Me and My shell- MJHT OS. Epilogue on page 27 - Page 7

Originally posted by: achoose

mindblowing update dear............................its very sad that their relationship is getting sour.............

Originally posted by: VampirePrincess

Heya!

ur update made me log in!!

Its so damn interesting, LoVeD it!:D

I was so spellbound by the emotions n all....cudnt take my eyes off, n when the chap ended i was like damn i wanna read more...!

m eager to knw wat next, seems like nupur doesnt care abt gunjan anymore....i mean cmon yaar, she didnt even wish gunjan on her bday for some guy she met few months back! thts bad, hope the next chap makes up for it...or r u gonna make me hate nupur for being a really bad friend?

Lets see

Awesome Update!

Do cont soon:)

Luv

ZJ

Originally posted by: Dr.Zombie

Hey Amy dear....wel I will give comments for both 2nd and 3rd part here only...

Dear I must say this OS is so close to our day to day life...This a one most common thing..A person comes from a small town, then makes frnds their and gets addicted to the glitter of big town!!!!

The same hapenned to Nupur...she found a gud frnd in Gunjan...but as soon as she gets familiar to life in a big city she is lost!!!!!

Now you have portrayed that part beautifullt dear...then obviously Gunjan is hurt n heartbroken and as a normal teenager she blames Nupur's famous boyfrnd for the damage!!!!

These are very crucial moments in life n we need advices oof our elders n Gunjan did that same....it was nice that Gun's mom toked to her n I think this gonna help her to come out of her frustration!!!

Truly dear, its amazing, so real....you are a great writer dear....try to continue soon.....

ur's
Aditi

Originally posted by: Divya_kaldivya

I hope Nupz accepts her mistake and Gunjan also accepts Mayank as her best friends lover.... Nice update..

Originally posted by: -Mansi-

Awww...that was such a cute update! I really liked the story..This story is actually a reality of todays life///:(

Continue soon!

Originally posted by: sharma.nat

Wonderful and mind blowing update really feeling bad for gunjan as she is left alone and feeling lonely Loved the emotions you potrayed for all the individuals and Gunjan and her mother scene in the end was awesome loved it completely do continue soon

Originally posted by: Mjhtrox11

Heyy!!

mayank entered!! yay!!

Will samrat enter too?? im actually waiting!!!

This could be a small ff! but plzz plzz continue!

N now coming to your update:

IT WAS AWESOMMEEE!!!

It was just so perfect! mayank and nupur were together and gunjan felt jealous!

Well on one side nupur is rite as only she goes to gunjan gunjan never makes and effort to go with her!

n even gunjan is rite in a way that nupur has changed and has started avoiding her!

Hmmm!! lovelyy!!

Continue sooon!

N i wanna see samrats entrance!