Mayur's Scene analysis-updated pg 3 - Page 2

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Posted: 15 years ago
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thx darling
u are so sweet
to chear us up u did this
loved it plz cont
love lucy
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Posted: 15 years ago
#12
hey dear it really nice plzzzzzz continue.....
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hey awesome work, please do continue would loveeeeee to read nupur's point of view and feelings too.
Fantastic man.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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great analaysis ....... continue soon ....
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Loved it write Nups pov jaldi
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Thanks guys,
If you want me to go all in order, it will take time but i will but if you want to request then be my guest...!
Here's is Nupur's POV:
She was crying her heart out hoping that someone would hear her. Someone did hear, it sounded like her Raj but it can't be because he would come in different style than this. She dreamed her Raj to be different so she knew this was not her. Even then, this sound, this voice was so familiar and so her own. She answered back to him asking for his help and he did help. She pushed at the door while he pulled. He sounded like a gentleman to her. As he pulled, she pushed, the door opened and she fell foward in his arms. He steadied her. As soon as he touched her bare upper arms, she felt a tingling sensation in her stomach. She was crying but for a minute, she stopped in shock. It was as if some fireworks has burst in her heart, she felt that shock through out her whole body. She was feeling so complete. She felt that what she has been looking for so long has finally been found. She too ignored the feeling thinking that it was probably she was scarred. she slowly looked up to meet the savior. One look and her heart jumped. Those brown eyes, were starring intensly at her. she didn't want to break the eye-lock but she had to. She was embarrassed out her wits that too in front of such a handsome guy. She looked here and there and avoided his face, without thanking him she ran out. She knew she shouldn't have but she had to. it was as if her heart was crying leaving him there. She was scarred and this stranger scarred her even because of the feelings that were stirring inside her.
I hope you love this too!
Rooj
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Cool jana
Go in line i prefer if i want to make request than sure i will
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: -afsha-

Cool jana

Go in line i prefer if i want to make request than sure i will

Have you decided what you want to request? let me know when you do...

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