short story the dark nights(mars)part6,pg32:)

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manjeet

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Posted: 14 years ago

#191

awesome update

luved sanu n majan scene

cont soon

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Gul

@DhanakZ

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#192

Wao dear this story is moving so interestingly

so gunjan recognized his brother

Love Sanu nok jhok

Thanks for pm and thanks for updating this Ss

I really lost all the hopes But I am really glad U update

Plz cont soon

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valliyah

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Posted: 14 years ago

#193

Awesome update but u took longg...plss update sooner now n add me to ur pm list please...!!!

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Sujata

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Posted: 14 years ago

#194

awesome update.

thanks for the pm.

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Mitali

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Posted: 14 years ago

#195

awesome part

it was just superb

thnx for the pm

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Ritu

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Posted: 14 years ago

#196

Wowowowowowowow Dolly!!!!!!!
Awesome upd8!!
It was funny as well as emotional!!!
Cont. Soon..

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Nivriti

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Posted: 14 years ago

#197

Continue Soon!!!!! =) =) =))]

Do PM me...

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simrit

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Posted: 14 years ago

#198

wah wah wah wah wah wah !!!!!!!!! munni kya likha hai re !!!!!! kab likha hai re ?????? itni late kaiko likhha hai re ???????? hehehehehehehehehe oops sorry !!!!!!!! carried away u knw as usual !!!!!!!!

but yaara totally totally mindblowing update !!!!!!!!!!! lov ed it to the core !!!!!! ye draame sam n nupur kr ilave aur koi nahi kar sakta wait actually kar sakta hai !!!!! tu aur main !!!!!!!!! hehehehehehehehehehehe

poor doctor very very very poor doctor !!!!!!!!

and nups is right !!! dumb cute idiot sammu !!!!! hehehehehehehehehehe !!!!!!! lovely sanu !!!!

now coming to other duo !!!!! awww that mayank gunjan hug was ultimate !!!!!!! just beyond words !!!!!!! totally !!!!!

the way she hugged him n then way he hugged her back n couldn't control his tears that was just awww !!!! i want to hug him that very moment !!!!!!! finally he get to met his family !!!!!! and gunji's line was amazing " mujhe bhi abhi abhi pata chala " hehehehehehehehehe !!!!!

jaldi jaldi update kar dena devi ji ab !!!!!!!!

love

simi