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Posted: 17 years ago
gr8 ff 👏do continue ... im sure the next one will be gr8 😛
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Posted: 17 years ago
@truesaphire

Thanks so much.. 😛
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Posted: 17 years ago
Cut to: Canteen
Pooja is sitting on a chair, looking at her watch. Time never seems to get over when the one you're spending time with is someone like Uday.

Uday: batao na babes, tum kiska wait kar rahi ho? Main toh aa gaya!
Pooja: for God sake Uday, main tumhara wait nahi kar rahi thi.
Uday: acha? Toh phir...Samrat ka?
Pooja: nahi.
Uday: toh kiska? Batao na.
Pooja: tumhe sab kuch batana zaruri hai. Baad me bataungi.
Uday: phir baad me? Jise dekho mujhe yehi kehta hai. Abhi batao, abhi batao.
Pooja: ok baba, main actually Benji ka wait kar rahi hu.
(Uday falls down from his chair)
Kya hua Uday? Tum thik ho?
(Uday gets up on his own and with a morose expression starts walking out of the canteen.)
Uday: sab ka wait kisi na kisi ko hota hai, bas mera wait koi nahi karta. Deedz ki maar ke alawa!

Cut to: Library
Mayank and Nupur are discussing their project animatedly when Sandhya comes and interrupts them.

Sandhya: hie! Main tum logo ko disturb toh nahi kar rahi?
Nupur: sau chuhe khake billi haj ko chali!
Sandhya: kuch kaha tumne?
Nupur: nahi toh.
Sandhya: mujhe nahi lagta hum ek dusre ko thik se jaante hai..I am Sandhya, Mayank ne tumhe bataya hi hoga?
Nupur: Mayank aur mere paas baat karne ko aur bhi baatein hai.
Sandhya: oh I am sure. Tum Nupur ho right? Mayank ne bataya tha.
Nupur: (to herself) koi bhi line Mayank ke naam ke bina puri nahi hota kya, by God!
Sandhya: actually Mayank, main kuch kaam se aayi thi.
Mayank: kya baat hai?
Sandhya: wo main project ke silsile me Deodhar Sir ke paas gayi thi..unhone kaha ki mujhe kisi group me merge hona padega. Will you guys mind if I join you?
Nupur: kya?? Jee nahi, hume aur koi nahi chahiye.
Mayank (interrupting her): arey nahi Sandhya, Nupur ka matlab hai ke tum shayad ab project details grasp na kar paao.
Sandhya: koi baat nahi, main sab kar lungi. Toh phir main ab se tumhari team me?
Nupur: hamari team me.
Sandhya: (smiles) Alryt..thanks! (To Mayank) Main tumhe phone karke outline puch lungi..see you guys. Bye. Bye Nupur.

(After Sandhya has left, Mayank looks questioningly at Nupur.)

Nupur: kya? Aise kya dekh rahe ho?
Mayank: tumhe dekh raha hu.
Nupur: (shyly) Aaj main bahut achi lag rahi hu kya?
Mayank: tumhe Sandhya kuch khaas achi nahi lagi na?
Nupur: kyun? Tumhe bahut achi lagi kya?
Mayank: nahi..I mean..
Nupur: mujhe sab pata hai..jo har koi uski intelligence ke gungaan ga raha hai, tum toh impress hoge hi!
Mayank (smiles): haan. Intelligent toh hai..aur smart bhi.
Nupur: smart? Oversmart hai! Tumne dekha nahi wo tumhe kaise dekh rahi thi?
Mayank: nahi toh. Kaise?
Nupur: jaise dekhne ka haq sirf mujhe hona chahiye!
(She abruptly stops and both look into each other's eyes for yet another halted moment.)

Cut to: Classroom - Samrat and Gunjan

He wants to talk and she wants to study. Its been going on for some time now.

Gunjan: Samrat. Mujhe aaj yeh notes pure karne hi hai.
Samrat: Gunjan. Tumhe aaj mujhse baat karni hi hai.
Gunjan: toh kaho na. Kis baare me?
Samrat: uh..hum dono ke baare me?
Gunjan: kya?
Samrat: yahi ke hum dono saath saath date pe kitne cute lagte hai. Chale kya?
Gunjan: kaha?
Samrat: date pe chashmish, kahi bhi. Kaho toh sitaro pe le chalu?
Gunjan: uh..nahi..woh..
Samrat: uh..nahi..woh..(She begins writing again and he takes the pen out of her hands.) Phir se notes! Aaj tum notes nahi banaogi. Kal bana lena, parso bana lena.
Gunjan: nahi..parso mera..
Samrat: tumhara?
Gunjan (smiles) kuch nahi.
Samrat: batao na, kya hai?

(As Shukla Sir comes into the room, they are forced to stop talking.)


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Posted: 17 years ago
Coming up:

Samrat finds out about Gunjan's birthday and plans something really special. What is it?
Find out more in the next update! 😛
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: meera2

That was so good
I can't wait to read more


Thanks a lot dearie..glad u liked it!! 😃

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Posted: 17 years ago
sob sob....i rellli dun like this sandhya girl.....pliz get her out of my MaYur...

but im having my fingers crossed....n i believe tht u hav introduced her for sum good reasons...

gunjan bday ....nice

but does tht mean few MaYur scenes????
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: bubblygurl

sob sob....i rellli dun like this sandhya girl.....pliz get her out of my MaYur...
but im having my fingers crossed....n i believe tht u hav introduced her for sum good reasons...
gunjan bday ....nice
but does tht mean few MaYur scenes????


Yeah..she's just a catalyst for all things nice..sumtimes it needs a 3rd party to tell u a couple of hometruths! 😉
Nope..there'll be Mayur scenes too..a merger of sorts..How can I live w'o Mayank? 😳
Thanks for reading.. 🤗
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: debby

Cut to: Canteen
Pooja is sitting on a chair, looking at her watch. Time never seems to get over when the one you're spending time with is someone like Uday.

Uday: batao na babes, tum kiska wait kar rahi ho? Main toh aa gaya!
Pooja: for God sake Uday, main tumhara wait nahi kar rahi thi.
Uday: acha? Toh phir...Samrat ka?
Pooja: nahi.
Uday: toh kiska? Batao na.
Pooja: tumhe sab kuch batana zaruri hai. Baad me bataungi.
Uday: phir baad me? Jise dekho mujhe yehi kehta hai. Abhi batao, abhi batao.
Pooja: ok baba, main actually Benji ka wait kar rahi hu.
(Uday falls down from his chair)
Kya hua Uday? Tum thik ho?
(Uday gets up on his own and with a morose expression starts walking out of the canteen.)
Uday: sab ka wait kisi na kisi ko hota hai, bas mera wait koi nahi karta. Deedz ki maar ke alawa!

Cut to: Library
Mayank and Nupur are discussing their project animatedly when Sandhya comes and interrupts them.

Sandhya: hie! Main tum logo ko disturb toh nahi kar rahi?
Nupur: sau chuhe khake billi haj ko chali!
Sandhya: kuch kaha tumne?
Nupur: nahi toh.
Sandhya: mujhe nahi lagta hum ek dusre ko thik se jaante hai..I am Sandhya, Mayank ne tumhe bataya hi hoga?
Nupur: Mayank aur mere paas baat karne ko aur bhi baatein hai.
Sandhya: oh I am sure. Tum Nupur ho right? Mayank ne bataya tha.
Nupur: (to herself) koi bhi line Mayank ke naam ke bina puri nahi hota kya, by God!
Sandhya: actually Mayank, main kuch kaam se aayi thi.
Mayank: kya baat hai?
Sandhya: wo main project ke silsile me Deodhar Sir ke paas gayi thi..unhone kaha ki mujhe kisi group me merge hona padega. Will you guys mind if I join you?
Nupur: kya?? Jee nahi, hume aur koi nahi chahiye.
Mayank (interrupting her): arey nahi Sandhya, Nupur ka matlab hai ke tum shayad ab project details grasp na kar paao.
Sandhya: koi baat nahi, main sab kar lungi. Toh phir main ab se tumhari team me?
Nupur: hamari team me.
Sandhya: (smiles) Alryt..thanks! (To Mayank) Main tumhe phone karke outline puch lungi..see you guys. Bye. Bye Nupur.

(After Sandhya has left, Mayank looks questioningly at Nupur.)

Nupur: kya? Aise kya dekh rahe ho?
Mayank: tumhe dekh raha hu.
Nupur: (shyly) Aaj main bahut achi lag rahi hu kya?
Mayank: tumhe Sandhya kuch khaas achi nahi lagi na?
Nupur: kyun? Tumhe bahut achi lagi kya?
Mayank: nahi..I mean..
Nupur: mujhe sab pata hai..jo har koi uski intelligence ke gungaan ga raha hai, tum toh impress hoge hi!
Mayank (smiles): haan. Intelligent toh hai..aur smart bhi.
Nupur: smart? Oversmart hai! Tumne dekha nahi wo tumhe kaise dekh rahi thi?
Mayank: nahi toh. Kaise?
Nupur: jaise dekhne ka haq sirf mujhe hona chahiye!
(She abruptly stops and both look into each other's eyes for yet another halted moment.)

Cut to: Classroom - Samrat and Gunjan

He wants to talk and she wants to study. Its been going on for some time now.

Gunjan: Samrat. Mujhe aaj yeh notes pure karne hi hai.
Samrat: Gunjan. Tumhe aaj mujhse baat karni hi hai.
Gunjan: toh kaho na. Kis baare me?
Samrat: uh..hum dono ke baare me?
Gunjan: kya?
Samrat: yahi ke hum dono saath saath date pe kitne cute lagte hai. Chale kya?
Gunjan: kaha?
Samrat: date pe chashmish, kahi bhi. Kaho toh sitaro pe le chalu?
Gunjan: uh..nahi..woh..
Samrat: uh..nahi..woh..(She begins writing again and he takes the pen out of her hands.) Phir se notes! Aaj tum notes nahi banaogi. Kal bana lena, parso bana lena.
Gunjan: nahi..parso mera..
Samrat: tumhara?
Gunjan (smiles) kuch nahi.
Samrat: batao na, kya hai?

(As Shukla Sir comes into the room, they are forced to stop talking.)


Hiiiii
I'm a new user but i'm reading ur ff since long
its very nice😊
can we be friends?
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: debby


Yeah..she's just a catalyst for all things nice..sumtimes it needs a 3rd party to tell u a couple of hometruths! 😉
Nope..there'll be Mayur scenes too..a merger of sorts..How can I live w'o Mayank? 😳
Thanks for reading.. 🤗


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no need to thank me for tht dear ...ur ff is brilliant....no1 can stop themselves frm reading it....

n ya....as ur siggy says...

head over heal in luv wid mayank....

srsly ...its the same wid me.....

MaYur rock!!!....dun they???!!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
Debby! Your FF is brilliant! But then I've told you that many times.. *sigh* Will miss this till I come back.. (going for a holiday, won't be taking my laptop)
Not liking Sandhya.. and feeling bad for Uday! He so needs a girl.. Give him Sandhya! 😆
Love,
Radz

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