*The essence of Love~MayUr One Shot*

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Niky

@-Niky-

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 16 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: kripa_kh

it was too good... simply superb.... plz write more....

Thanku!😳

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Sufia

@.x.Shilky.x.

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: ksdbstjodi

Thanks..🤗..waise 4 comments at a tym..😲😲😲..that's a record!😆

heheheheh sorii dat was 2 shoe how speechless i am

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luv-myur

@luv-myur

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Posted: 16 years ago

#33

Hi Riddhima,

Loved your one shot. It was awsome-very, very, very, nice.😳

U r a wonderful writer.👏

Loved every part of it.😛

thank you.

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mjht_rox

@mjht_rox

Explorer

Posted: 16 years ago

#34

IT WAS BEAUTIFUL!!!! CANT BELIEVE THAT A PERSON CAN WRITE SOO BEAUTIFULL.I CUD ACYUALLY FEEL NUPURS EMOTION,NERVOUSNESS,HAPPINESS AND HER LOVE.LUV U RIDZ N PL WRITE MORE STORIES LYK DIS 👏

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adi_gupta

@adi_gupta

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#35

hey riddma love it yaar

so romantic feel like luv sperd all over

luv it

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Ragini

@ragzz.

Trailblazer

+ 8

Posted: 16 years ago

#36

OMG awesome Riddhima!!! Love the way u've penned it down!

Thanks a lot for sharing it with me 😳

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amu142

@amu142

Rocker

Posted: 16 years ago

#37

Luvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvved it....OMG!! kaaash show main bhi Mayank aisa romantic ban jaye......OMG!!! i am really speecchless.....ur descriptions are so lively, I could imagine the beach scene right in front of my eyes.....gr8 job!!!awesome...congrats

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LiSa

@KHJL

Rocker

Posted: 16 years ago

#38

WOW! niky😲
that was amazing dear...👏
so adorable
wonderful job!👍🏼
and very beautifully written...😛
awwwwww....the beach b-day date was soooooooooo cute😳
would love to see something like this in the future...for mayur😉
and i am so glad u were inspired by all the writers in here to write one MN one shot of ur own..😊
and share ur wonderful talent with us...⭐️
hope u write more of these one shots for us...
can't wait to read more of ur writing😳

luv
Lisa