MOVE ON!!!!A GUNUR SONGFIC!!!! - Page 5

Originally posted by: ar4evr

hiii adiiii

well i personally feel..infact i knw dat dis os is reflecting sum1s frndship...sum1s situation n inshort sum1 lifeeee..n dat sum1 z well aware of whom i am addresinggg

WEL WEN I READ D HEADING OF UR OS..I HAD NO Idea dat i'l get 2 read sumthng like dis....
bt wen i started reading it....infact jus after i read d startng 2 paras i knew wat n bout whom it z reflectinggg..
i knew wat would b wrtn further...bt still i was confuused..mayb wat i am xpecting vo na likha ho..
bt i was nt at olll surprised wen i read further...at one ppt i thght dat i wont read further...bt den i read it cz i wanted 2 knw hw mch pain n hw does d person feels who has portrayed bout sum1 thrgh gunur....
well i thnk...sryyy i mean i KNWWW dat dis os represnts 3 gals...dere frndship...n mst imp i gals lyfff n d pppl around dem...her grandparnts,,,....frnds n her health..her grief..her fear...n her pain....her pain of losingggg a gr8888 frnd n her fear dat she myt lose evrybdy
i wont take d name of dat person here cz she has asked me nt 2 mntn here..so i can nt evn write d names of her frnds...here..cz den ppl vil cum 2 knw bout dem...
i knw dis z nt a FICTIONAL os...bt dis z d raelity of sum1s lifeeee....wch my frnd aaaadi has penned down in her own words...cz she n i bth knw bout d 3 ppl....whom i toked above..n olso v bth knw dat whoz life n olll shz presentng....
i personalyyy feeel dat dis os is indeed d mirror image of ol dose 3 frnds n d close ones of one dem......

welll adiii i dint wrote a bit bout ur os...cz after reading d os i cud jus thnk n feel wat i wrote aboveeee..

waise jo bhi maine likha...vo sahi hainaaa..????????

n ya 1 vryyyyyy imp thng i 4gt 2 write earlier...n dat z i knw dat d climax of dis os had a sad ending..bt i am sure n i knwww dat d climax of d real story vil nt b like dis....

Originally posted by: SHAMSHIR-MJHT

ADITI !!

Really Great OS👏👏👏Superb Work Dear🤗Really All the moments were so cute & beautiful.😍Thanx 4 PM.

Originally posted by: MoNayaKiDeewani

W.O.W Aditi 🤗 .. Awesome GunUr OS ! Loved It To The Core, You Described Every Bit SO Amazingly Left Me Speechless 😳 .. Fantastic Work DO Write MORE 😃

Originally posted by: -mysterygirl-

aweosmeeeeeeeeeeeeee os loved it soo beautiful dnt have words to describe all i can say is jst⭐️ n thanx a lot for the pm

Originally posted by: taman07

i really liked it .

good one.

Originally posted by: Aditi_sajanfan

luvd it..

thanx for the pm😊

Originally posted by: VampirePrincess

*Edited*

m sorry adi🤗

but i will blame u, u shudnt hv done this to me...i was clueless n the way u revealed it to me caught me offguard and so my completely insensible n rash behaviour...

nyways coming to the OS

I really Liked the beginning of the OS, Nupur's pain has ben reflected so well, and the poem...the poem is so heartrendering, its beautiful, u r really gud at writing em:-)

In a few words u express way too many emotions, even the words seem too small....i surely have no idea how it feels.

I liked the Gunur bond, and true at times frnds get seperated coz of studies n all, i liked the way GuNur still held onto each other, n the most heart-rendering part, gunjan didnt befriend any1 else as she feared ab Nupur's place in her heart, tht was so touching.

But coming towards the end, i didnt like the way Gunjan lost all hopes....no tht was wrong, gunjan should hv fought it, with her friend Nupur.

She should have overcome it rather than let it engulf her, Cancer did it, coz of tht she let go of the most precious thing to her..her Nupur.

What gunjan did would never ever let Nupur move on....she distanced herself n later when nupur came to know the truth, she must have gone thru so much guilt n so much pain....she must have questioned..didnt my frnd found me worthy enough to share her own pain?

Gunjan should have gone with the truth, n together Gunjan and Nupur wud have fought it.

Gunjan shudnt have lost hopes from life....she shud have lived the time she had like she never did before.... not in the dark, alone taking in all the pain alone....but spreading smiles around, living in the moment, making the most of it....i knw its too much to ask....its unfair to say so....but that's wat life is ryt?

One cant loose hope and wait for death...can they?

Luv U Sweety🤗

u have done me so proud! m so happy tht my friend is So Brave! Very very Brave🤗

i was reading again n u made me cry again...i will never forget this OS i have saved it on my lappy just lyk the poem u wrote for me My Unusual Friend....

Luv u with all my heart

ZJ🤗

Originally posted by: samratrocks

aww...howw chweet...

luved it to da coree....

aamzingg onee yaarr....

very well writteennn..!

gunurrr.. ssoo cutee..!

Originally posted by: talkativetaurus

aditi, it was beautiful, touchy, simple and very subtle. above that a very nice concept. keep it up!

Originally posted by: bipasha23

it was fantastic! keep writting..........its all remind me of my all time best friend, she is married now and i miss her so much.😔