loved it totally!!
I always wanted to see Mayur celebrating each other's b'day in MJHT..but that was never shown...so it feels great reading an OS on it
His chin found its favourite place in the crook of her neck was my fav line...😍
loved the Shilpa Aunty-Mayur scene too...
and the last part...that was awesome!!!😍
Keep writing more Shubhi/..🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: shubhsArti

to all Miss res.

when are you all editing your posts???😳😳

very soon 😳 😆
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: StrongHope

first off yay you're back🤗🤗 missed your OS's a ton shubhu🤗🤗 feels like its been forever since you last wrote one😆thanks Rubu 🤗 it is ages since i posted anything here .almost 6 months.😆but like i said when you PMed it to me its perfect in every single way😍 its completely MNish which is the one thing i love like anything about your OS's😊 you never take away their essence which the cvs made for the show from them its because of your encouragement i managed to complete & post this OS.i was very afraid that i lost my touch.😆 though they messed up horribly later on due to their biasness towards they who must not be named🤔🤣🤣 the initial character sketches they had for both were fab😊 which is exactly why every single couple copies them now this I'm seriously saying i can name like 5 couples who are the same👎🏼

but copies will be copies absolutely no one can be better than our MN.
i love the occasion you picked😍 i always wanted a birthday for mayank or nupur, especially for nupur after marriage with mayank doing something super special for her and surprising her😍😍 watching the Bday sequence in EHMMBH once again made me realize MN should have had a birthday episode we got one birthday with nupur dead and mayank crying and other things🤔🤣🤣 won't say it I'm sure you remember🤣🤣i stopped watching MJHT after RP's exit,so can't say i remember,but once you told me about it & i remember that.🤣🤣

love the way you described Nupur😊 i know thats random but its so nupurish😆 especially the way her hair was tied up😆 I've always been in a habit of keeping my hair down, and since theyre curly I've always left them the way they were but after seeing nupur I've started tying it up and I've told my mum i want it straightened🤣🤣🤣 she won't let me though🤣🤣 yes I'm a huge MN/AR pankhi😎😆 rati curled her hair for M&S and yes i was very happy🤣🤣

Mayank let go of the apron & encircled her waist,his chin found its favorite place in the crook of Nupur's neck.

love this bit😍😍 I've said it a million times before will say it again; no one fits in each others arms as perfectly as nupur did in mayank's😍😍 be it their back hugs, side huge any hug they were all perfect😍😍 this description and setting reminded me of the kitchen scene between the two after he came back😍 when both were in red😊😊 the teasing they had after this was perfect and full on MN👍🏼👍🏼 thanks !! MN without their nokjhok are unthinkable. you know that scene during when Mayank buys ice cream to improve Nupur's mood. both of them are sitting on bench & have their nokjhok.that scene is the inspiration for the nokjhok in my OS.😃

i know I've said it a too millions of times but his mum is truly the only character i liked besides for MN😃 if they showed us MN and his mum scenes instead of a lot of useless other things I'm sure the show would've done a ton better 😆yes it would have done much better.but the cvz were lured to the dark side.😉i was watching it today too and the minute their scene ended i ran far far away🤣🤣🤣 even after 3 years haven't warmed up to anyone else😆 her not pulling their leg was super sweet😆 the little argument you added after it was perfect too😊 they were never the type of couple who would spend too long blushing and being shy which is the main reason i love them so much😊
yeah you are right. this marathi show i am watching currently had a scene, when the couple cuddles unconsciously in the sleep,& you won't believe they have spent 2 full episodes doing nothing but feeling awkward &shy.🤣🤣

the ending is perfect👍🏼👍🏼 reminded me of mayank's description from MJHT's wikipedia page here; bit in red i mean😊 I've always loved how much he loved her😍😍

He is in love with nupur . He is quiet, studious and focused on his education. He rarely has fun and is pretty serious about life. He has a bad temper and is hard to impress though, he has a wicked sense of humor. But still, His outstanding class performance and his good looks make him easily one of the most desirable boys in the eyes of girls. He is best friends with Samrat. He shares a warm bond with his mom. His father died when he was a child. He doesn't have many friends and usually keeps to himself. Though he hates Nupur at first, he eventually falls in love with Nupur and gets married to her. He loves her more than his life and can do anything for her.

@bold.

awww... that describes our Mayank bang on.😍😍

love it till infinity I'm sure aasthu did too😊😊 keep writing tons more🤗🤗




will do.🤗
Edited by shubhsArti - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: -Anila-

First of all Welcome Back on Writing...
srsly i was thinking somedays back abt u guys dat u also have stopped writing...so m actually glad to see ur PM...
n as alwaysss...it was Beautifully written...
loved it to d coreee...
simple and sweet n very Adorable...
i sooo love MN wid Shilpa aunty...By God!!!
missing her a lottt n missing MayUr alwaysss as now its like breathing...sigh!!!!!!
loved it sooo much...
plzzz do continue writing yaar...
loved it lodsss
love u SIS...🤗🤗🤗

thanks a lot Anila.🤗🤗🤗
Edited by shubhsArti - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: --WHATEVER--

beautiful OS Shubs..loved it..😃

do write more ...😳

thanks Anji.🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
thank you Ishi.😃
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: -Symphony-

Shubhu🤗 1st of all thankyou sooo much for such a beautiful surprise...when i noticed u wrote an os for me i was left with a huge grin🤗.The writer in u is finally back yayyy*does the happy dance*

thanks Tanu 🤗 i too did a happy dance after i managed to complete this.🤣🤣 you know i was unable to write anything for almost 6 months & i thought thats it ,i won't be able to write anything anymore. but thank God that was just temporary.*whew!!!*🤣🤣

Hey ur Mayu's bday is on the same day as mine😆 LOVELY!!! I always thought Mayank was a taurian just like me😆 dats why he's so awesome(again like me🤣) this is good!!! koi bole ya na bole apne muh miya mitthu ban lo.🤣🤣

Now dat my fav romance writer is back m just gonna say this again like i always do u rule wid romance hun nd this os was yet another proof of dat!

awww... 🤗🤗

I loved the lil thing b/w MN in the kitchen wid her teasing him nd him getting irritated over it...so very MNish...loved the part wid the trio too,they rock!


Fav part hands down=the ending(M sure u know why🤣 ab tere saamne kya shareef banna🤣)

haan 2 saal ho chuke hain aur main ab sare ICians ki rag-rag se waqif hoon.😉😆


Nd she gifted her deep blue colored shirt(😆 i know why coz its ur fav color na😆)yeah😆 plus Mayank looked good in blue[he looked good in every color.period.😆]

Really loved it sweety keep on writing[J] thakyou sooo much again! I loved ur gift<3


LOVE YA KEEP ON WRITING SWEETY COZ HONESTLY U'RE JUST AWESOME AT IT!! THANKYOU SOOO MUCH FOR DOING IT FOR ME..TOOK ME COMPLETELY BY SURPRIZE😳

it was my pleasure that i could make your day a little special.😃


more things i forgot to mention😆



As Shilpa left the kitchen Nupur looked at Mayank & asked ," you really think i am a lousy cook??" " tumhare haatho se to main zehar bhi kha sakta hoon to ye khana kya cheez hai", said Mayank. Nupur's jaw dropped open at Mayank's filmy line. she hit Mayank lightly on his chest & said ," Mayank i am really serious."
"Nupur!!! come onnn!!! you know i was just kidding. of course you are a good cook but not better than my Maa." said Mayank smiling.Nupur smiled back at him," i know . but i am better than you."


I loved loved loved it...its like i am watching MJHT again...u managed to hit it at the right spot Shubhz...i love there cute banter nd can't help but remember how mayu was always like this...saying filmy lines to tease nupur😆 Her nakli ka gussa hona😆 nd Mayu ka manana😆

nd yeah that apron thing...u know encircling her placing chin on her shoulder kinda reminded me of cute kitchen scenes b/w them we used to get😳Yaaden taaza ho gayi by god😳

Thanks Tanu 🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
thanks a lot.😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: shafyyy

that was really very very lovely...


lovely os...

amazing...

thanks 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
thanks 😊

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