The story goes on - FF..UPDATED Part 57 ~*~ - Page 93

Originally posted by: cute2stay

hi Debby!!! Hey Pallo! 🤗

Ok so you ready for my bakwas? Ok so here I go....Ok so first of all the Samrat-Gunjan moments were captured really well by you. I feel like in the show Samrat always starts talking to Gunjan jokingly and he loves confusing her with his witty remarks but in the end he always gets serious and touches Gunjan's heart. That's the impact he has on her and you showed that brilliantly my dear!!
Yeah.. that's exactly what I wanted to portray..glad u liked that part.. 😊

Ok chal toh next part...ahahah i was laughing so hard at the "ms. aha has decided to keep her surname"!!! 😆😆 For our convenience more than anything else right? 😆 Im glad yaar warna main confused ho jaati I can't imagine Ms. Aha being anything other than...well Ms. Aha!!
😆 😆 U knw I was thinking of sum Sharma Verma surname for her but nuthin seemed to fit.. hence I decided to allow her to keep the aha intact.. 😆

O and you decided to use the famous 'strawberry' icecream huh? Of course yaar it's mayurians fav. dessert!! Well that and papaya!! 😆😆
I've always been a chocolate person bt thanks to Mayu, its strawberry time now! And Mum is ever so glad for my new found love for papaya. 😆

And omg the best touch of your update was the 'tide ad' !!!! 😆😆😆 Seriously died laughing. Nupur made a tide ad out of Mayank except in reverse. This should be their ad: "Usually toh humara yeh product apke kapde chamka deta hai par ab dekhiye naya improved Mayur tide!! Jo apke chamkele kapdon ki aisi haalat mein chode ki woh kabhi phir dhone ke layak na hon!! Aaj hi aasmayiye. Sirf do rupee mein!! " 😆 that was really great Debby!!
Wonderful ad.. lets open an ad making firm in collaboration.. we will rock.. 😳 😆

Ok and then Mayu and mom omg sooo sweet yaar. Mayu kitna acha bacha haina? Apni mom ka kitna khayal rakhta hai. He's truly a maa ka ladla..*sigh* I want a boy like him..for more reasons than just that!!
Me too.. me too! Mayank jaisa koi mil jaaye toh kya baat ho.. 😳😍

😍 Aur haan finally Dia ko koi uski takkar ka mil hi gaya. Very interesting twist in your story yaar. I love all these new characters you are adding def. makes things very interesting.
Thanks dearie.. I started wid Radz wen she suggested it..it seemed like a fun concept to write my own new character.. den Pragya asked for a part.. den Radz needed a guy.. den I thought why leave Dia alone.. its a chain reaction.. 😆 I am really happy the new ppl are being liked.. 😊

Aur haan your classroom scene cracked me up yaar!!! Did you make up all those questions and answers? ahaha 2 parameters: leisure and labour!!! 😆😆 what a great concept yaar def. applies to our mayur here. We all know who's the leisure and who's the labour na? 😆😆 And I loved all the other questions too they were so funny!! 😆
Yeah.. I made that scene up frm personal experience.. 😛 I too had found d lesisure labour theory funny wen I had first read it.. and it didnt stick in my mind much despite that.. Lol

So ok is that enough bakwas for you I'm sure you are holding your head by now so I'll stop but I have to say I just loveee reading your FF it's so enjoyable to read as it not only has romance and story but also humour which I really love!!

🤗

O before I go I have to comment on your ice cream story from last time: O acha to yeh baat thi. 😆 Actually Debby I forgot to tell you it was me who came in your shot and stole Mayank's ice cream. Mujhe na chocolate ice cream bahaut pasand hai. Especially Mayu ke haath ki melted hui one so I couldn't resist. 😆😆
You chindi chor you! Koi nahi, phir pack up ke baad Mayu aur main icecream khaane chale gaye the.. so compensate ho gaya. 😃 😳

....Ok baba I'll stop now mujhe gaaliyan mat de. I'm out peace, love and soul and bhagwan tere is fantastic FF ko humesha taraki de! 🤗

🤗 You're a dahhling.. thank you!!

Originally posted by: debby

Originally posted by: ayeshaD

what?! 😲 *biting nails*

ohh...kay, but tell me one thing...will it effect their relationship in any way? 😕

eeeeeeeeeeeek!

Originally posted by: Senny

hey debby, i apologise for not being able to comment on your update properly before. You totally rocked, this was one of the most relatable and amazing update ever, i literally fell as if i was watching the show. man, it was sooooo good. i could clearly imagine each and every part, it was so clear and yet had its own magic and charm. please pm this part to pd, if you want. i am sure she will like it and incorporate it in the show, atleast consider it. i am eagerly waiting for your next update. i am sure it will be as good as this one or even better. you have kept on raising your standard and my expectations with each passing update. possibly we can have nupur taking care of mayank and his mum looking at them lovingly. whatever will come up, i am sure it will be great. loved it jan. keep it up.

Originally posted by: debby

@Anjalika, Jyothi, Vidisha, Shafoo.. thanx a lot!

@Pragya.. oh.. so r u Bengali?