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Posted: 15 years ago
mehek........its beautiful...........i hope ki episode mein bhi hum aisa hi kuch dekh paye........plz cont........nd thanx for pm me
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Posted: 15 years ago
omg omg omg i jus loved it it ws awesum i wish da same happens in mjht plzzz i really wish dat vs read all dis n picturize on ur mayur it wud b a blast den

btw u r awesum
keep continuing it
Edited by cutiepie12 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
Mehak.......You are simply superb...Brilliant.......👏👏👏👏
⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
Wonderful update.....👍🏼👍🏼
Don't have words...I just want to hug you for such awesome updates.....🤗
Plz tum MJHT CV's ko apne ideas mail kar do.....I want to see these scenes in MJHT...😍😍😍😍
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Posted: 15 years ago
oh gawwd....mehak u r writing beautifully.....i've a request plzz do a scene where nups tries to fake happiness, n try to be extra bubbly n chirpy but mayank realises it n den she doesn't knw what to say, she starts cryin.....n one where she tries to leave mayank or harm herself or sumthin n then mayu tells her abt his pain in dese 3 yrs.....how he'z yearned for her n how her life belongs to him only n she cannot dare to leave him.....thnx

plzzzz cont this awesome os
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Posted: 15 years ago
Mehak plxxxxxxxxxx keep on writing 😆
luving every bit of ur OS....u r brilliant ⭐️⭐️
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Posted: 15 years ago
rest of my OS in the following thread..

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1490066&PID=34048529&#34048529

hope u all enjoy...😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
My freind Deepti wrote this scene for MN
I m posting it here-

Dhruv is now out of MN's life forever'.

Mayank takes Nupur home '. She is going to his house ' her house'' their house for the first time'.

Mayank opens the door'..

M: Nupur main ek second main aaya''.

Nupur tightens her grip around his hand and says'.Nahi' please mujhe chodke mat jaana'..

M: Nupur kuch nahi hoga''. Ab main hun na tumhare pass'.. ab kyun darr rahi ho'..but she doesn't let go'. Mayank gives in and goes into the house along with her'.

In the night''. When they are having dinner''.

N: By god '. Kya khana banaya hai Mayank'' lagta hai pichle teen saalon main'. Khana tumhi bana rahe the'..she suddenly stops remembering the 3 years and goes back to being quiet''

M: Acha'' par ab to tum banaogi na ''. Chef Mayank ki aaj se chutti'''

Nupur just nods her head not saying anything further'.. Mayank expects her to fight and so is left a little bewildered''

Right after dinner'. Nupur tells him she will take care of the kitchen but Mayank doesn't agree'.

M: Nahi Nupur''' tum aaj ke baad bahot thak gayi hogi''Main kar leta hun'..

N: Nahi Mayank '' main aagayi hun na main kar deti hun'.

M: Dekho waise bhi ab tum aagayi ho to aaj mujhe kar lene do''.. kal se to tumhe hi karna hai''.

Mayank tries a lot to lighten the atmosphere but Nupur keeps going back to the 3 years''

Mayank also wonders as to why did she not try to tell him in all these 3 years the she was alive''. Did she not trust him''' but these questions he thought again will have to wait'''. Wait until his Nupur gets better''.

M: Madam ke liye world ke best coffee banaun?

N: Hmm''

Mayank is just not used to his Nupur acting this quiet and tries even harder over the cup of coffee to cheer her up''' Mayank talks about movies, SRK''. Etc just so that Nupur feels better but to no avail. She has been through so much in the past 3 years that she has changed. He looks at her eyes and senses the fear''He vows to himself that he will get his bubbly, crazy Nupur back at all cost hoeever long and hard he may have to try.

He then takes her to their bed room''. Makes her sleep''.. Nupur feels safe and dozes off''..

He covers her with a blanket and goes back to the kitchen ''.. does the dishes , cleans etc''. and then sits down to prepare for the class tomorrow at college''Suddenly his cell phone rings''. Samrat calls'. Just to check on Nupur''.Mayank tells him shes ok and sleeping'.

Meanwhile''the moment Nupur hears the ring of the cellphone''.. she wakes up and is suddenly scared''.she gets panicky and starts sobbing'''

Mayank comes to check on Nupur and is shocked to see her in this state. He goes near her'..

N: Dekho maine kuch nahi kiya''.. vo main jaa rahi thi raste main aur main gir gayi to vo ladka mujhe help karne aaya''.. main kisi aur se pyaar nahi karti''. Please mujhe maarna mat'''

M: Nupur'' Shant ho jao'''. Kya hogaya'''. He tries to go near her''

N: Please mat maari mujhe''' main us ladke ko nahi jaanti'..

Mayank is really shocked and also feels bad as he realizes what his Nupur had turned into''.. He again tries to go near her '.

M: Nupur''.. main hun''. Tumhara Mayank'''. Main kyun maroonga tumhe'''Tumhe kuch nahi hoga Nupur'' tum aaram karo''

N out of impulse hugs him and holds on to him as if her life depends on him''

M hugs her back just to reassure her that shes safe''..

Nupur tells him that Dhruv used to have his friends spy on her and whenever he would meet a guy or some guy used to look at her'' she used to get beaten''.

He then brings her a glass of water and says '..

M: Nupur vo job hi hua ab tumhare saath kabhi nahi hoga''.. main tumhe kabhi bhi apne se door nahi hone dunga. Main Mayank hun.. tumhara Mayank'' main kabhi bhi tumpe haath nahi uthaoonga' aur naahi tum pe shaq karunga''.

N calms down a little bit and lies down''..

M: Mujhe thoda kaam hai main apna kaam yahin lekar aajaata hun ok''.tum aaram se so jao'.. bas yaad rakho ki main hun tumhare saath humesha''. Main is baar tumhe kabhi khone nahi doonga Nupur'' ye mere waada hai tumse''.

M starts working sitting nect to her on the bed''' and Nupur goes to sleep staring at him. She stirs in her sleep and he just puts a hand on her forhead ''. Once she knows he is around ''.. Nupur after about 3 years finally feels protected and sleeps with a smile on her face.


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Posted: 15 years ago
Awwww that scene was so heart wrenching Dj! Great job! Thanks for posting it here mou, but put it in the potential scenes thread too na!
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Posted: 15 years ago

wow. Deepti that is just beautiful. Thank You Mou, for posting it here and sharing it with us.

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Posted: 15 years ago
I want to share a scene i also wrote, it may not be good enough as the one above. But still its' an effort. 😆 -----------------------------------------------------------------------------------

Time Will Heal Everything <3

Pushing through the doors, she gasped as felt her husband, her companion for life hand slide up to her shoulders to comfort her. Strange she had been dying to be in his hold and now that she was within his grasp...all emotions from within were gone. She felt nothing....she was empty from inside.
Mayank glanced up to see the discomfort displaying on his dear wife's face, getting the hunch, he immediately took away his arm from her shoulder and smiled. Nupur grinned, walking inside with him trailing behind.
Everything was different....she felt different....she knew she was different., stopping in her tracks, Nupur found herself staring at their wedding picture. They looked so happy, and in love.....why did everything have to change? why did life have to be so painful?
Mayank placed his hand on her shoulder, turning her around to face him, he sighed, " i know its gonna take sometime....and i'm ready to give you as long as i can hold your hand and share your pain" Nupur looked within those eyes filled with endless love and smiled. She could do that for him, couldn't she? even if she wasn't in a place to communicate, she could let him know, she was okay and that having him by her side was enough for her to feel safe. But truthfully was it really enough? would she ever feel safe enough to share her sorrows with mayank? can she ever let go of the torture from within?....will her wounds ever heal?
Forcing herself to smile and she nodded and placed her hand within his, in hopes of making him calm and free of any worry.
They both walked upstairs and entered the bedroom. Nupur looked around quietly waiting for mayank to enter, but he stood still looking at her, " Nupur, this will be your room"
Instantly finding his face, she looked shock," but -- " she managed to say, Mayank smiled, " Its fine, I'm right next to you in this room" he said pointing towards the room opposite to hers.
"are you sure?" nupur asked unsure of his decision, " Yes"
Nupur walked inside and looked around, in the middle of the room lay a huge bed and above that hung a picture of her and mayank blissfully in love, tears engrossed her eyes but she managed to hide them as mayank walked inside.
"Mayank - " nupur said turning to face him, but he held her hand, through his eyes he told her, he knows and he is willing to do anything and everything..for her, " Nupur, I love you and I know you love me too but because....of some rough patches...you need time...and space to heal. And i'm happy to be there for you, even it means...just sitting beside you, while you fall a sleep. Nupur i want to give us a new beginning, i want to give our love a second try. I want you to feel you can share the burden of your shoulders with me. Trust me enough to let those tears fall infront of me. And i know that will take sometime. and i'm willing to wait"
"but how can a person wait?...everyone has a limit" nupur said sadly.
" i'm willing to wait my entire life.....if thats what you need" he responded with a comforting gaze.
Nupur couldn't believe her fate....she got an amazing person like mayank to share a her life with. Reaching out she grabbed his hand and entiwining it within hers, she smiled, " thank you...for understanding"
"Okay now get a goodnight sleep!" he stepped in to kiss her forehead, " goodnight" nupur replied closing her eyes.
Mayank walked to the door and looked back to catch a glismpe of her smiling face, he knew he would anything for that smile....even if meant having to wait for her. He would wait his entire life just to have his nupur back in his arms again.
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Silent withers filled the silence in the dark night, Mayank opened his door to check where the noise was coming from, only to realize it was coming from Nupurs room.
He slowly turned the knob and walked inside, the room was still dark. He could see her lying in the bed covered with a comforter, " nupur" he whispered slightly pulling off the comforter.
shocked out of his wits, he saw her sweating badly, and tears trailing down her innocense filled face. Instantly grabbing her hands he tried to comfort her but it was no use, those precious tears had no end to them.
" mayank don't ever leave me" she withered in her sleep." mayank muhje bacha lo, please...Mayank.....MAYANK" she yelled getting up.
Mayank instantly pulled her into a hug, running his hands up and down her back to sooth her nerves, " mayank you won't leave me na?...Mayank don't ever leave me.." her words were filled with fear and helplessness.
Mayank closed his wet eyes trying to comfort nupur to best he could,but it was getting harder and harder..just to see her like this and knowing he couldn't do anything but hold her hand was killing him from inside.....
Sooner of later nupur fell a sleep in grasp feeling safe, placing her down gently, mayank got up to leave only to feel her strong grasp on his arm. He smiled and sat down on the floor, after pulling the comforter over.
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I love you Nupur" pushing a strand of her hair away from her beautiful eyes..Mayank smiled, he slowly closed his eyes in hopes that time would heal this distance between them.
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I hope you like it.
Cheers
Edited by -Sajjal- - 15 years ago

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