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maaria

@pakirani

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#641

wow!!! loved it....mayur scene was awesome!!!

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debby

@debby

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#642

@Radz.. alryt den, ur hero will soon make an entry!

@ayesha.. thanx for reading d rest, o fellow Mayurian.. 🤗

@amber.. haila, mayur ko hamesha andhere me rakhna tha kya.. thanx sooo much dear! 🤗

@disha.. thanx a ton dearie.. yes big Sammy-Dia disclosure is cumin up before any proposal.. 🤗

@shafoo.. Dia will learn her lesson soon.. thanks a lot!

@Inshira.. hey, thanx so much for reading..

@Monu.. aww, glad u liked the mooli part.. it struck me as a dumb vegetable back den.. thanks sweetie! 🤗

@pakirani.. thank u soo much!

@akki and bir.. thank you!

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Sayanti Das

@Raee_Salvatore

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#643

ohoooooooo debby the update was just brilliant..the kitchen scenes were fantastic..hai........mayur....i am in my dreamland again...ahaaaaa ..........waisey ballon ko maat chuyun wala dialogue ne mujhe khudki yaad dila di....lolz.......i am still in a trance after meeting ArJun n Rati n now reading ur update...i am just again back to the trance.....lolz....lagta hain i wont ever get out of it again.....n to make sure of tht pls always continue writing this fantastic updates.....btw the saJan scene was really cute too..ohhhhh how i wish it was true n tht diya is such........watever.....i sooooo hope tht gunjan stops listening to her for her own good.......n btw the Radz part was grt too....yeah radz badiya dialogues marti ho...😉.......soooo wats tht going to happen in her life.......hmmmmmmmmmm daal mein kuch kala hain.......lolz.....

will b eagerly waiting for the nxt part.....

Luv u loads,

Raee🤗🤗

Edited by Raee_rockz - 16 years ago

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debby

@debby

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#644

@Raee

Hey..I am in a dreamland too after reading ur Arti report.. havent got over it yet..
Radz.. there is going to be a new entry soon.. i am building up to the wedding actly.. lol..
thanx so much for reading dear.. love you too! 🤗

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MoNayaHolicPrag

@MoNayaHolicPrag

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 16 years ago

#645

hey give the coming up next naa debby and update soon

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Kavya

@Bazinga

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#646

Debs 🤗🤗🤗 , loved loved loved the kitchen scene babes! But you did not make them cook in the darkness 😭😭 damn this power man! It resumes at the wrong time always 😡😡 and Mayu's mom should have spent some more time at her friend's place! Hey, why don't you do one thing, mom's friend calls and tells her that she gave her the wrong file or something so Mayu's mom goes to her friend's place to give her the right file again leaving Mayu and Nupz alone.😳😳 Nupz is scared as hell now and to make the matters worse for her and better for Mayu, the power goes off yet again! 😆 I am imagining Mayu's mischievous expressions already! 😍

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debby

@debby

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#647

@pragya.. sure swts, will be posting a precap soon..

@kavya.. 🤗thank u so much for taking out time to read this.. really happy u liked it..!! Now thts a gud idea..though i have to take d story fwd and have nupur confess now.. but i will make mayu's mom suggest such a thing. 😉 Thanx again dear!

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Disha

@disha141094

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#648

i really hope d kitchen scene hppnes in mjht......or ill kill d creatives.....lolz jus kiddin......i wunt kill em,......n u noe wat....n b4 reading ur ff i wud usually wonder......wat ol mayur luv scenes cud b thought 4 d future.....i felt lesser possibilitiez 4 mayur love scenes.....but after reading ur ff....i stopped thnking so....i really luv ur ff man.....hum aapke fan ban gaye hain......lolz.........so watz cumin up?? in d nxt update