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Ayesha

@ayeshaD

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#911

Hulllo....how's my favourite girl today?! Hope you're doing great 😊

Pata hai, before reading your updates I always scroll down to check out the length 😛 and i was soo glad to see that this was gonna be a long one! Yay!

Hmmm....so where do i start off with my ramblinggg....yes! I have a complaint....My poor Mayuu ko bemaar kardiya tumne bechara, Mr. perfectionist couldnt come to terms with the fact that he didnt know the answer! awwww...how cute is he?! ☺️ and Mayank ka Nupur pe buhat acha asar hua hai...she's somewhat of a star student now...haina? Good, goood! Well, Mayank ke fever ke bahane we'll get to see some cute moments between them...will we? 😛 lol

You know what I love about your updates.....that story's tend to get boring once the couple confess their love...but that doesnt hold true for your FF...which has only got better and better! However, i would like to point out that Nupur's last dialogue left me a little uneasy...i hope nothing bad is in store for them and us readers 😕 or maybe im just reading too much in between the lines 😛😆

Aray, totally forgot to mention how much i loved the mayu-mom scene! They're the BEST mother-son duo i've ever seen! So cuteee! Bus ab Mayank, Nupur ko mom se milane kab laraha hai? 😛

And Radz and Aditya...im sure they're gonna be the next happening couple after Mayank and Nupur...! 😆 im absolutely lovin' them!

Great update! Loved it as usual! Waiting for the next part...though i wont be able to sit online because midterms are starting from wed 😡 well, on the bright side i'll get to read two updates at once😃 (see, im an optimistic MayUrian😆) so...miss me 😛 and i'll miss you and your update😭

Love ya loads! 🤗

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Sayanti Das

@Raee_Salvatore

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#912

wow debby another fantstic update totally rocking yaar.........kya baat hain 👏u r too gud.thnxxxxxxx a lot for sharing😳....luvd the SaJan scene...it was soo prfctly wriiten the the mommy mayoo scenes r always amazing.....oh i miss mayoo mummy scene yaar........hope yeh MN jungle se jaldi har ajaye😆😳😆n the MN part toh absolutely brillian tha yaar.tune mujhe eco ke theories ratwa diye😉now toh pakka i will b able to say them in class😛😳

do update soon

Luv u.......

Raee🤗🤗

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shrishti gupta

@shrishti gupta

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#913

By God, yeh update toh world best hai!

Jaldi update kijiyega plzzzzzzzz!

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Amber

@bubblygurl

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#914

WOW>..!!! Another dhamaal update..!!! loved the MN scene ...it was soooo well written .....!! poor baby i hope he gets well soon...!!! i want to see Nupur besides him when he reaches home or something..!!

Love you!

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jyothi

@jyothi_cool

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#915

wow debby amazing part loved it hope gujan understands samrat soon

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shafia Akhtar

@IISHAFS

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#916

wowowow tht was amazinggggggg i love it

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debby

@debby

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#917

@Anjalika, Jyothi, Vidisha, Shafoo.. thanx a lot!

@hgrhr.. Welcome to d forum.. and a big thanks for the appreciation..!!

@Pragya.. oh.. so r u Bengali?

@Shrishti.. shukriya! Will do..

@Amber.. thanks a lot jaani.. I hope so too..!!

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debby

@debby

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#918

Originally posted by: ayeshaD
Hulllo....how's my favourite girl today?! Hope you're doing great 😊
Hey Ayesha sweetie.. I am gud.. hope u are too! 😊

Pata hai, before reading your updates I always scroll down to check out the length 😛 and i was soo glad to see that this was gonna be a long one! Yay!
Hehe.. I had sum time.. thus the 2 consecutive long updates.. 😉

Hmmm....so where do i start off with my ramblinggg....yes! I have a complaint....My poor Mayuu ko bemaar kardiya tumne bechara, Mr. perfectionist couldnt come to terms with the fact that he didnt know the answer! awwww...how cute is he?! ☺️ and Mayank ka Nupur pe buhat acha asar hua hai...she's somewhat of a star student now...haina? Good, goood! Well, Mayank ke fever ke bahane we'll get to see some cute moments between them...will we? 😛 lol
Mayu will be fine soon.. use zyada der tak bimaar kaise dekh sakte hai hum.. 😃 Yeah, Nups is a star student now.. sangat ka asar. 😛

You know what I love about your updates.....that story's tend to get boring once the couple confess their love...but that doesnt hold true for your FF...which has only got better and better! However, i would like to point out that Nupur's last dialogue left me a little uneasy...i hope nothing bad is in store for them and us readers 😕 or maybe im just reading too much in between the lines 😛😆
Yeah.. its a conscious effort to try and not make it drag.. m glad u said that. 😊 Nups last dialogue does have a mystery.. will tell u sumtime. 😊

Aray, totally forgot to mention how much i loved the mayu-mom scene! They're the BEST mother-son duo i've ever seen! So cuteee! Bus ab Mayank, Nupur ko mom se milane kab laraha hai? 😛

And Radz and Aditya...im sure they're gonna be the next happening couple after Mayank and Nupur...! 😆 im absolutely lovin' them!
U like Radz-Adi? Yay! Cute moments cumin up - and Mum-Mayu-Nups scene too!

Great update! Loved it as usual! Waiting for the next part...though i wont be able to sit online because midterms are starting from wed 😡 well, on the bright side i'll get to read two updates at once😃 (see, im an optimistic MayUrian😆) so...miss me 😛 and i'll miss you and your update😭

Ooh.. gud luck for ur exams.. m sure u will ace them. 🤗 I will definitely miss you.. and eagerly wait for ur comments after ur exams get over. Love you!

Love ya loads! 🤗

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Pallavi

@pigbelly4myfeet

Rocker

Posted: 16 years ago

#919

hi Debby!!!

Ok so you ready for my bakwas? Ok so here I go....Ok so first of all the Samrat-Gunjan moments were captured really well by you. I feel like in the show Samrat always starts talking to Gunjan jokingly and he loves confusing her with his witty remarks but in the end he always gets serious and touches Gunjan's heart. That's the impact he has on her and you showed that brilliantly my dear!! Ok chal toh next part...ahahah i was laughing so hard at the "ms. aha has decided to keep her surname"!!! 😆😆 For our convenience more than anything else right? 😆 Im glad yaar warna main confused ho jaati I can't imagine Ms. Aha being anything other than...well Ms. Aha!! O and you decided to use the famous 'strawberry' icecream huh? Of course yaar it's mayurians fav. dessert!! Well that and papaya!! 😆😆 And omg the best touch of your update was the 'tide ad' !!!! 😆😆😆 Seriously died laughing. Nupur made a tide ad out of Mayank except in reverse. This should be their ad: "Usually toh humara yeh product apke kapde chamka deta hai par ab dekhiye naya improved Mayur tide!! Jo apke chamkele kapdon ki aisi haalat mein chode ki woh kabhi phir dhone ke layak na hon!! Aaj hi aasmayiye. Sirf do rupee mein!! " 😆 that was really great Debby!! Ok and then Mayu and mom omg sooo sweet yaar. Mayu kitna acha bacha haina? Apni mom ka kitna khayal rakhta hai. He's truly a maa ka ladla..*sigh* I want a boy like him..for more reasons than just that!! 😍 Aur haan finally Dia ko koi uski takkar ka mil hi gaya. Very interesting twist in your story yaar. I love all these new characters you are adding def. makes things very interesting. Aur haan your classroom scene cracked me up yaar!!! Did you make up all those questions and answers? ahaha 2 parameters: leisure and labour!!! 😆😆 what a great concept yaar def. applies to our mayur here. We all know who's the leisure and who's the labour na? 😆😆 And I loved all the other questions too they were so funny!! 😆 So ok is that enough bakwas for you I'm sure you are holding your head by now so I'll stop but I have to say I just loveee reading your FF it's so enjoyable to read as it not only has romance and story but also humour which I really love!!

O before I go I have to comment on your ice cream story from last time: O acha to yeh baat thi. 😆 Actually Debby I forgot to tell you it was me who came in your shot and stole Mayank's ice cream. Mujhe na chocolate ice cream bahaut pasand hai. Especially Mayu ke haath ki melted hui one so I couldn't resist. 😆😆

....Ok baba I'll stop now mujhe gaaliyan mat de. I'm out peace, love and soul and bhagwan tere is fantastic FF ko humesha taraki de! 🤗

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debby

@debby

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#920

@Raee
I miss the dynamic trio too.. :( hope wen MN return frm the meet, we get to c Mum-Mayu-Nups.. Haha, acha hai tumne Eco revise kar li. See how multipurpose Mayu is - sarv gun sampann. 😃
Thanks a ton sweety.. love you! 🤗

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