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Aditi

@HealMeForever

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Posted: 15 years ago

#21

luvd it..

thanx for the pm😊

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AnotherAdmirer

@AnotherAdmirer

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+ 6

Posted: 15 years ago

#22

*Edited*

m sorry adi🤗

but i will blame u, u shudnt hv done this to me...i was clueless n the way u revealed it to me caught me offguard and so my completely insensible n rash behaviour...

nyways coming to the OS

I really Liked the beginning of the OS, Nupur's pain has ben reflected so well, and the poem...the poem is so heartrendering, its beautiful, u r really gud at writing em:-)

In a few words u express way too many emotions, even the words seem too small....i surely have no idea how it feels.

I liked the Gunur bond, and true at times frnds get seperated coz of studies n all, i liked the way GuNur still held onto each other, n the most heart-rendering part, gunjan didnt befriend any1 else as she feared ab Nupur's place in her heart, tht was so touching.

But coming towards the end, i didnt like the way Gunjan lost all hopes....no tht was wrong, gunjan should hv fought it, with her friend Nupur.

She should have overcome it rather than let it engulf her, Cancer did it, coz of tht she let go of the most precious thing to her..her Nupur.

What gunjan did would never ever let Nupur move on....she distanced herself n later when nupur came to know the truth, she must have gone thru so much guilt n so much pain....she must have questioned..didnt my frnd found me worthy enough to share her own pain?

Gunjan should have gone with the truth, n together Gunjan and Nupur wud have fought it.

Gunjan shudnt have lost hopes from life....she shud have lived the time she had like she never did before.... not in the dark, alone taking in all the pain alone....but spreading smiles around, living in the moment, making the most of it....i knw its too much to ask....its unfair to say so....but that's wat life is ryt?

One cant loose hope and wait for death...can they?

Luv U Sweety🤗

u have done me so proud! m so happy tht my friend is So Brave! Very very Brave🤗

i was reading again n u made me cry again...i will never forget this OS i have saved it on my lappy just lyk the poem u wrote for me My Unusual Friend....

Luv u with all my heart

ZJ🤗

Edited by VampirePrincess - 15 years ago

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Hina

@samratrocks

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+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#23

aww...howw chweet...

luved it to da coree....

aamzingg onee yaarr....

very well writteennn..!

gunurrr.. ssoo cutee..!

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talkativetaurus

@talkativetaurus

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Posted: 15 years ago

#24

aditi, it was beautiful, touchy, simple and very subtle. above that a very nice concept. keep it up!

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AnotherAdmirer

@AnotherAdmirer

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+ 6

Posted: 15 years ago

#25

edited my reply....ermm once again sorry adi....luv u🤗

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Alpenliebe

@Alpenliebe

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Posted: 15 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: me_mohit
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Yay!!!!! Me first!!!! :D

Now this is what I call "FRIENDSHIP"

Excellent Adi!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

The way you potrayed each and every feeling....it was just awesome!!!!!!!! And those poems.......Wow!!!! I need some Silence, I want to Cry........magical dear!!!!!! Kudos to you Jaan!!

I was actually crying while reading this...coz it reminded me of my Bestie...She got transferred to Mumbai while we studying in 8 th std....we used to be in touch...and the very same way...we woke up together and slept together.....And then later,We were unable to talk coz of higher classes and studies....during my Final Exams last year...i got the news of her death in an accident...it shattered me.....and I'm still here...w8in for her to come back...!!!!!

Lovely! Gr8 wrk Adi!!!!

Keep it up! :D

Hey sweetheart thanx a lot for your appreciation dear...it was just an OS, but ur story is real one n I cud understand, cud feel the pain you might have been going thru!!!! God give enof strength to those who lost their near n dear ones!!!!

love ya dear🤗

Aditi

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Alpenliebe

@Alpenliebe

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Posted: 15 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: zarfishan1983
VERY BEAUTIFUL OS

THX ALOT FOR THE PM

Thanx a lot dear for liking it!!!!

love ya dear🤗

Aditi

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ruchira maitra

@ruchira23

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#28

it was fantastic! keep writting..........its all remind me of my all time best friend, she is married now and i miss her so much.😔

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divineplan

@divineplan

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Posted: 15 years ago

#29

beautiful! Plz write more...👏

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Alpenliebe

@Alpenliebe

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+ 6

Posted: 15 years ago

#30

Originally posted by: AttractiveAdya
hey Adi🤗

its been ages I talked to you............

I hate you! yeah u heard me right I hate you to the core because each and every time u write a OS like dis and make me cry and weep!
But the fact still remains d same tht how much I try but I feel helpless and always read all of them!
Such a beautiful OS! 👍🏼⭐️
I so loved it

I felt so bad for both Gunur..........
they were /are so vulnerable !
I completely related to ur OS!

Keep up good work jaan
and do pm me wenever u write on anyone!

Luv Adz! 🤗

Hey Adzy, honey I m so so sorry dear...I made you cry...but I promise next time I gonna write a light hearted one dear!!!! Just loved ur reply it was so so sweet!!! n please dont hate me sweety!!!

love ya dear🤗

Aditi

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