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Posted: 15 years ago

#101

Mehek Awwsome OS....loved them ...

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Ansha

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Posted: 15 years ago

#102

mehak u are a brilliant writer......luved both of ur OS 👏👏 i jx hope CVs are thinking on showing smthn lyk ds

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Fantasia.

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Posted: 15 years ago

#103

thank u so much guys...so all make me feel on the top of this world...muah to u all...🤗

Edited by mehak03 - 15 years ago

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Fantasia.

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Posted: 15 years ago

#104

ok guys i have written the third part also(part 1 on pg 1, part 2 on pg 14)...i hope u ll dont not bored...😕, but i just cant help writing on MAYUR...

Nupur again went to see her house, she was gently touching all the things of the house.,she wanted that the essence should penetrate through her soul...she stared at each and every piscure for hours, as if she had forgotten where she was standing and wanted to go back to the e tme of the time of the pisture...

She didnt even realise when the phn rang..she went to the phn..

M..nupur?..

N..haan mayank...

M..kia kar rahi ho?

N...umm kuch nahi...bus aise hi...

M..khana khaya hai?

N...khana?..

M..mujhe pata tha k bhool jao gi...fridge main ne ne tumhari favourite dum allo banaye hain, garam aro aur kha lo..ok...

N..ok....

Mayank wanted to say something more, wanted to ask that is she missing her , but he refrained himself..

M..ok bye...

Nupur went to the kitchen and ate her lunch, not bcz she was hungry, but bcz she could feel the essence of maynk's love coming out of it...

Nupur made herslf strong enough, she want to give maynk the impression that she realised that she is not alone, she changed, and wanted that mayank should be happy seeing her that she is forgetting her past, but the reality was that she WAS NOT..she still was fighting with her, still every vioce made her alert that may be dhruv had returned, still his wild eyes followed her, but tt SHE WAS WITH MAYANK..and this gave her some courage..

She heard a car horn, she went down staris and opened the door..mayank was standing there smiling, she herself tried to smile..

M..hii...

N..hii...

mayank walked inside and nupur followed her..

M..so kaisa raha din...

N...ye tu mujhe pochna chaiye...

Mayank turned towards her, she said it so plainly and with such innocence that mayank couldnt help smiling...

M..well is main kia hai...hum main se koi bhi poche ...right?..

Mayank looked straight in her eyes..., she lowered them and took the files from his hand...

Mayank and nupur both walked inside the home mayank was constantly talking..

M..tum ne khana khaya tha?

N..haan..

M..kaisa tha..

N..acha tha...

M..jala hua tu nahi tha..

N..nahi....main cofee banao?

M..well aj chai ka mood hai tu chai bana do..

N..ok..

Mayank again exected that nupur would fight with him that why is he not drinking coffe bcz he doesnt likes her coffee, but nthing of that sort happened...he went to the room

Mayank called nupur from the rromm..

M..nupur..

Nupur was down stiars she went to the room..

M..trouser tu change kar liya hai main ne per meri koi shirt nai mil rahi hai...

N..wo main ne uper rakh di thi

She took out and gave it to him.

Myaank was about to open the buttons of his shirt when suddenly nupur turned her face away..mayank relaised his mistake...he immeditely said..

M...nupur tum bhol gayi ho tumhari chai hai choley per...

N...haan...

Nupur breathed a sigh of relief and immdieately left..mayank on the othr hand realised that there is gap built n between which he knew he would get on..

Mayank and nupur had dinner, the same dum alloo, mayank gaain was telling her about college and she again wa straing maynka nd smiling at him..

Mayank was reading a file in his room when nupur came..

N..mayank ye...

M..ye kai hia..tumhari dairy?

N..haan.. parh lo..

M..ku?

N..is main main ne sab kuch likha hai..3 saal tak kia hua hai mere sath, sab likha hai..sach sach..parh lo..

M..ku parhon?

Nupur looked at him...

N..mayank tumhe hag hai ye jane ka k merey sath kia hua hai..main kis haal main rahi hon...main tumahre laiq hon ya nahi..

Mayank put his fingers on her lips...

M..nupur please...For God sake...merey pyar ko aise sharminda mat karo...haan sach hai k main jana chata hon k tumhare sath kia hua..lekin aisey nahi...main tumhara dard batna chata hon, tum se sawwal nahi kar raha...

N..mayank muje se nahi kaha jaye ga..plz main..

M..tu thek hai, jab batana chaho tab bata dena....aur tumhe mujh se kuch kehne k liya koi sahara nhai chaiye...samjhi...

Nupur was looking at him

He cupped her face in his hands..

M..nupur main tumhe kabhi chor kar nahi jaon ga..kabhi bhi nahi....tum merey pas wapis a gay ho, i promise ab koi hamare beech main nahi aye ga..i really really love u nupur...i really do....

Maynk smiled at her and expected that she would also smile but she said

N..tum ne jo kaha hai tum us se peche tu nahi hato gey na...?

Mayank was shocked at her question......SUCH EMPTY EYES!!,....he really didnt know how to make her realise..how to give her confidence..how to make her happy...this was indeed the biggest test of his love...even bigger than when he had almost lost her..at that time he was away from nupur, but this time...nupur is away from herself....

hope u all like it..

part 4 on pg 15

Edited by mehak03 - 15 years ago

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Mou.

@Mou.

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Posted: 15 years ago

#105

mahek a big jhappi to u from my side🤗 u know i just can't imagine to show nupur's recovery track in a better way than this one...........the scene u r writing....it is just what we all would love to c on MN.....plz i m requesting u , send this to cvs....i m sending ,u do it too..............

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shakti_rock

@shakti_rock

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#106

oohhh mehak gurl...u r just so gud in imagining mayur..

wish cvz gets sum inspiration frm u.....u hv gt a fan nw....in me...

i reallu luvd all the 3 scenes..plzzz cvs plzzz read dem n include dem...dey r reallu gud...

mehak luv seeing mayur thru ur eyes....keep writing..

m luvin it.....if nt in mjht i can u see mayur scenes thru ur eyes....

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Rabia

@.Rabia.

Navigator

Posted: 15 years ago

#107

agree with everyone
mehak all parts were just great
keep writing
hope cvs will include these scenes

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shajia_m

@shajia_m

Inactive

Posted: 15 years ago

#108

Omg mehak!! i'm speechless!!! i've read all three scenes n i cant explain hw beautifully u've written dem..👏👏
I seriously hope cvs read dis n show us sth lik dis...ur too awesome mehak!!!👍🏼

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Fantasia.

@Fantasia.

Stunner

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Posted: 15 years ago

#109

hey guys..so making full use of the weekend, i am writing one more part...😛

part1 on pg 1
part 2 n pg 12
part 3 on pg 14

PART 4:

Mayank wanted to answer her question but he was unsure, what to say..

M..tumhe kaise bharosa dialon nupur?..tum batao?

N.. wada karo....

M..mujhe tumhari her muskurahat ki kasam hai..main tumhe kabhi chor ka nahi jaon ga..

Mayank felt that this somewhat spread a peace on her face.
she wiped of all her tears and was turned towards the dressing table., where she took of her bangles,

Mayank expected that she would say something but he was happy that he somewhat saw a slight satisfaction on her face.

mayank again held his file...Nupur was looking at mayank though the mirror, he was silently turning pages of the file

Nupur felt that she was responsible for all the problems of mayank, even after coming back she could not give him the happiness and love he deserved..

N..main tumhain bht tang karti hon na...

Mayank looked at her, she was standing facing the mirror and looking at him through the miror , he came to her and stood behind her,

now both of them were looking at each other through the miorror...

maynk bent sligthly towards her neck ....nupur closed her eyse in confusion, he inclined towards her ear and gently said..

M..nahi...tum mujhe bht pyar karti ho...

She immedieately opened her eyes,and turned her face towards mayank, he was smiling and nupur was lost into that magical love in his eyes......

M..acha ab agar asie hi ik dosre ko dekhte rahen gey tu subah ho jaye gi..

Nupur immedeitely turned her face away...

M..good night...

He went to the bed and picked up all his files and placed them on the table and went to sleep...

Maynk hadnt said anything to nupur abput sleeping bcz he wantd her to make her decision herself..he wanted her to decide where she was somfortable...near him or away from him..

he waited that whether she will leave the room or sleep with him on the same bed...He closed his eyes just to give the impression that he had slept...

Nupur was standing at the mirror and and the she turned towarda mayank, she was very confused what to do, whether to sleep on the couch or bed,

she headed towards the couch and sat on it, she was still looking at mayank..

maynk realised that she was giong to sleep on the couch, he didnt open his eyes at all..

For some time nupur kept staring, her mind was absouletely blank...she looked at him and then she got up and headed towards the bed, what feeling made her do that..she herself didnt knew..

she cautiously lied down oppoisite to mayank, just not to disturb his sleep..

mayank was facing the other side, he realised that nupur ha come,,,he opened his eyes, just tilted his head a bit and saw that nupur was there with her eyes closed,

after sometime, when mayank was sure that she was asleep he turned his face towards her

he got his answer that nupur was comfortable NEAR HIM...

he smiled and kept on looking at her and brushing his fingers in her hair when he himself didnt realise when he aslo went asleep.

hope u all like it..😊

Edited by mehak03 - 15 years ago