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Posted: 15 years ago
#91
it was great
loved it
no i think most people like long parts
do cont soon
and thanks for pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
#92
nice part do post it in fan fiction forum also https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/94
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Posted: 15 years ago
#93
Thanks @farrda01, I am glad you liked it.
I will definetly post in fan fiction forum.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#94
It's a amazing part dear. but don't create any confusion b2in mayur. pls
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Posted: 15 years ago
#95
@Tapoor, I m glad you liked both the parts. Don't worry, even I can't see confusion between Mayur. I love them to core. I love happy endings, but "Kuchh pane ke liye kuchh khona padta he." There will be some problems and then everything will be OK. I will post the 3rd part today.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#96
Hey friends, This is the 3rd part. I am happy that you commented and liked my story. Please tell me how is this part? I am also posting the promo 0f the 4th part. Guys, there may be improvizations. But please read and pls suggest me if anything can be expressed in better way.
Here it is:

They reached Nupur's home. Mayank asked, "Now, when will we meet again?"

"Let's see. Hum phone pe decide karege." She said.

"Ok. Bye, then." He said that but didn't want her to go inside.

"Bye." She turned to go inside. She had hardly taken two steps while he grabbed her hand.

"Nupur, stop. Shall we meet tomorrow for Holi?" He asked.

"Mayank. Not on Holi, We will meet on Saturday if it would be possible." She said thoughtfully.

"Oh.. ok. Bye." He said that but didn't leave her hand.

"Ok. Bye." She said and watched at him for few seconds but he didn't realize that. Then she said, "Mayank mera hath.." and looked at her hand which was grabbed in his strong hand.

Mayank realized now and left her hand. "Sorry?. Who actually.. main.." He started, but before anything else, Gunjan's voice came.

"Nupur, tum? What a surprise? I really wanted to meet you. I have so many things to tell you, my loving Diiii?." And she came running towards them and hugged Nupur. Nupur was so much happy to see her.

"Hmm? my younger sister is getting married in 3 months. Hey, I missed you, too. How's jiju?" Nupur started. But she saw that Gunjan had noticed Mayank.

"Gunjan, meet him, He is Mayank Sharma. He is my colleague and friend. We were in the same school. And Mayank, meet her. She is my cousin, but we are very close to each other. She is getting married in June.

They shook hands and greeted each other. Then Mayank went home.

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Gunjan and Nupur were sitting on Nupur's bed. Nupur was lost in some thought. While Gunjan was talking to her fianc on the cell phone. She finished her conversation and looked at Nupur. She had not seen Nupur lost like such in past. Gunjan grinned to herself. She snapped the fingers. And that broke Nupur's thought. She looked around. Gunjan was looking at her. She was feeling uncomfortable. In the first time in her life, she was having problem in sharing her thoughts with Gunjan.

Gunjan asked, "So what happened, Di? He is Mayank Sharma from your school only na?"

"Yes."

"He is in your office?"

"Yes."

"Have you been good friends?"

"Yes."

Now that was a limit for Gunjan. Nupur and answering only in YES NO? She continued.

"Is he a good person?"

"Yes."

"He is really handsome na?" She asked grinning to herself. Di must realize her feelings now.

"Yes."

Nupur seemed unaware to what she was confessing. Gunjan thought it was a perfect time.

"So you love him, don't you?"

"Yes."

"What?" Gunjan said loudly, "Wow, I am so much happy. I love you Di." Gunjan hugged her.

She looked embarrassed. "No, I don't mean that, I mean, he is good person. But he is too good for me. I really don't deserve him, Gunjan. But then what's going on?" And she cried. She told each and everything to Gunjan. Each single emotion, she was going through. The pain that she felt. Gunjan listened to Nupur silently.

Then she started slowly, "Di, there is only one explanation that both of you like each other very much and care for each other."

"But is it love?" Nupur asked.

"100 percent Di", Gunjan hit her head slowly.

Nupur was so happy that she was clear in her thoughts now.

Haa, he koi to wajah jo jeene ka maja yu ane laga,

Ye hawao me he kya thoda sa jo nasha jo chhane laga?

She loved him. But did he love her?

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Mayank was watching TV. He was actually just flipping through the channels. He could not even concentrate on watching TV. He kept thinking about Nupur only. How they were lost in each other's eyes today on the station. A smile came across his face.

"Wah, beta kya baat hai? Andar television me tragedy scene aa raha he. Ek couple alag ho raha he, Aur tum smile kar rahe ho? Great." His mom said coming in the drawing room and sitting beside him.

He could not reply. What would he tell his mom any way?

"Mmm. Beta, muje tum se kuchh jaroori baat karni he. Please shanti se soon na." She watched him for a minute and continued, "Dekho, ab tum 23 years ke ho chuke ho aur apni career me bhi set ho gaye ho. Mujhe lagta he ki ab tumhari shadi jaldi ho jaye to acchha hoga. Uske bad Rinny ke liye bhi to sochna hoga na?"

"But, mom?" He started but was interrupted by his mom soon.

"Dekho, beta. Me sach keh rahi hoon. Muje pata he ki wo bhi tumhe pasand karti he. Bas use ye nahi pata he ki wo pyar he. Main tumhe isi liye keh rahi hoon, puchho use jaldi, warna wo ghar walo ki baat man kar kisi aur se shadi kar legi. Aur tum bas shadi me jakar vapis akar ro kar beth jaoge."

"Maa? kya aap bhi?"

"Haa beta, wo tumhare hi jitni he. Uske mom dad bhi to uski shadi ke bare me soch rahe hoge na?"

Mayank told that he needed some sleep and went in his bedroom. But he couldn't sleep. Today when Gunjan came, Nupur had said that Gunjan is going to marry in June. Gunjan and Nupur are of same age. So they will definitely think about Nupur's marriage sooner or later. He thought for a moment, what would be my reaction if I get invitation card of Nupur's marriage with someone else?

"No, I won't let this happen. I ? I love her. Now I am sure, this is love. I will have to know about her feelings towards me. She has a soft corner for me. But is it Love?" He decided to ask her directly after going back to Pune.

Kese me tuje samjau ye mera pehla pehla pyar hai?

Ankhon me intezar hai.. O o o

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Their small vacation passed away slowly. Slowly, because they could not meet on Saturday or Sunday. Mayank tried to meet her on both the days, but Nupur had guests in her home. Her aunty and uncle had come to stay for 2 days. She was really sorry that she had to say no for meeting Mayank.

On the day they were going back, Nupur met Mayank on the station. They were so happy to see each other after such a long time. They were almost hugging each other, when they realized and shook hands.

"Are you all right, Nupur?" He asked as she became silent.

"Yes. I am ok. How are aunty and Rinny?" She said to cover up her embarrassment.

"Oh, they are fine. How are your parents and Gunjan?"

"They are also fine." She replied. They sat in the train besides each other.

"Hmmm? You are lucky, Nupur, you can always find a window seat for yourself." He said smiling.

"If you want a window seat then I ?." She paused for a few seconds and added playfully, "will not give you mine, Sorry." And she laughed.

"How sweet and cute she is!" Mayank thought.

Then suddenly a girl came to them and started talking to Mayank.

"Hey Mayank, How are you?"

"Hey Priti, I am fine. So where are you?" He asked happily.

"Nothing. I am as a lecturer in our college only. Hey, Parth and Anita were trying to contact you, but your cell number is changed, I think." She informed.

"Ya. Here is my new number." And he gave his cell number to her.

"Parth is getting married in 1 month. So if possible, contact him soon. Hey, by the way, I have to go now. We will meet up in Parth's marriage. OK? Bye. See ya later." She went quickly.

"She was my classmate in college. She?" He started to tell Nupur but Nupur was already sleeping. But her eyes were shut by force. She didn't sleep like this in their first journey. How can he forget that look? Or was she pretending to sleep now? But why should she pretend that? Oh, of course, she got jealous of that Priti. No ways. But he liked that, too. She surely loves me. She is possessive for me. I was an idiot. Why didn't I figure out our love before this?

Nupur was thinking while closing her eyes tightly. Why is she feeling sad or jealous or angry if that girl was talking to Mayank? No, he was excited to meet her. No, she was just old friend. She jerked her head and tried to sleep.

She didn't talk to Mayank in their return journey at all. She ate whatever he got from the station when the train stopped without saying even a word. Mayank tried to tease her some more.

"I know how you must be feeling right now. You must be missing your home and parents, and Gunjan and all. Don't worry, you will go back soon. In 3 months, Gunjan is getting married. You can take leave on that occasion." He said.

"Oh my God, Doesn't he realize that I was perfectly ok without my home before that PRITI came? This is a limit." She didn't say any thing just continued to stare out of the window.

Mayank smiled to himself. So she is jealous and she is possessive for me. That means she loves me, too.

Hulchul hui, jara shor hua, dil chor hua, teri or hua?

Aisi chale jab hawa, Ishq hua hi hua?

I will propose her as soon as possible, may be tonight or this week. ********************************************************************

Promo of part 4: They reached Pune. Mayank proposed Nupur. But Nupur denied. But why? Now what will happen? Will their love be completešŸ‘ or their hearts will be brokenšŸ˜•???

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Thanks for reading. Please comment. I will try to post the next part soon.
Edited by mayurlovers - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#97
im first

he just read yur 3rd part

i loved

when are u updating the 4th part

im feelin bad u din pm me 😭

but iloved it

šŸ‘šŸ‘
hats off
continue


and i really wana know why nupur rejected him


love pebo

šŸ‘
Edited by pebolovesmayur - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#98
Hey pebolovesmayur I PMed you, but there was some problem in Internet connection so my PM was late, sorry for that, Next time I will PM you first and then post my story. OK? Please smile and don't be sad. And yes, you will soon know the suspense.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#99
Don't do this.. plzzzzzzzzzzzz... unko alag mat karna.I cannot see them separate.... But I read all your parts and really loved them specially the place.. as I am from Pune....šŸ˜‰. But why does she say no... have her parents fixed her marriage somewhere else? Plzzzzzzz. don't do this!!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
OMG. nupur denied? but why?

pls dont do this. i want my mayur together. pls

btw its a wonderful update

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