~*Mayur Paradise #133*~Mit JaaNi he Yeh Dooriyan - Page 42

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Posted: 15 years ago
hmmm...I know....What I want to see is.......like.......

Nupur watering plants...she is having somuch fun.....like a small child.....he admires her for a while and decides to join and he helps her out in the beginning.....then starts spraying on her...her hair gets wet.....she will go to change......and coming down comes with open hair.....just like the lucky mishra palace stairs......he remembers and ...he softly out his hand in her hair ruffles...she asks kya...he tells her the story......she laughs and asks is that why he had mirchi......ha says he didn't then know that mirchi can be sweet too.........

That would cheesy a bit but something like that........
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Posted: 15 years ago


i read it....ya it was funny..
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: aj_observer

hmmm...I know....What I want to see is.......like.......<br><br>Nupur watering plants...she is having somuch fun.....like a small child.....he admires her for a while and decides to join and he helps her out in the beginning.....then starts spraying on her...her hair gets wet.....she will go to change......and coming down comes with open hair.....just like the lucky mishra palace stairs......he remembers and ...he softly out his hand in her hair ruffles...she asks kya...he tells her the story......she laughs and asks is that why he had mirchi......ha says he didn't then know that mirchi can be sweet too.........<br><br>That would cheesy a bit but something like that........<br>



actually it's very cute.... 😛
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Posted: 15 years ago
ok smt like....
mayank is in his room. he is really tired and stressed as he went out all day to look for house or part time job .....nupur comes over and finds the door open so walks in. mayank is sitting on the bed but falls asleep. nupur calls for him but he doesn't listen. she looks into the room and find him sleeping. she walks upto him and look at his tired face. she moves her finger into his hair very slowly and sits next to him. her touch wakes him up but he doesn't open his eyes. Knowing it was nupur he slowly slides and keeps his head on her lap. slowly his stress starts to fade away......
smt like tht....wow i guess thoda zyada ho gaya kya... 😕
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: muskan19

ok smt like....
mayank is in his room. he is really tired and stressed as he went out all day to look for house or part time job .....nupur comes over and finds the door open so walks in. mayank is sitting on the bed but falls asleep. nupur calls for him but he doesn't listen. she looks into the room and find him sleeping. she walks upto him and look at his tired face. she moves her finger into his hair very slowly and sits next to him. her touch wakes him up but he doesn't open his eyes. Knowing it was nupur he slowly slides and keeps his head on her lap. slowly his stress starts to fade away......
smt like tht....wow i guess thoda zyada ho gaya kya... 😕



Nahin yaar...that is cute...........and comforting too.....it shows understanding..

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Posted: 15 years ago
pata nahi par wid MN i always feel tht more than dialog. sometimes they shud just let emotions, gestures and expressions do the magic....
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Posted: 15 years ago
hello gang....group hug...🤗
what's happening?....
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Posted: 15 years ago
hmm....Nupur preparing for exams......on the day of the exams M comes wakes Nupur and asks her to get ready....She resists asks why??? but gets ready...He takes her to ganesh temple and gives her a nariyal to break........she is surprised and breaks nariyal......and she insists that he breaks one too.....
he doesn't believe in it ....but does it for her....each wish and pray....

She is bvery happy on the way to college...both in auto......she outs her head on his shoulder and he scoots closer so that she can rest...she asks him tum ne kya poocha.......he says jo tumne maanga woh de dena.....and he asks her.....tumne kya poocha.........mujhe ussne bina maange hi sab de diya...toh aur kya maangoon...phir meine poocha ki tumhe jo chahiye wo dedenaa.....

both laugh at the same time.....

And both say agar tum mere saath isse hi hamesha raho toh mujhe aur kuch maangne ki koi zarrorat nahin hain.......

thoda senti nahin...........
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: muskan19

pata nahi par wid MN i always feel tht more than dialog. sometimes they shud just let emotions, gestures and expressions do the magic....


me tooo...but some times talking makes it better because it helps the story line to move.....
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Posted: 15 years ago
HI Jess......writing romantic scenes.......go back couple of pages you will see🤣

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