New mayur ff : Do you realize? part 15 pg.25 - Page 13

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Posted: 14 years ago
oh!!! so rahul stops nups dad!!!
nice update continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
hi dear this amazing FF
i really in love this story
which is so painfull n wonderful twist's
part 8 9 10 so painfull
most of parts i was crying while readin it
plzz i addu my buddy list
so do pme next time u update
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hello to all of you people. I want to thanks all of you for supporting me on this FF and leaving so many reviews. I really appreciate all of your comments. I am sorry i don't get a chance to go and comment to every one of your replies.
Thanks to all of you!!!!!😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
Plssss update soon..........waiting since long...........!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
hi dear this amazing FF
i really really love this story, which is so painfull n wonderful.
u wrt brillinantly, 8-10 parts r painful, it made me cry.
bt now m happy.
looking forward.
plzz add me in ur buddy list & do pm me from next time.
continue soon.
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Posted: 14 years ago
hi dear wen u gonna update? plzz try to update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hello to all my FF readers i am really sorry that i haven't updated any of my ff, i was busy. I will probaly update this FF by Friday and after this week you will get regualr updates, since winter vacation would start. I will try my best to update all of my FFs. Thanks all of you for all of your support. 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hi guys sorry for the Late update, i know all of you have been waiting for long, but i was busy with school. Now you will get regular updates, as winter vacation has started. I will update my other FF's too soon. Also, i am writting a new OS on Mayur if you want to read, i haven't posted it yet, it is called Wedding Planner I will try to update it by next week maybe sooner. I will try. Thanks all you for being patient. Here is the part 14
Part 14

Both were lost completely in each other's eyes, Mayank's eyes spoke volume the pain he went through, the love for nupur. He tried to look for nups love for him, but for some reason he couldn't read her eyes today they were blank, plain emotionless. Slowly he relized that nups was trying to take her hand out mayank's grip, he let it go. Nupur turned around now her back was facing Mayank.

Mayank: "Nupur….. main janta hun ki maine tumhare saath thik nahi kiya, I am sorry nupur, likin dekho ab sab kuch thik hogaya hai nupur, I love you nup…..". Nupur turned around and interrupted.

Nups: "please Mayank iske aage kuch mat kehna, pyar kyat um jaante ho ki pyar kya hota hai, it's a feeling where you don't hurt the person you love or tumne.....". Nupur said this a little harshly, which made Mayank a little angry.

Mayank: "Nupur tumhe kya lagata hai ki kya mujhe dard nahi hua, I was going through the same pain".

Nups: "pain what pain tumhe toh pyar ka matlab bhi nahi pata toh pyar ke dard kaise mehsoos karoge, aur yeh sab toh tum hi chahate the na, haan aj main tumhe kehti hoon ki main yeh shaadi sirf tumhare liye kar rahi thi, apne pyar ki liye kar rahi thi…..likin tum yeh sab sirf apne aur apni family ke liye kar rahe the, tumne ek baar nahi socha ki main kissi aur ke saath kaise rahungi, ki in sab cheezo ko kaise handle karungi, ek baar bhi nahi".

Mayank: "main jaanta hun nupur ki maine tumhe bohut hurt kiya tumhe apni family ko saath karne ke liye use kiya likin iska matlab yeh nahi ki tumse pyaar nahi karta, I love you nupur, aur ab hum yeh purani baatein kyun kar rahe hain sab kuch problems solve ho gayi hain, but I am sorry for what situation I put you in".

Nups: "Sorry kitna simple hain na Mayank Do you realize the pain I went through, I went to sleep crying every night, I woke up crying, I lost myself, I lost my smile, infact I was about to loose the people who have given me love with no conditions, but that's it I won't take this anymore, mujhe tumse aaj ki baad koi baat nahi karni, hamare beech main job hi kuch tah who tum ussi raat khatam kar chuke the". She was about to walk away, when Mayank got hold of her and pulled her back.

Mayank: "toh tum yeh kehna chahati ho ki tum mujhse pyaar nahi karti".

Nups: "ab nahi". Though, she said this looking down on the grass and tears froming in her eyes. She did love him, but her ego was coming between their reunion.

Mayank: "acha toh tumhare ankho main yeh ansoou kyun hai, nupur tum jitna marzi mujhse kaho ki you don't love me likin main yakeen nahi karunga kyunki tumhari ankhe toh kuch aur hi keh rahi hain, nupur please hum dono jaante hain ki we love each other, toh ab kimat ne jab hum waapis mila diya hai, ab please".

Nups: "nahi Mayank main koi doll nahi hun Mayank ki jab chaha mujhe chod diya aur jab maan kiya waapis agaye, I think ki mujhe meri life main bohut gham mil chuke yeh waapis pyar main padke main phirse iss pain ke thorugh nahi jaana chahati, main ab apni life sirf apni marzi se jeena chahati hoon". Nupur said this abruptly and left. Mayank knew that Nups anger was right he couldn't ask her to do whatever he wished, but he knew that their love was strong it will bring them together and pass one more love test.

Mayank: "I will win you back nupur, I will, I love you". Nupur was walking away.

Mayank: "aur tum bhi mujhse pyaar karti ho, toh tum jaroor palto gi". Nupur kept walking away, she was out of the park and out of mayank's sight, but he stood where he was, looking at her gate, nupur did look back and Mayank smiled.

It has been two weeks Mayank has been trying to talk to Nupur, but she would hang up on him. He was really frustrated by the Silent Treatment Nupur was giving him. He even tried going to her house few times, but now as she had gotten her job as a intern in hospital, she was there most of the time.

It was 10 "0" clock at night, Mayank entered Sanjeevni (hospital where Nupur works). He enters the Children ward Hallway, he notice Nupur she was walking towards him. He looked at her she was looking beautiful wearing a light pink suit. Nupur and Mayank were five feet apart when nupur actually noticed Mayank. Nupur gave him one look and walks past him. Mayank smiled to himself and thought (itna gussa sweetheat, koi baat nahi).

Mayank : "Nupur please stop". He gets a hold of her hand and turns her around.

Nupur: "Mayank let go of my hand".

Mayank Smirks: "oh so you still know my name huh".

Nups: "mayank please let go of my hand people are watching". The ward boys and some nurses were looking at them.

Mayank: "toh kya hua yeh akhir meri right hai".

Nupus: "no Mr. Sharma yeh aapka right tha".

Mayank: "nupur please stop acting childish, akhir itna gussa kyun Nupur".

Nupur: "Excuse me Mayank main yahan job karne aati hun apni private life ke problems solve karne ke liye nahi, aur mere paas faltu insano ke liye time nahi so please excuse me". She pulls her hands out of mayank's grip and walks away.

10 minutes later, mayank enters a small room, where lot of kids were sitting by nupur and she was dressing a kids injury. He walked over to her, she looked up and sighed seeing Mayank's face.

Nupur: "mayank tum yahan kya kar rahe ho tumhe ek baar main samaj nahi aata ki main tumse......"

Mayank: "Excuse me Doctor Nupur, main yahan dressing karane aya hun". He showed her his hand which was bleeding it was cut or rather he had injured himself. Nupur looked at him irritatedly she knew he had done this on purpose.

Nupur: "Sister Lovely". A nurse come in the room.

SL: "Kya hua Doctor Nupur".

Nupur: "Sister lovely kya aap inki dressing kar sakti hai I am a little busy right now". Mayank looks at Nupur, he knew it would be hard to talk to her she was really stubborn. Sister lovely did Mayank's dressing and he left. After twenty minutes, Nupur was about to go out of the dressing room, when she bumped into mayank. Nupur sighed she was about to say something when Mayank shows her his other hand, which was bleeding (not much), though nupur knew the cuts weren't deep they were just from a sharped pencil.

Mayank: "ab toh Sister Lovely bhi nahi hai dressing tumhe hi karni padegi"

Nupur goes back into room mayank follows her, he sits on the stool. Nupur puts a bandage and detol in front of him.

Nupur: "here you go mr sharma aap dressing kar lijiya, I am off duty". Nupur turned around and fixed her papers. She turned around mayank was scratching his cut, nupur sighed at his ignorance she took the detol bottle but some on the cotton and takes mayank's hand.

Nupur: "What do you want Mayank".

Mayank: "tum, nupur mujhe tumhari acception chahiye"

Nupur: "Mayank please meri life ko aur complicated mat banao". Nupur wraps a bandage around Mayank's hand, one layer of her was irritating her when mayank put it behind her ear, nupur shivered at his touch. She got up.

Nupur: "bas mayank please mujhe pershan karna band karo, hamare beech jo tha who sab ab...."

Mayank: "Please nupur agar sab kuch khatam hogaya hai toh phir mere dard se tumhe kyun takleef hoti hai, mere choone se tumhe kyun farak padta hai".

Nupur: "Mujhe tumhare kissi sawalo ka jawab nahi dena". She takes her purse and walks out of the room.

Mayank: "Enough Nupur aj tum mujhe ignore nahi kar sakti" He follows her.


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Posted: 14 years ago
fantastic update dear
hmmmmmmm so nupur was angry on mayank
i think nups reaction was natural
and i can understand both of them were in tough condition but nups was right mayank didnt take the right decision.
but anyway now mayu is trying to manofy nupur -thats very good

beautiful update
loved it dear
keep updating
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Posted: 14 years ago

hey nice update!

do cont soon!😊

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