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Posted: 17 years ago
@demi lovato, lrl_01

Thanks so much..means a lot to me! 😊
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superb,....>!!!!!!!

is there a confession cming up???

update soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
i love it this is my 1st time reading and i love it especially mayank and nupur
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i lovee it plzz contuied soon
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@Amber
Um not yet..but some more cute cute scenes.. Lol!
Lotsa luv.. :)


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Posted: 17 years ago
Suuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuupppppppppppppeeeeeeeeeeeeerrrrrrbbbbbbbbb
That was fantastic
I hope mayur confess
And i hope sajan confess too
WOWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWw

pLeAsE cOnTiNuE sOoN
CaN't WaIT tO rEaD mOrE
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@Meera

Thanks a lot.. 🤗so happy u liked it!
Will surely update soon..
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hi i am new to this forum but was silent reader before
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Cut to: Next Morning ' Excel College

Benji and Samrat are discussing something and as Samrat goes on, Benji's expression gets more and more irritated.

Samrat: haan dude, samajh gaya kya karna hai?
Benji: haan haan bilkul. Mera toh janam hi tere aise waise kaam karne ke liye hua hai.
Samrat: aise waise nahi Benji, yaha baat chashmish ki hai. Mission Gunjan Ki Baat me hume pata lagana hi hoga ki kal kya hai.
Benji: aur dude, itni investigation ke baad agar pata chale ke kuch hai hi nahi toh meri mehnat ki fees deni padegi.
Samrat: kuch toh pakka hai. Gunjan ne aise kaha jaise kuch special hai aur wo mujhse chupa rahi ho. (Suddenly he sees Gunjan.) Wo dekh, udhar! Chal kaam pe lagte hai.

(Benji makes a face but agrees. Both of them run up to where she is and start following her around. Gunjan goes upto the library and browses for some books. Sam and Benji are peeping and have their ears alert.)

Benji: (whispers) yeh teri Gunjanji toh pura din class aur Library me hi bita dengi. Aise kuch pata nahi chalega. Usse puch le na.
Samrat: puchunga to kabhi nahi batayegi. Don't worry, mission ka phase 2 bhi toh hai.
Benji: phase 2?
Samrat: yes. Gunjan Ki Baat mission me hamari madad karengi chashmish ki friend.
Benji: kaunsi friend? Gunjanji kisi se baat bhi karti hai?
Samrat: (winks) wohi wali friend...teri hot date...yaad hai?
(Benji's face lights up and then falls as he remembers the one person he had seen Gunjan hang around with, other than Samrat ' the big time foodie Utsula!)
Benji: nahi!! Acha dude, mujhe class me jaana hai! Bye!
(Samrat gets hold of him)
Samrat: arey kaha ja raha hai? Date teri hai, mission hamara hai. Toh help tujhe hi karni hai na.
(They go to the canteen and spot Utsula gorging some burgers.)
Benji: aise student roz aaye toh canteen band karni padegi.
Samrat: hie babes!
(Utsula looks around and wonders who he is greeting.)
Samrat: idhar udhar mat dekho babes, tumhe hi keh raha hu.
Utsula: (smiling madly) Sa..Sa..Samrat..hie!!
Samrat: actually Benji tumse baat karna chahta tha. Maine kaha k meri dost hai, main setting karata hu. Kyun Benji?
(Benji looks as if he could kill Samrat but manages a watery smile.)
Utsula: dost? Main tumhari dost hu?
Samrat: of course. Acha dost ho, toh dost ke liye ek kaam karogi?
Utsula: h..haan. Kaho na..pyar hai.
Samrat: kya??
Utsula: I mean, kya kaam hai?
Samrat: Gunjan ke bare ke kuch information chahiye. Kal usse related kuch hai kya?
Utsula: Gunjan? Arey kal to uska birthday hai.
(Samrat smiles to himself.)
Samrat: oho, toh yeh baat hai. Thanks babes. Ab main tum dono ko akela chod deta hu, bye Benji!

Cut to: Excel College ' Dance Room
Nupur is there..alone..thinking about all the salsa rehearsals she had done with Mayank. Just then, Mayank comes into the room.

Mayank: Nupur! Tum yaha ho. Aur maine na jaane tumhe kaha kaha nahi dhunda.
Nupur: kyun, kuch kaam tha?
Mayank: kyun, aise hi nahi dhund sakta kya?
Nupur: uh..nahi. Main wo class me jaane hi wali thi.
Mayank: aaj aur koi class nahi hai. Shukla Sir college hi nahi aye.
Nupur: sach? By God, kam se kam aaj shudh Hindi ke path nahi padhne padenge.
Mayank: (laughs) waise tum yaha kya kar rahi thi?
Nupur: wo actually main hamare salsa ke bare me soch rahi thi. Humne kitni rehearsals ki thi'aur dance kabhi hua hi nahi.
Mayank: hmm. Toh Nupur us wajah se upset hai.
Nupur: nahi upset nahi hu, bas aise hi.
Mayank: (smiles) koi baat nahi. Talent parade me na sahi, hum abhi toh dance kar sakte hai na?
Nupur: haan! Kyun nahi? Mere saath rehkar tum bhi thode samajhdar ho gaye ho na Mayank? (She goes up to the music player to check what CD's were available.) Lekin yaha hamare salsa ki CD toh hai hi
nahi'Samrat ke performance ki padi hai'"Bachna aye haseeno".. (laughs) wohi play kar du? (She presses the play button expecting the title track but what plays is the romantic song "Khuda jaane".) Um sorry, galat gaana. Main band karti hu.

As she is about to press the stop button, Mayank comes close to her and his arms go around her waist. She abruptly turns to face him and sees his soft, warm eyes look directly at her. She feels strangely shy and looks down but Mayank is in no mood to let go. He swings Nupur around till her hands are on his shoulders and then they both sway to the music, lost in each other. The world around seems to dissolve and for the two of them, no moment before or after seems to exist. Nupur feels so secure and loved when she is with Mayank and for him, Nupur is the one he aches to spend time with. Impulsively, they get closer to each other and in a moment, are in each other's arms. But someone is watching them from the door and makes a sudden noise. The spell breaks and the two slowly let go, to see who is at the door.

Sandhya: uh, sorry guys. Mujhe laga talent parade khatam ho gaya hai?

(Mayank and Nupur look at each other and then at Sandhya, silently cursing her for breaking the moment.)


Edited by debby - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
😡 NO NO NO NO NO NO

i hate tht sandhya girl....y she has to interrupt mayur...n in sucha romantic moment.....srsly.....

i just luved the khuda jaane part...

amazing update sweety..🤗

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