Me and My shell- MJHT OS. Epilogue on page 27 - Page 5

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Posted: 15 years ago
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awesome update amy

thx alot for the pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
#42
beautiful update
very realistic coz this kinda thing happens a lot
looking forward to the next part
do continue soon😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
#43
OMG may i loved your OS amy.It was lovely
after a long time it,s a gunur OS!Just wonderful!
too good cont soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hey guys, thanks for all your comments.

Here is the next part. Well i expected it to end by around 5-6 parts... but as i started writing , i am getting much more ideas.... hehe... its a FF material... but anyways... now i'll stop.. enjoy reading...

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It was during 3rd year of college when Mayank, the 4th year B.tech student entered Nupur's life. He was supposed to be the most handsome and intelligent guy of the college. Mayank had the looks of a model with a very sexy voice due to which he used to compete most of the college shows. Girls were in love with his dimples. He was a greek god for them.

Mayank and Nupur met in a common friend's party. He immediately got attracted to Nupur's bubbly nature and her big, sparky eyes, full of life. Nupur was already a fan of him like most of the girls in college. They started meeting frequently, in canteen, in library, outside college, for every possible reason they could think of.

Meanwhile, Gunjan got busy with her seminar's, classes and labs. Nupur, who used to be around Gunjan was so busy with her new 'Friend' Mayank, that she never realized how recluse Gunjan is becoming day by day.

It was during the month of January, when Nupur came to gunjan's house one day.

"Gunji, you know what? Mayank asked me to be his partner." Nupur was super excited.

"Partner? In what?" Gunjan asked with a confused look on her face.

"Well, like every year, Mayank, The Greek Gawd is performing in the talent parade of the college. And this time, he chose Nupur Bhushan, the queen of hearts as his salsa partner. Uff' how lucky I am'!" Nupur exaggerated.

"Oh! Good. Best of luck." Gunjan said in a detached tone.

"Gunji yaar. Not fair! You are not even showing 0.1% excitement of what others did. Didn't you hear me properly? I'm performing with Mayan'"

"Mayank Sharma. The greek god. That's what you all call him na. So whats the big deal, Nupur?" Gunjan replied curtly, "Good for you, but I'm not interested."

"Gunji, Why are you behaving like this?" Nupur seemed hurt. Gunjan looked at her and cursed herself for her sudden outburst.

"I'm sorry Nupsie. Its just that I'm stuck up with this stupid seminar and I took out all the frustration on you." Gunjan Bluffed. She didnt want nupur to find out about her insecurities.

"Well, that's why I keep telling you honey. Take a break from all your books. Find some life yaar." Nupur said coming back to her usual self.

You found yours, but I am not able to find it Nupsie' Gunjan thought sadly.

It was the day of Mayank and Nupur's dance performance. Gunjan didn't feel like going in all that crowd, but went anyways. She knew Nupur will be waiting for her best luck flower as she always used to give her from school days.

She went to the changing room, but Nupur was not there.

"Aryan!" she called out the coordinator, "Have you seen Nupur anywhere?"

"She'll be on the backstage. Next performance is theirs." He gave her a don't-you-know-that kinda look.

"Well, thanks." She muttered and ran to backstage. But she was late. The salsa already started.

As usual , nupur was too good. But when her grace met mayank's swiftness, the stage was set on fire. Their chemistry was excellent. Gunjan stood there in one of the wings and waited for her friend. She was so happy and proud.

The auditorium was roaring with cheers and applauds. And as soon as the curtain fell, Nupur and mayank were rounded by people. Gunjan , who was allergic to the crowd, waited for her in a corner. But Nupur suddenly disappered with Mayank at one moment.

As they made their way through the crowd, Gunjan followed them. She saw Nupur entering the changing room.

"Finally, I can tell my nupsie how well she danced." 'gunjan thought.

"Hey Nupur, You look stunning today." Gunjan overheard a husky voice as she was about to enter the room. She stopped there.

"Thanks Mayank. You look great too." Nupur said shyly.

"Nupur'. Ummm" mayank continued with hesitation, "I wanted to tell you something from many days, but was waiting for the right time. I' Will you' ummm' I love you Nupur." He finally said it.

Nupur, was on top of the world when she came to know about Mayank's feelings.

"Oh, mayank. I'm so glad you said it. I love you too." And they hugged.

Gunjan looked at the flower in her hand, and then at the couple.

"Maybe she got what she wanted. She doesn't need this anymore. I'm happy for you Nupsie" she wiped a lone tear which escaped from her eye.

With Nupur and Mayank's love affair going strong, Gunjan distanced more and more from Nupur. Gunjan hated Mayank to the core and blamed him for ruining the friendship between her and Nupur. Nupur who was blind in love, didn't understand the feelings of Gunjan. During 3rd and 4th year of college, Nupur and Gunjan rarely used to spend together. Going to each others homes became almost null. Nupur started suspecting Gunjan to be jealous of her on the other hand Gunjan used to miss Nupur and longed for her to be like her old school friend.

One day during the 4th year of her college, Gunjan was alone in her room and was crying looking at the old photos and greeting cards which she got from Nupur for different occasions.

"Gunjan what happened? Why are you crying?" asked Gunjan's mom with worried look.

"Nothing..its just that" said Gunjan trying to wipe of the tears from her cheeks.

"Kya hua beta..something wrong in college?" said Gunjan's mom

With that Gunjan hugged her mom and started sobbing.

"arey arey..what is this..i never saw you crying this way..tell me what happened..did Nupur say something to u?" asked Gunjan's mom. Gunjan's mom observed the growing distance between Gunjan and Nupur but she never talked about it with Gunjan.

"mom..why do people change in college..why do we get old..school days used to be so good" said Gunjan between her sobs.

"beta..thats life..there's a saying "the only thing which remains constant is change"..you are not a small girl now..you should understand this..going to college, getting married, getting career, getting old..all this is part of life..you should learn to accept this.."said Gunjan's mom caressing Gunjan's hair.

"No I will never marry in my life for sure. I cannot accept that some
outsider comes and changes other relationships in life. I will not let that
happen to my life" said Gunjan strongly.

Gunjan's mom chose not to argue with her at that time and hoped time will
change her attitude towards life.
"Mom you know this year Nupsie forgot to wish me on my birthday. Since that
Mayank came into her life, nothing else is important to her. And tomorrow its her birthday and I don't feel like wishing her either" said Gunjan

"Why not..thats wrong..you should wish her..if you don't wish her there wont
be difference between you and her. May be after u wish she will realize her mistake. You should atleast give a try to revive your old friendship." Said Gunjan's mom convincing her to call Nupur.

"Maybe you're right." Gunjan said after thinking for a while," I will call her. "

And she hugged her mother with a smile.


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Edited by amy00487 - 15 years ago
sreevijayan thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
#45
mindblowing update dear............................its very sad that their relationship is getting sour.............
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Posted: 15 years ago
#46
Heya!
ur update made me log in!!
Its so damn interesting, LoVeD it!:D
I was so spellbound by the emotions n all....cudnt take my eyes off, n when the chap ended i was like damn i wanna read more...!
m eager to knw wat next, seems like nupur doesnt care abt gunjan anymore....i mean cmon yaar, she didnt even wish gunjan on her bday for some guy she met few months back! thts bad, hope the next chap makes up for it...or r u gonna make me hate nupur for being a really bad friend?
Lets see
Awesome Update!
Do cont soon:)
Luv
ZJ
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Posted: 15 years ago
#47
Hey Amy dear....wel I will give comments for both 2nd and 3rd part here only...

Dear I must say this OS is so close to our day to day life...This a one most common thing..A person comes from a small town, then makes frnds their and gets addicted to the glitter of big town!!!!

The same hapenned to Nupur...she found a gud frnd in Gunjan...but as soon as she gets familiar to life in a big city she is lost!!!!!

Now you have portrayed that part beautifullt dear...then obviously Gunjan is hurt n heartbroken and as a normal teenager she blames Nupur's famous boyfrnd for the damage!!!!

These are very crucial moments in life n we need advices oof our elders n Gunjan did that same....it was nice that Gun's mom toked to her n I think this gonna help her to come out of her frustration!!!

Truly dear, its amazing, so real....you are a great writer dear....try to continue soon.....

ur's
Aditi
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Posted: 15 years ago
#48
I hope Nupz accepts her mistake and Gunjan also accepts Mayank as her best friends lover.... Nice update..
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Posted: 15 years ago
#49
Awww...that was such a cute update! I really liked the story..This story is actually a reality of todays life///:(
Continue soon!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#50
Wonderful and mind blowing update really feeling bad for gunjan as she is left alone and feeling lonely Loved the emotions you potrayed for all the individuals and Gunjan and her mother scene in the end was awesome loved it completely do continue soon

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