~*Mayur Paradise #133*~Mit JaaNi he Yeh Dooriyan - Page 43

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Posted: 15 years ago
continued -
nupur starts to run her fingers thru his hair. he doesn't say anything as he always does when someone touches his hair....infact he loves it. his stress starts to melt away and a faded smile takes over. after few minutes nupur in a low voice asks him....kuch kaam bana? mayank replies - an hnn....
N- koi baat nahi mayank kal fir koshish karenge kuch na kuch zaroor ho jaayega.....ma kaisi hain...? (nupur asks in a very concerned tone)
M - noticing that she called his mom ma for the first time his smile widens. he says " theek hain....thodi udas hain bas"
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: muskan19

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nupur starts to run her fingers thru his hair. he doesn't say anything as he always does when someone touches his hair....infact he loves it. his stress starts to melt away and a faded smile takes over. after few minutes nupur in a low voice asks him....kuch kaam bana? mayank replies - an hnn....
N- koi baat nahi mayank kal fir koshish karenge kuch na kuch zaroor ho jaayega.....ma kaisi hain...? (nupur asks in a very concerned tone)
M - noticing that she called his mom ma for the first time his smile widens. he says " theek hain....thodi udas hain bas"



Nice ...confirmation too......that he must feel happy for...........
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Posted: 15 years ago
Wow...you guys r awesome....ek se badhkar ek romantic scenes likhe hai yaar...dil khush kar diya....aise writers MJHT ko kyun nahi miltein?
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Posted: 15 years ago
becuz Jess we are one of a kind......🤣
muskan19 thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey just read ur mandir wala.....very cute AJ
hi jess
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Posted: 15 years ago
Jess see Muski's Vm page 54....awesome...........
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: aj_observer

becuz Jess we are one of a kind......🤣

AJ, when r u writing your FFs? I'm dying to read next parts...
muskan19 thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
thanx AJ....mera vm famous ho raha hai 🥳
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Posted: 15 years ago
running to page 54....brb...keep writing romantic scenes.....
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Posted: 15 years ago
continue karoon ya tum log bore ho gaye ho 😆

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