The story goes on - FF..UPDATED Part 57 ~*~

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MoNayaHolicPrag

@MoNayaHolicPrag

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Posted: 16 years ago

#631

its amazing

hey but u told u will add me also

with sammy hope u dp dat in the next plss

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Aradhna

@Anhdara13

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Posted: 16 years ago

#632

Debby! I was not sure if I'd be able to comment this time, because I am overseas, but I had signed in on my cousins computer and my God, what a part! *fans self* Awkwardness between them, more on Nupur's part *swoon*

Can I just say I absolutely abhore Dia? She needs to die. Ooh, what am I there for then. Can I kill her??

And here I am! *poses* I'm guessing the lights coming back on was God's sign that Adi's coming soon? *blushes* have I mentioned I love the way you write me? Amazingly written Debs! More soon? Though I may not be able to comment, know that I'm reading and falling more in love with your writing with each update!

Love,

Radz

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debby

@debby

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+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#633

@ayesha.. U knw I was planning to make dis an out and out mayur part bt den thought i need to take d story further as well.. i luv the fact that you loved it.. thanks a million!! 🤗

@anjalika.. thanks!

@pragya.. thank you. I do rmbr.. dere's going to be another new entry soon, u will be with him.. 😊

@Radz.. as I told u before, an update isn't over till I hear frm u.. and now u r an integral part of the story! Yes, the lights part was a build up to Adi's entry.. I hope u like him..
thanks so much Radz for taking out time for this! 🤗

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Aradhna

@Anhdara13

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Posted: 16 years ago

#634

^^ Considering the way you write,I'm sure I'll love him, both in your FF and here where I am!

Love,

Radz

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Ayesha

@ayeshaD

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#635

Debbyyyy...just read the rest of the update.....😛

ughhhh.....whats with Dia?! Poor Gunjan.....really felt bad for her😭

waiting to see how Samrat'll react after this...

waiting desperately for the next update......!

xoxo

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Amber

@bubblygurl

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#636

😳

🤗

It was just mesmerizing...Loved it completely.....I read it like more than 5 times by now...!! I wish electricity had gone off forever..~~~~

Love you...~~!!

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Disha

@disha141094

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#637

awesum update debby......though i havent read ol d ff's of d mjht forum....but i feel ur ff rox man.......really lyked dis line...Nupur: wah Mayank, ise kehte hai dedication. Andhere me bhi pakaoge, khaane ko bhi aur mujhko bhi! hehehehe.......n i hope dt sammy sun later cumz 2 noe abt diaz plan.......

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shafia Akhtar

@IISHAFS

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Posted: 16 years ago

#638

tht was cool part i hate dia now fakingg to cryyyyyy take sammy gunjan love to seprat them

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Shahida

@Inshira

Voyager

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Posted: 16 years ago

#639

I loved Mayurs part it was da best plz cont soon

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Monica

@_Monu_

Dazzler

Posted: 16 years ago

#640

Mayank: ab agar aap side nahi hongi toh main salt kaise lunga?
Nupur: salt??

Nupur: by God, ye acha hai! Ghar aaye mehmaan se kaam karwaoge?
Mayank looks at her for a while.
Mayank: ab tum mehmaan thode hi ho Nupur.
Nupur blushes again.
Nupur: acha? Toh hum apke hai kaun?
Mayank: mooli.
Nupur: (angrily) kya? Main tumhare liye mooli ke barabar hu? Wo bhi mooli? Khaane me itni bekaar hai, na koi taste hai, na kuch! Mayank tum toh –
Mayank: Nupur! (He gives her a couple of radishes.) Aur kuch nahi kar sakti toh dimaag toh mat khao, baithke inhe hi slice kar do.

Nupur (to herself): jo bhi ho, mera langoor hai bahut pyara!

HA HA HA HA THAT WAS SO FUNNY!!!

CANT STOP TO LAUGH!!!

HE HE HE HE

LOVELY CUTE UPDATE DEBBY

LOVE MAYUR KITCHEN SCENE

MAYUR ROCKS!!

SAD 4 SAJAN......

BUT I KNOW U WILL DO SOMETHING THAT WILL BE FANTABOLOUS!!!

ANIWAY SUPERB AS ALWAYS

CONT SOON

TAKE UR TIME