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Posted: 15 years ago
#21
amaziinnggg yaar..
Looved it...
Kash aisa hii hooo...
Like the romace wali lineee...
Aur banaaoo naa....
Cant get over it... 😳
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Posted: 15 years ago
#22
hey dear superb OS loved it do write more and thanks for sharing it with us , keep it up 👍🏼
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Posted: 15 years ago
#23
sweet and cute short scene
loved it
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Posted: 15 years ago
#24

Sanjana 😡Y Did You Stop? Goshhh This Was Too G O O D .. Short Still Filled With So Much Romance .. ! I Loved How You Described Gunjan's POV && Wen Sh Pushed Him & Strtd Asking Him Question God Imagine Gunjan Doing This 😆 ... I Wnted M O R E !!! I Jus Wishh They Give Us A Scene Like This But LONGER ... Im Completly L O S T I SaJan's Dreamland 😍 .. & Hayye That Jauable Bit Blew Me Off ! Ufff Im Mad Cuz It Was Short !! But Very Well Done It Was SUPERB Jaanaaa <3 Keep It Up 👏 The Scene Was Really/Extra/Too C U T E

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Posted: 15 years ago
#25
amazing yaar!
loved the way u explained gunjan's point of view
loved it to the core...superb work
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Posted: 15 years ago
#26
awesomeeeee scene
loved it
it was superb mindblowing
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Posted: 15 years ago
#27

Thank you so much guys, for ur wonderfull comments! I will surely write more...that is, if I get more inspiration!😳 And I will pm u guys if u want! Love uuuuuuuu!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#28
omg that was an awsome sceen
i liked wat the cvs show but this was even better
amazing really baby doll mind blowing
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Posted: 15 years ago
#29

Hi guys! I have recieved about 5 pages of comments for one small SaJan scene.... So I have thought of making this into a SaJan gallery...as so many of u r liking my ideas! Love u!
And guys, here is a new scene for u all to enjoy!

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It was a cool morning in Mumbai. A slight breeze ruffled the air as I wandered through the tall, uncut grass. But I wasn't content.... Something wasn't right... I could feel it in my heart.... Something disastrous was going to happen..... I tried to force the ominous thoughts out of my heart.
Nothing was wrong...... Nothing was wrong.... But my heart refused to believe it. I closed my eyes and raised my arms out, caressing the light breeze. Before I realized it, I was running unstoppably through the grassy meadow. It was an exhilaration like never before. I could feel my hair brushing the wind and goosebumps on my arm. I shivered slightly.

Suddenly, my eyes fell on the open landscape in front of me. There were 2 people, standing dangerously close to one another. One was a boy and the other, a girl.

I squinted into the bright sunlight. I vaguely recognized her... But I couldn't pinpoint it. Who was she...?

She was clothed in a black salwaar and her hair was tied loosely behind her shoulder. Her enchanting eyes were framed with glasses and she was holding a small red rose in her hand.

I frowned. That wasn't right.... I was the only one allowed to give her a red rose. I felt a fiery pain sear my heart. But why...?I didn't know her....

I turned my gaze to the man beside her. He was bent down on his knees and holding his hand out to her. I focused on the small velvety box that he held in his hand..... It looked like...a ring....

And the girl...she had tears in her eyes as she held placed her hand forward.

My eyes opened wide with unexpected shock....... Just as he slid the ring onto her finger.... A bloodcurling scream rang out in the air. To my utter horror, I realized that the scream had come from me........

SaJan Scene Part 2

I was screaming as I awoke from my all too real nightmare. But I still couldn't remember anything. My head felt heavier than stone and my eyelids refused to open. Ugh. What happened last night…? Faded Images ran through my mind. Gunjan…Neil…dancing…. I shook my head. No…. That couldn't be true. Another fiction of my over-active imagination. They couldn't have danced….could they…? No…. Gunjan loved me…. Then how could she dance with that stupid Neil??? A fiery ache pushed into my head. My limbs felt so sore…. I was hurting all over…. Drunk…. Had I gotten drunk last night…? I…it couldn't be true…. I……. I shivered. Then why did I have a hangover? Why was I feeling so exhausted at 11 in the morning? Wait. 11 IN THE MORNING??? How long had I slept??? Ughhhh! I moaned as I tried to push myself off the bed. I had to pick up Gunjan…for college…or was it high-school? University…? I rubbed my aching head. I couldn't even think straight anymore. I was losing it. I glared at my alarm clock accusingly. Stupid thing didn't even ring this morning…. I punched it on the head before I pulled myself off the bed. Gunjan…was waiting for me. She needed me……. But I felt so tired. I tried to push my wariness away, by thinking of Gunjan…. She needed me. As I dragged myself on the floor, I began to hear footsteps behind me.

'Uth gayye Samrat?'

I frowned. I must be hearing things…considering it was a female voice. I shuddered as I walked to the bathroom.

'Samrat!'

She called again. I whisked around, slightly annoyed by the games my mind was playing.

'What?'

I snapped. Shit. Gunjan was staring, shocked.

I rubbed my head again. Great. Now I was dreaming about her even when I was awake. Just what I needed.

'Yeh Gunjan ka bhoot mere dimaag se uthartha kyun nahi hai!?'

I hit myself on the head, hard. She giggled.

'Samrat…. Tum sapna nahi dekh rahe ho! Main sach me yehin khadi hoon!'

I walked near her curiously. I slowly ran my hand down her arm…. I shivered…. Yep..it was her alright. And man was she gorgeous………….. I shook my head.

'Gunjan…tum…yahan…?'

She nodded angrily.

'Haan. Aur woh bhi Tumhaare waja se! Kya zarurat thi itni peene ki? Agar tumhe kuch ho jaata tho?!'

Suddenly, the memories of last night rushed into my mind………….

May 5 2010

6:10 P.M .

'Samrat…. Mujhe yeh prom attend nahi karna hai…. Tumhe tho pata hai na, ke mujhe dancing pasand nahi hai…aur who bhi sabke saamne…?'

She shivered. I grinned and pulled her by the waist.

'Chashmish…. Tum yeh imagine karlo ke dance floor pe sirf tum…aur main…aur buhot saara andhera! Tho phir koi problem nahi hogi!'

She punched me on the chest.

'Samrat! Mazaak band karo! I'm serious!'

I bent down and kissed her cheek.
'Main bhi buhot serious hoon Chashmish!'

I gazed into her eyes, immediately becoming lost in them. She craned her lips up to mine. I bent down and kissed her…and the night became beautiful once again…..

END

I'll update part three only if u want me to!

A SaJan Scene

Part 3

The air had been cool and the night calm. Gunjan and I were walking hand in hand towards Excell college. My heart was racing and for the first time in my life, I was feeling nervous. I was scared that if I looked at her once, I may not be able to remove my gaze from her. She was the most beautiful girl I had ever seen. Her eyes shone like the stars themselves and her cheeks were painted a bright shade of red. I felt myself give her hand a slight squeeze as we neared the college. This was it…. This was the night when nothing could come between us. Nothing could ever come in between our never ending love for one another. But little did I know how wrong I had been that day……….

As we walked into the brown building, we were greeted by Diya and Benji, who, rather confusingly, were now a couple.

'Hi guys! Tho tum dono aakhir aa hi gayye hain! Mujhe tho laga tha ke Gunjan BHAABHI kabhi nahi aayega!'

Benji winked towards my girlfriend.

'Oye! Keep away from her dude! Teri Diya hai na? Aur kitni larkiyon ke peeche bhaagega! Agar tu abhi issi waqt chup nahi hua na…tho main teri saaaaaarrrrrriiiii secrets Diya ko bata doonga! Aur phir tera break-up guaranteed!'

Diya glared at Benji.

'Konsi secrets?! Sammy, mujhe batao!'

I laughed.

'Yehi ke Benji ne ek raat buhot sharaab pee rakhi thi aur usne ek hot ladki dekhi…. Aur uske saat kaafi saare passionate kisses bhi share kiya tha! If I'm not wrong, who abhi do din pehle hi hua tha!'

Diya gasped and put her hands on her hips.

'Kyaa??? Benji! Mujhe laga ke tum baaki saare ladkon se alag ho…par…par tum bhi…? I hate u!'

She stormed off angrily. Benji started strangling me, only half joking.

'SAMRATTTTTTT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Mere aur Diya ke relationship ki ek mahina bhi nahi hua aur tu abhi se break u karne ki koshish kar raha hai!!!! Bhagwaan kare ke tera aur Gunjan ka bhi break-up ho jaaye! Bhagwaan kare ke…ke…..'

He groaned and ran off behind Diya.

I was literally rolling on the floor laughing when Neil walked up to Gunjan. I immediately stiffened up.

'Neil….'

I said stiffly.

He nodded in acknowledgement.

'Samrat….'

He turned to Gunjan.

'Hey Gunjan!'

He said cheerily. I clenched my teeth to keep from making the biggest mistake of my life.

He raised his hand out to Gunjan.

'Can I have this dance…my beautiful lady…?'

Gunjan turned towards me apologetically. She slowly nodded to Neil, placing her hand in his.

'Ok……………….'

I couldn't believe it. How could she have just left me…? More importantly…how could she dance with Neil…? My head felt heavy.

(Guys, at this point, the song 'my heart will go on' is playing from titanic. And all the couples on the floor are dancing. Gunjan has just began to close dance with Neil, though she is uncomfortable. Plz just imagine this!)

2 hours later

We see a boy, holding a beer bottle in his hand. He's extremely drunk and not in his senses. It's raining really heavily and just about to storm.

NARRATOR'S POV

Samrat fell to the ground laughing.

'Yaar Samrat….. Tu hamesha se ek loser tha, aur aaj tune prove bhi kar liya! Gunjan ko Neil ke saat chod aaya….. Kya khaak boyfriend hai tu! Issi liye…. Arre issi liye tho teri Chashmish kissi aur se pyaar karne laggi. Uday sahi kehe raha tha…. Ab teri Chashmish buhooooottt badi ho gayyi hai. Itni badi ke usse Samrat ki koooooiiii zarurat nahi hai! Ab kya karega tu?! Haan? Yeh tho ek din hona hi tha! Kyunkiiiiii, Kyunki tu Gunjan ke laayak hi nahi hai! Nahi hai tu laayak! Actually, Samrat…pata hai tera problem kya hai…? Tu kisi ke bhi laayak nahi hai. Na Suhaani ka…na Mom Dad ka….Issi liye tho who tujhe chorke challe gayye! Aur ab…? Aur ab Chashmish….nahi…who teri Chashmish nahi rahi…. (he thought for a moment, about her name) Aur ab Gunjan bhi challi gayyi! Isme konsi nayyi baat hai!? Yehi tho teri life me bachpan se hota aa raha hai!'

Suddenly, someone started running towards him, calling his name. It was Benji.

'Dude! Tu yeh kya kar raha hai?! Uth! Party bhi khatam ho chukki hai! Kahan kahan nahi dhoonda maine tujh ko!'

Benji was just about to pull him up when Samrat shoved him away.

'NAHI!!!!! Main nahi aaonga! Main sirf tabhi aaonga, jab Gunjan mujhe lene aayega.'

Benji had tears in his eyes.

'Sam…. Tune sharab pee hai!'

He shook his head dazedly.

'Nahiiii Benji…. Tu kitna budhoo hai! Maine whisky pee hai! Sharab aur whisky me buhooooott bada difference hota hai!'

Benji quickly wiped his tears and bent own beside Samrat.

'Kyun Samrat…. Tune aisa kyun kiya…?'

Samrat started crying softly.

'Benji…. Gunjan aur Neil kitne perfect hai na…? Who haste bhi ek saat hain…rote bhi ek saat hain…aur….aur film bhi ek saat hi banaate hain! Aur Neil…who jitna bhi ulu ka patha kyun na ho, who buhot padha likha hai…. Buhot smart hai! Who dono ek dusre ke liye parfect hai….Hai na Benji…?'

Benji stood up angrily.

'Kya bakwaas kar raha hai tu…? Kahin tu paagal tho nahi ho gayya??? Neil…aur Gunjan???'

Samrat's eyes widened. He was almost about to cry again.

'Nahi Benji….. Pata hai…? Gunjan bhi na…ussi se pyaar karti hai…. Gunjan na…mujhse bilkul pyaar nahi karti! Issi liye usne Neil ke saat dance kiya tha. Issi liye who har jeete jaagte pal Neil ke saat bithaathi hai…. Main is sab me kahan shaamil hoon Benji…? Main Gunjan ki life me kahan shamil hoon? Arre Benjiii….'

He rolled his eyes.

'Tujhe nahi pata? Main sirf naam ka boyfriend hoon. Par sachcha boyfriend, sirf Neil hai….Sirf Neil….'

END

Oki guys, this was part 3! I will only continue if u liked it!

Love u loads! Babydoll!

Edited by baby_doll_2305 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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If u lyk it, part 2 is coming up shortly.

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