how do u wanna c MN after this? post ur ideas here

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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey guys...
i know this dhruv track is almost coming to an end.....& we all know after that w will get a sg reunion track. But even Mayank & nupur will get back together after 3long years of gap. how do u wanna c their track progress now?
As my friend senny said there should be some awkward moments between them ...the moments that we all wanted to c after their marriage, but we never get to c that...i really don't want to c they goes for another sajda just immediately after this track wraps up
there can be a recovery track for nupur .....she beard a lot in this 3yeras.....& many more things.....
what do u think? post ur ideas here.....😃...
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Posted: 15 years ago
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EDITED..ok guys i have written a scene..😛

this is the first time after re-union when MAYUR enter thier home, gunajn and samar have left and now both of them are alone oi thier home..Nupur is looking at her home with longing eyes...a simple smile on her face..

M..kiasa laga?

N..haan?

M..ghar?

N...*smiles*...bht acha hai...

M.....yaad hai jab main bengalaru ja raha tha aur hum date pe gaye thye, tab us shed main tum ne mujhe bataya tha k tumhe kaisa ghr chaiye...main ne bilkul wiasa hi banaya hai..

he held her hand and took her to the curtains..

M..ye dekho bilkul waise hi bari bari windows aur in pe parde...

he then moved towards the lounge..

M..ye dekho sab se bara tv liya tha main ne...aur ye dekho kitchen..

he then took her to the kitchen.

M...yahan pe sari machines hain...bus coffee - maker nahi hai...

nupur was smilinga nd admiring her dreams which were standing in front of her...

M..ab main tumhe hamara kamra dikhata hon...

He took her hand and they both went in thier room...

M..dekho hamari shaadi ki picture...kaisi hai nupur...

N...bilkul sapno jaisa hai sab kuch...

Mayank realsied that nupur was very quiet, she was just staring at everything..It was him talking all bout the house but nupur was just staring..

M..umm nupur..

N..haan?

M..dinner kia karo gi?

N...kuch nai...

M...aisa kasie kuch nai..kuch tu kha lo..

N..nahi...

She was still staring at thier marriage picture..

M...acha world ki best coffee piyo gi?..

These words made her turn towards mayank, her eyes fuilled with tears......she wanted to speak but couldnt..

M..tum change lkar lo, main coffee lata hn...

Nupur wiped off her tears and siad..

N..wo mera samman tu..

M..arey haan..

he held her hand again, and took her to the cupboard and opened it fro her..

M...ye tumhre kapre.
..
and then he left..

Nupur gently touched her clothes...it was all her things she owoned three years back...thier gentle touch made her cry again, but she took aher night suit and went to change...

Mayank entered with the coffee and nupur was standing in the window...

M..here madam!...

Mayank had a smile o his face and nupur was lost into it, she held the cup..

M..main bhi change kar leta hnon..

Mayank went to change and nupur took a sip...it was the same flavour...the same taste..the same LOVE...she held the cup tightly...and brought it close to her...she was crying and she drank it in one go!..

Mayank came back and saw nupur with the empty cup..

M..nupur itni garam coffee pi bhi li?

Nupur was shocked at his question, she didnt even realise that it was HOT...all she felt was MAYANK's LOVE, she wanted it to feel it to its fullest extent so drank it in one go..

M..nupur?

N..haan?..umm..wo nahi...itni garam nahi thi...

Nupur turned her face, she didnt wanted to revel her tears..mayank wanted her to talk..

M..nupur...tum mujhe se koi baat nahi karo gi...

She turned..

N..ahh..wo main kia kahon?

Some thing broke inside mayank, the girl who wanted no reason to talk now couldnt utter a word from her mouth...the pain she had been giong through had completely changed her..his bubbly talkative nupur had turned into a silent girl...whose eyes just conveyed pain....

He went close to her..

M..mujhe batao gi nahi k tum ne mujhe kitna yaad kiya hai?

These words broke nupur...this was the question she herself couldnt answer...tears were dwelling in her eyes.....but she turned her face, she wasn't able to gain the strength to face mayank.,..

Mayank turned her face towards him...

M...pehle zara sa kuch hota tha tu kitna bolti thi k mujhe ye ho gaya , wo ho gaya..aj nahi batao gi k kitna dard saha hai?..

Nupur was looking into his eyes...she wanted to speak but words weren't cordinating with her thougts...her lips were trembling to speak but the immense pain inside her came out in the form of tears.....

mayank brought her a bit close and she clucthed her shirt and paced her head on his shoulder and started crying...mayank gently brushed her fingers on her head...she tightly held his shirt in her fist...she was continously crying....mayank could realsie that she wanted to speak but was helpless...all he could hear between her sobs was,....

N...main.....wo...mayank.....

he made her sit on the sofa but nupur didnt leave her shirt, niether did she lifted her head from his chest....she went on crying and mayank went on brushing his fingers on her head, her sobs slightly fainted and mayank saw that she fell asleep..he wiped off all the tears from her cheeks, he knew that his nupur was completely shattered...and he had to RE-BUILD HER!

hope u all like it..😊

part 2 on page 12
part 3 on page 14
part 4 on page 15

Edited by mehak03 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Thanks for making this thread Mou 🤗

I will post my ideas later. As of now, I agree with Senny 😆
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Awkward moments, recovery track. At least for a month.
Then a nice Sajda.

Not romance so soon. 😳
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Posted: 15 years ago
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i want to see them supporting each other emotionally....also showing how much they missed them in 3 long years.... so yes some scenes showing "love heals" and also some cute scenes between the hubby and wife 😳
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hhmmm..kash benia n dodo bhayya ajate then saara gang masti karta romance fun n happiness onlyyy no ron dhona yakk love mjht....
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Very smart Ayesha!😆

After Dhruv is out of the picture. I don't want Mayank and Nupur to be back to how they were three years back overnight. When they finally get rid of Dhruv they might embrace each other out of impulse but their whole relationship should be rebuilt and a brand new story should be started for MN( Courtesy Boyzone).

Mayank and Nupur would finally get to be together after three years and being separated for a long time back has brought a space in their relationship which should be covered gradually and slowly not abruptly!

MN would feel awkward with each other, with each other's touch. Especially for Nupur as she has been tortured for three years and lived far off, it would be hard for her to adjust back and forget the three years, it should be shown how she missed him and speak about her time without him, what she felt and what she underwent!

MN shouldn't be reduced to random fights and random scenes here and there. But a proper and constant re- development of their relationship and getting attracted again!

Would add in some more later.

Thanks for the post Mou!
Edited by Senny - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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I want to see just Mayank and nupur romance atleast for month akhir unho na 3 saal itna kuch saha ha they deserve it.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: ratilover2

after this???? for me its romance , romance and romance of mn only sorry for being selfish but i love y mayur sooooooooooooo much!!!!!!!!!

u r not selfish we allwant that,but romance can be various type......3years is long gap, many things hv changed between them.....i mean i want to c some moments between them, some adjustments, some nok jhok .it wilbe too soon & cliche if they straight go for a sajda type of romance right now......i want them to talk abt how much thy missed each other & all........😍
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Posted: 15 years ago
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senn .i loved ur idea.......i want them to start a brand new story again for our MN , no random fight , no random romance, a proper track that will show how the rebuild their relationship & gradually decrease the gap of 3years!!!!!!!!

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