new sajan and mayur poem

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Posted: 16 years ago
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this poem is during the rose day time from nupur's point of view.

A Broken Circle

I remember when I first met you,
We fought, we screamed, we shouted,
But somehow we put our trust in each other,
Though friendship didn't happen, true.

But there was honesty in those taunting eyes,
Kindness in that mocking heart,
You were a sincere friend, something I'd never imagined,
You and me... that was a total surprise.

Suddenly that laugh of yours was sweet,
That glance was ever so reassuring,
I never really had a friend like you,
The world disappeared beneath our dancing feet.

But the guilt that nagged, it never let me be.
So when our castle crashed from the clouds,
I suddenly found myself alone, all alone,
The friend I never knew I had had left me.

What I would do to feel your arms encircle
Me once more, to dance forever with you,
But we're back where we started, bitter and angry,
We've come the whole, broken circle.
SaJaN


The moment when i met u for the first time...
The moment when i saved u...
The moment when i touched u...
The moment when we had a bike ride...
The moment when i touched u again...
The moment when i saw u singing...
The moments when u helped me in my studies...
The moment when i realized that i m cheating u...
The moment when u cried...
The moment when u went away from me...
I felt something....
Is this love?....
-Samrat
guys do comment
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piya2025 thumbnail
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Posted: 16 years ago
#2
SaJaN


The moment when i met u for the first time...
The moment when i saved u...
The moment when i touched u...
The moment when we had a bike ride...
The moment when i touched u again...
The moment when i saw u singing...
The moments when u helped me in my studies...
The moment when i realized that i m cheating u...
The moment when u cried...
The moment when u went away from me...
I felt something....
Is this love?....
-Samrat
guys do comment
😳

U really wrote this???oh its beautifull..These words r just so dreamy *sigh*
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: piya2025

SaJaN


The moment when i met u for the first time...
The moment when i saved u...
The moment when i touched u...
The moment when we had a bike ride...
The moment when i touched u again...
The moment when i saw u singing...
The moments when u helped me in my studies...
The moment when i realized that i m cheating u...
The moment when u cried...
The moment when u went away from me...
I felt something....
Is this love?....
-Samrat
guys do comment
😳

U really wrote this???oh its beautifull..These words r just so dreamy *sigh*


i told u i really feel foe sajan too
i want samrat to realize his luv
BTW DID U LIKE IT😳
i m now working on a mayur poem
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Posted: 16 years ago
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I felt something....
Is this love?....

is line na i have no word how much i like it how lovely yaar
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Posted: 16 years ago
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tum na the greatest writer of the whole world keeep it up lovely.......
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: sweety307

I felt something....
Is this love?....

is line na i have no word how much i like it how lovely yaar


thamks yaar😳
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Posted: 16 years ago
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They're really cute...nupur 1 is sooo sweet!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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heyy shinella!
awesome poems.....very beautifully written.
loved both of them..
keep up the fantastic work!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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thanks guys
i m working on the mayur poem right now
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey honey welcome to the forum, oh gosh the mayur like the poem on nupur is just amazing man, it says soooooooo many wonderful, touching and thoughtful things so easily swiftly, i had tears in my eyes reading it, its so important to have good friends in your life man, bravo, excellent job man. hi i am senny by the way.

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