*The essence of Love~MayUr One Shot* - Page 5

Originally posted by: .x.Shilky.x.

heheheheh sorii dat was 2 shoe how speechless i am

Originally posted by: luv-myur

Hi Riddhima,

Loved your one shot. It was awsome-very, very, very, nice.😳

U r a wonderful writer.👏

Loved every part of it.😛

thank you.

Originally posted by: mjht_rox

IT WAS BEAUTIFUL!!!! CANT BELIEVE THAT A PERSON CAN WRITE SOO BEAUTIFULL.I CUD ACYUALLY FEEL NUPURS EMOTION,NERVOUSNESS,HAPPINESS AND HER LOVE.LUV U RIDZ N PL WRITE MORE STORIES LYK DIS 👏

Originally posted by: adi_gupta

hey riddma love it yaar

so romantic feel like luv sperd all over

luv it

Originally posted by: kasuforever

OMG awesome Riddhima!!! Love the way u've penned it down!

Thanks a lot for sharing it with me 😳

Originally posted by: amu142

Luvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvved it....OMG!! kaaash show main bhi Mayank aisa romantic ban jaye......OMG!!! i am really speecchless.....ur descriptions are so lively, I could imagine the beach scene right in front of my eyes.....gr8 job!!!awesome...congrats

Originally posted by: KHJL

WOW! niky😲
that was amazing dear...👏
so adorable
wonderful job!👍🏼
and very beautifully written...😛
awwwwww....the beach b-day date was soooooooooo cute😳
would love to see something like this in the future...for mayur😉
and i am so glad u were inspired by all the writers in here to write one MN one shot of ur own..😊
and share ur wonderful talent with us...⭐️
hope u write more of these one shots for us...
can't wait to read more of ur writing😳

luv
Lisa

Originally posted by: Radhika Shah

Great Update!!!

Originally posted by: viniva sharma

oyeyy nikzz!! awesum yaar!! luvd d rain wala part!!! mainu ni pta tha tussi ina accha likhte ho!!! n m glad dat i forced me read diz!! vrna mai

itna acha one shot miss kr deti lol!!!! thanxxxx 🤗

vini