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Posted: 16 years ago
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HEEY
NICE POEMS
BOTH ARE REALLY CUTE!
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Posted: 16 years ago
#22

tu bhi likh rahi hai
haila...........................
i wont b able to match your standard yaar
i think i would drop the idea😃 aisa kuch nahi hai yaar...u might b writing in english na???
main hamesha hindi hi prefer karti hoon....mujhe toh tum dono se darr lag raha hai.....😕😕
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: _Monu_

HEEY

NICE POEMS
BOTH ARE REALLY CUTE!


thanks a lot
\may i know ur name
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Shinelllaaa...WOW- that's the only word that came out of me after reading the MN poem. Girl, it's so beautifully written...every verse has a story of its own...its own charm. For a moment i felt i was Nupur...it just has that kinda effect. And you cant help but shed a tear at the beauty of it....You're brilliant Shinelz. I hope you do write one for ArTi....
Im so anxious for your next poem now.
Love. 🤗
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: ayeshaD

Shinelllaaa...WOW- that's the only word that came out of me after reading the MN poem. Girl, it's so beautifully written...every verse has a story of its own...its own charm. For a moment i felt i was Nupur...it just has that kinda effect. And you cant help but shed a tear at the beauty of it....You're brilliant Shinelz. I hope you do write one for ArTi....

Im so anxious for your next poem now.
Love. 🤗


ash
thaaaaaaaaaaaaanks
but i m not writing on arti
i read falaks poem
i m no match yaar
and i need atleast
4 days to write one😭
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: shinella


ash
thaaaaaaaaaaaaanks
but i m not writing on arti
i read falaks poem
i m no match yaar
and i need atleast
4 days to write one😭

don't underestimate yourself yar...one should never do that! And its not like we're rushing this ArTi mission...we've gotta do our BEST for them....and with the kinda of poetry you write....it'll really be a valuable inclusion Shinelz. Just try working on one and if you still think you wont be able to complete it on time then you can cancel the idea....but dont give up just yet
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: ayeshaD

don't underestimate yourself yar...one should never do that! And its not like we're rushing this ArTi mission...we've gotta do our BEST for them....and with the kinda of poetry you write....it'll really be a valuable inclusion Shinelz. Just try working on one and if you still think you wont be able to complete it on time then you can cancel the idea....but dont give up just yet


i see what u mean
lets see
but u r a sweetheart😃
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hey Shinella!!!
Thanks for informing me about your poems or i would
have never seen ur brilliant works!!
If u ask me this is a 5⭐️ perfomance
Its Fab work dear....The Nupur poem...It definetly
told about her feelings on rose day and Samrat....ooo
that was just so sweet!! do write more....Loved ur poems
Luv
Tina
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Posted: 16 years ago
#29

Originally posted by: shinella

this poem is during the rose day time from nupur's point of view.

A Broken Circle

I remember when I first met you,
We fought, we screamed, we shouted,
But somehow we put our trust in each other,
Though friendship didn't happen, true.

But there was honesty in those taunting eyes,
Kindness in that mocking heart,
You were a sincere friend, something I'd never imagined,
You and me... that was a total surprise.

Suddenly that laugh of yours was sweet,
That glance was ever so reassuring,
I never really had a friend like you,
The world disappeared beneath our dancing feet.

But the guilt that nagged, it never let me be.
So when our castle crashed from the clouds,
I suddenly found myself alone, all alone,
The friend I never knew I had had left me.

What I would do to feel your arms encircle
Me once more, to dance forever with you,
But we're back where we started, bitter and angry,
We've come the whole, broken circle.

The Mayur poem is fab loved it...wowww u can write so wonderful poems gr888 talent...😉
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: brindamarfatia

The Mayur poem is fab loved it...wowww u can write so wonderful poems gr888 talent...😉


thanks yaar😳

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