A SaJan scene page 10 updated! Plz read!

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<font color="#6600ff" size="3" face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif">A big hi from me to all those crazzzzyyyyyy SaJan fans out there! Actually, I was just sitting on my computer (thinking about my januable SaJan of course'who else'?) when I had the idea to write a short scene about them. When I say short, I mean short. So guys, I would really appreciate it if u would read it and comment! Plzzzzzzz do comment guys! Thank you!</font>

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<div><font color="#6600ff" size="3" face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif">And mods, plz do not close this topic as it is a scene and not an OS! Thx!</font>

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<font color="#6600ff" size="3" face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif">BTW, in this scene, there r no characters in the background like Benji, uday or Neil. SaJan are in the garden of the college campus and it's nighttime. They r completely aloneeee'. </font>

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<font color="#6600ff" size="3" face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif">I couldn't bear it any longer'. I felt a sob choke up in my throat. I had finally found him'. I found Samrat'. I found my love'. I felt the sudden urge to wrap him in my arms'.to hug him with all my might and never let go'. For a second, I couldn't remove my eyes from his. There was so much relief'care'concern'pain and most of all'love'buried beneath his eyes. I needed to hug him. I needed him to feel my arms around him. I needed to relieve him from the pain in his eyes. I sobbed loudly and flung my arms around him. I could feel his heart thumping in his chest. I buried my face in his neck and cried. I had found my life. I could hear his light sobs as well, and I felt even more rotten for being the reason for his precious tears. I pulled him closer to me, inhaling his sweet smell'. God'I would stay cuddled in his arms forever if it were up to me. It was as if time had completely frozen'as if this moment had been made only for us'. Heaven'this was it'. I could feel his arm tighten around my waist. He was obviously in the same state that I was. Suddenly, I felt a wave of anger wash over me. I quickly jerked out of his arms and pushed him back. </font>

<font color="#6600ff" size="3" face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif">'Tumhaari himmat kaise hui'? Pata hai, maine tumhaara phone dus baar try kiya tha'. Par tumne ek baar bhi nahi uthaaya. Aur phir, maine poore college me dhoondha tha'. Tum kahin nahi the.'</font>

<font color="#6600ff" size="3" face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif">I could feel the tears burning into my eyes'. But this time, I would not cry.</font>

<font color="#6600ff" size="3" face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif">'Tumhe pata bhi hai ke main kitni dar gayyi thi!??? Agar tum mujhse naraaz the, tho bata dena chahiye tha na! S-Samrat'. T-Tum aise kaise k-kar sakte ho? Tum-tum itne stupid kaise ho sakte ho!??? M-Main kya karti Tumhaare bina? K-kya karti'? A-Agar tum mujhe nahi milte na, tho main sach me mar-'</font>

<font color="#6600ff" size="3" face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif">His hand immediately covered my mouth. I tried not to let my anger fade'but it was nearly impossible considering his proximity. </font>

<font color="#6600ff" size="3" face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif">'Shhh'. Chashmish'shant ho jao'. Main hoon na yahan pe'? Main promise karta hoon Chashmish...main tumhe kahin chorke nahi jaonga'. Par plz'ainda aise baatein mat karo'. Kyunki, agar tumhe kuch hua'tho main jee nahi paonga'.'</font>

<font color="#6600ff" size="3" face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif">I couldn't control the unstoppable tears that fell down my cheeks. </font>

<font color="#6600ff" size="3" face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif">'Trust me Chashmish'. Jitna tum pareshaan thi, usse kayi zyaada main tha'. Maine bhi tumhaara phone try kiya tha'. Tumne uthaaya nahi tha. Aur mera phone iss liye nahi lag raha tha kyunki usme battery down ho gayyi thi. Aur maine bhi tumhe buhot dhoondne ki koshish ki thi'. Par pata nahi tum aur Neil kahan gayab ho gayye the'.'</font>

<font color="#6600ff" size="3" face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif">I looked at him shocked.</font>

<font color="#6600ff" size="3" face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif">'Kya'???? I-I'm so sorry Samrat'. Please mujhe maaf kardo'. Par kya tum abhi bhi naraaz ho party ke baareme?'</font>

<font color="#6600ff" size="3" face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif">He laughed and shook his head.</font>

<font color="#6600ff" size="3" face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif">'Chashmish'. Pehli baat yeh hai ki, tumhe sorry kehna allowed nahi hai'. Aur doosri baat yeh hai ki main tumse kabhi naraaz nahi ho sakta hoon!'</font>

<font color="#6600ff" size="3" face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif">He winked and pulled my cheeks.</font>

<font color="#6600ff" size="3" face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif">'Kya karoon'? Tum ho hi itni januable ke main tho kya, iss duniya me koi naraaz nahi ho pata tumse!'</font>

<font color="#6600ff" size="3" face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif">I blushed.</font>

<font color="#6600ff" size="3" face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif">'Samrat' Tum nahi sudroge'.'</font>

<font color="#6600ff" size="3" face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif">He bent in and kissed me on the cheek. </font>

<font color="#6600ff" size="3" face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif">'Main sach hi tho kehe raha tha''</font>

<font color="#6600ff" size="3" face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif">He whispered. </font>

<font color="#6600ff" size="3" face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif">I pushed him away lightly.</font>

<font color="#6600ff" size="3" face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif">'Chodo na'.'</font>

<font color="#6600ff" size="3" face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif">I pleaded. He shook his head.</font>

<font color="#6600ff" size="3" face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif">'Kya Chashmish'? Tum kitni spoilsport ho! Aaj poore din ke baad tum mujhe milli ho'. Tho thoda romance shomance ho jaaye meri jaaaaaan'.'</font>

<font color="#6600ff" size="3" face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif">As he nuzzled into my neck, it felt as if even the bright moon that lit the sky was watching us'. Tonight, we were just two crazy lovers falling madly in love.</font>
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Posted: 15 years ago
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OMG!!....Sanjana...kya bolu yr....
It was Too GOOD!!....Loved the whole scene....and loved how you decribed it i gunjis POV.....it was sooooooooooooooooooooooooo nice....im totally fida on this scene lol😆😆....tere iss scene ne humhe ghayal kardia lol😆😆😆......kaisi dost hai tu...tune humhe aisa ghayal kiya hai k ab to dreamland se nikalna mushkil hai.......Me totally flying in sajan dreamland lol😆.....it really good jaaannn...Awsomeeeeeeeee..Mindblowinggggggggg...Superbbbbbbbbbbbb!!!...aur words nahi hai bolne k liye lol😆😆...issi tarah aur likhti rehna..meri pyari behena.lol😆 it rhymes......luv yaaaaaa...thnx alot 4 the pm😊

luv..
Sonal
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Lolz! First again! That's got to b some sort of world record yaar! 😆
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Originally posted by: baby_doll_2305

Lolz! First again! That's got to b some sort of world record yaar! 😆



lol😆😆😆...tere ffs, ss, os,,ya scenes pe lol😆...records banane parte hain lol😆
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Originally posted by: sweetsonal156

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OMG!!....Sanjana...kya bolu yr....
It was Too GOOD!!....Loved the whole scene....and loved how you decribed it i gunjis POV.....it was sooooooooooooooooooooooooo nice....im totally fida on this scene lol😆😆....tere iss scene ne humhe ghayal kardia lol😆😆😆......kaisi dost hai tu...tune humhe aisa ghayal kiya hai k ab to dreamland se nikalna mushkil hai.......Me totally flying in sajan dreamland lol😆.....it really good jaaannn...Awsomeeeeeeeee..Mindblowinggggggggg...Superbbbbbbbbbbbb!!!...aur words nahi hai bolne k liye lol😆😆...issi tarah aur likhti rehna..meri pyari behena.lol😆 it rhymes......luv yaaaaaa...thnx alot 4 the pm😊

luv..
Sonal
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OMG Sona! I love u so much for this comment! And I'm so glad that u liked it andthat u r in SaJan dreamland! I was thinking about such a scene over the weekend actually. I pictured Gunji running up and hugging Sammy! And that happened, so I'm hoping that this will also happen! Will surely write more if u want me to!
Love uuuuu!
Sanjana
(lolz, first time I'm signing my name!)
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: baby_doll_2305

OMG Sona! I love u so much for this comment! And I'm so glad that u liked it andthat u r in SaJan dreamland! I was thinking about such a scene over the weekend actually. I pictured Gunji running up and hugging Sammy! And that happened, so I'm hoping that this will also happen! Will surely write more if u want me to!
Love uuuuu!
Sanjana
(lolz, first time I'm signing my name!)



Yr yehi to prob hai...k tu apna nam nahi likhti lol😆😆.......aur thnkx mat kar..warna marungi..meine yeh comment isliye kiya kyunke i really liked it...lekin agar tu thnx karegi to bohot pitegi lol😆😆
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Originally posted by: sweetsonal156



Yr yehi to prob hai...k tu apna nam nahi likhti lol😆😆.......aur thnkx mat kar..warna marungi..meine yeh comment isliye kiya kyunke i really liked it...lekin agar tu thnx karegi to bohot pitegi lol😆😆



Ok ok baba, I'm sorry. Kasam se! 😳 but teri comment padh ke itni excited ho gayyi thi ke main bilkul bhool gayyi ke dosti me no sorry and no thankyou! Oops! Phir se sorry bol di! Lagta hai mujhe sorry aur thanku na bolne ke liye buhot zyaada practice karna parega! 😳
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: baby_doll_2305



Ok ok baba, I'm sorry. Kasam se! 😳 but teri comment padh ke itni excited ho gayyi thi ke main bilkul bhool gayyi ke dosti me no sorry and no thankyou! Oops! Phir se sorry bol di! Lagta hai mujhe sorry aur thanku na bolne ke liye buhot zyaada practice karna parega! 😳



Ab dosti ki hai to nibhani to paregi lol😆😆....mere stupid dialogues lol😆😆.....chal ab jaldi jaldi practice karle...agar tu ne agli baar bola na sorry ya thankyou..to teri khair nahi lol😆😆
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awesomeeee OS dear..
mindblowinggg..
aww it ws too sweett.. 😳
loved it to d core
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: sajanroxx20

awesomeeee OS dear..
mindblowinggg..
aww it ws too sweett.. 😳
loved it to d core



Thx!

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