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Divya

@MyInspirationz

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 15 years ago

#91

WOW!!! I jumped after seeing your PM and now the update is just WOW!!!

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ardhana

@ardhana

Inactive

Posted: 15 years ago

#92

wow just an mindblowing update am sure now mayur will rock

ps:thanks for the pm

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Faria Ferdousi

@Faria.

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#93

Hey dear
awesome ff
fantastic
its really very interesting.
Do continue it
add me to ur pm list

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Fantasia.

@Fantasia.

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#94

thanks a lot guys and please dont be sorry, it is really embarrasing..😳

PART 14:

It was one of the beautiful moments of nupur's life, but it had to be cut short..

N...mayank ab mujhe jana chaiye...

M...haan..ok, chalo main tumhe gate tak..

N..nahi mayank, main khud chali jaon gi, plese..

M...ok,

Mayank kissed her hands and she ran away from the room, but mayank was sure that he ha given nupur the confidence of thier relation.

Next morning, direct sunshine was ditsurbing mayank's eyes as he wanted to sleep some more, but the sunshine was constant, he opened his eyes and saw a blurred image of NUPUR!...she as standing, with her beutiful wet hair on one side, and wearing a red shalwar suit. Mayank sat totally upright..

M..nupur tum..

N..finally!...good morning Mr.Sharma, adhe ghabte se ap ko uthane ki koshish kar rahi hon..

M..tum itni subha...

N..haan, kia karon tum se promise jo kiya tha k aaj se her subha timhare samne hon gi..

M..haan nupur lekin..

N...ok ok, ziada tension mat lo, actually kal jab main room se nikli thi tu thori dair gunjan aur samrat k pas bethi thi aur phir JD ka mujhe phn aya k main ik hafte tak outhouse se bahar nahi niklo, tu main wapis a gayi, waise b agly ik hafte tak wo mujh se koi contact nahi kare ga..

M..lekin JD ne aisa kaha ku?

N..wo main ne us se kaha tha k police k pas mera photo hai, tu wo dar gaya hai...

M..aur tum raat ko hi wapis a gayi...

N..haan..

M...great!, per tum ne mujhe uthaya ku nahi?

N...tum sotey hoye itney pyare lag re they, k main tumhain dekhte dekhte hi so gai...

M...well agr tum mujhe utha deti tu shiyed tumhain aur b pyara lagta...

nupur smiled..

N...very funny, naina ka phn aya tha, wo ik ghante main a rahi hai...

When naina entered their room, the first thing she saw were nupur's bright smiling eyes,and the shine on her face, she understood that her words hsd affecfted mayank, she looked at mayank and gave her a thanking smile which mayank responded..

NK...well main ne sara plan work out kar liya hai...hum JD k against FIR launch karen gey..

S..kis k naam se..

NK...Mayank Sharma...

M...mere naam se kaise?.

NK...haan ap!, ap ye complaint karen gey k JD ne ap ki wife ko kidnap kiya hua hai...

G..lekin JD tu araam se prove kar de ga k di apni marzi se rehti hai..

NK...thats the piont!...yehi JD bhi soche ga k main arram se prove kar lon ga, lekin phir hum is case ko 3 saal peche tak le jaye gey...

N...lekin merey pas koi proof nahi hai..

NK...dont worry nupur, JD k pas bhi koi proof nahi hai... ye case proof se ziyada strenght pe chale ga, ap ko bus strong rehna hai, ap sachai ki taraf hai tu bus sach bolna hai app ko..

M...naina are u sure it will work..

NK...definetely. lekin nupur ap ko JD k pas wapis jana pare ga..

N...ok, main chali jati hon..lekin JD ne mujhe ik hafte tak outhouse main band rehne ko kaha hai, us ko lagta hai k police mujhe dhoond rahi hai..

NK...that is even better,, ap JD k pas jayen aur hum FIR launch karne ja rahe hain...mian ne sare papers ready kar liye hain..

ALL four of then moved towards the exit, nupur and mayank moved away from each other, hoping that it is the last time they will be move in oppiste directions..

do comment..😊

Edited by mehak03 - 15 years ago

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315925

Hibernated

Posted: 15 years ago

#95

Awesome again...it's getting more and more gripping by the minute =)

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Faria Ferdousi

@Faria.

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#96

Hi mehak
very nice update
the morning scene was good.
u hope Naina's plan will work.
good job
keep it up

one request try to add the link when u pm us , so that we can easily access ur ff

take care

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Fiza

@mayurian-artian

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#97

it wz brilliant i luv u 4 dat update

hope Mayur get 2geder soooon

luv

Fiza

Edited by mayurian-artian - 15 years ago

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Jessie

@jes_jade

Rocker

Posted: 15 years ago

#98

Wonderful update(part 13 & 14) Mehak!!!
I personally loved this line-

"ALL four of then moved towards the exit, nupur and mayank moved away from each other, hoping that it is the last time they will be move in oppiste directions.."

Continue soon...