~*Mayur Paradise #133*~Mit JaaNi he Yeh Dooriyan

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Anuradha

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Posted: 15 years ago

#431

Originally posted by: muskan19
continue karoon ya tum log bore ho gaye ho 😆

Continue........

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Annie

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Posted: 15 years ago

#432

hey guys...............got back last night, and now off to office............but cudnt resist........gr8 scenes AJ and Muskan.............i hope someone is lurking around nearby to read these.

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Anuradha

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Posted: 15 years ago

#433

Originally posted by: MayurByGod

AJ, when r u writing your FFs? I'm dying to read next parts...

I will yaar...MN usually motivate me...toh aaj kal.......kahir...will update during week end.......

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Anuradha

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Posted: 15 years ago

#434

Originally posted by: annie07
hey guys...............got back last night, and now off to office............but cudnt resist........gr8 scenes AJ and Muskan.............i hope someone is lurking around nearby to read these.

Annie...🤗..welcome back......

awww....thanks yaar..

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Annie

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Posted: 15 years ago

#435

Ok, i got one................ Nupur comes to Mayank's place, she finds his mom resting, and Mayank isnt home yet. She decides to prepare dinner,so that he can rest. she goes into the kitchen, and starts cutting vegetables.........meanwhile Mayank is home...........he finds Nupur in kitchen and is surprised. He calls her from behind, and she gets startled and cuts her finger.............he quickly, takes it in his mouth............after sometime he asks.........tum yahan kya kar rahi ho? Nupur - wo maine socha ki tum thak ke aayoge to main hi khana bana keti hun...........

Mayank, holds her face and says - Nupur, tum mere saath ho to i can fight any trouble, and both cook food together

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Archana

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Posted: 15 years ago

#436

Muskan....tum to chhupe rustam ho...kya video banaya hai...great work...good song and scenes match the lyrics...paradise me ek se ek artist, writers hai....MJHT should hire you guys...

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muskan19

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Posted: 15 years ago

#437

continue -
N - jaante ho mayank jab main pehli baar aunty se.....mayank interupts - ma hi bolo tumhare mooh se ma sunna acha lagta hai...
nupur smiles and realises that she said ma the first time as it was totally unintentional.
she continues .....pehli baar jab tumne mujhe ma se milane ke liye ghar bulaya tha to main bahot dari hui thi. mann mein kitna kuch chal raha tha...pata nahi kaisi hongi, bahot strict to nahi hongi.....aur tumne bhi to mujhe dara diya tha....mayank smiles to this...(still eyes closed head on her lap) ...par milte hi unse laga ki agar meri ma hoti to bilkul aisi hi hoti....itni hi pyaari....
M - tumhe ma mil gayi nupur aur woh tumse bhi utna hi pyar karengi jitna mujhse karti hain....
N - janti hoon...isliye to aisa lagta hai jaise aajtak bhagwan se jo bhi maanga sab mil gaya.....tum....ma....

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muskan19

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Posted: 15 years ago

#438

thanx jess i'm glad u guys liked it 😳

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Anuradha

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Posted: 15 years ago

#439

Yaaron...we are back...........

Annie cute and realistic...so MN like

Muski...tum aur senti.....I loved it.......I want hem to think back and compare how they felt then and how they feel now......