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Posted: 17 years ago
awesome part cont soon plz!!!!!👏
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WOWOWWOWOWO COOLLLLLLLLLLLLL reaalllyyyyyyyyy i love it plzz contuied soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
That was very nice
Can't wait to read more
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Edited by debby - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
Awesome part!Gunjan's bday!Really cant wait!
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Posted: 17 years ago
@Anu

Thanks a ton..happy u liked it.. 😃
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@Amber
Totally..there isnt a doubt abt it.. 😳
Mayur rock!!

@Radz
Ooh..enjoy ur holiday! And u knw I love hearing frm u, dont u? 😛
Hmm, now that's an idea! Lol. Will consider it. 😆
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Posted: 17 years ago
great part, so sam is asking gunjan for a date.👏, i hope he would fall inlove with her on her birthday, and propose her tht day only.
plssssssssssssssssss. hehe😆😆
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Cut to: That Night – Gunjan and Nupur's home
Nupur is rather quiet and dreamy and Gunjan notices it.

Gunjan: kya baat hai di? Kya soch rahe ho?
Nupur: huh? Kuch nahi.
Gunjan: tumhari shakal pe likha hai di, kuch toh soch rahe ho pakka.
Nupur: tu kaise jaan leti hai Gunjan?
Gunjan: apki behan jo hu. Ab batao na.
Nupur: Gunjan tujhe bataya tha na wo Sandhya ke bare me?
Gunjan: haan woh apki class ki nayi student? Shukla Sir to uski tareef karte nahi thak rahe the.
Nupur: arey pata hai Deodhar Sir ne use Mayank aur mere project group me daal diya hai.
Gunjan: arey yeh toh acha hua. Ab apka project aur acha ho jaayega.
Nupur: Gunjan tu bhi na, ekdum buddhu hai. Wo jabse aayi hai, mujhe…mujhe kuch acha nahi lag raha.
Gunjan: kyun?
Nupur: wo na bas Mayank Mayank karti rehti hain aur Mayank bhi usi ki taraf dhyan deta rehta hai. Jaise main toh waha hu hi nahi!
Gunjan: (thoughtfully) acha…toh apko Sandhya se jalan ho rahi hai?
Nupur: jalan? Pagal hai kya Gunjan! Mujhe kyun jalan hogi. Mujhe bas wo ladki thik nahi lagti.
Gunjan: di, aap bhi. Itna toh mujhe bhi dikh raha hai ke apko acha kya nahi lag raha.
Nupur: kya? Matlab?
Gunjan: Mayank kisi aur ko zyada importance de, yehi baat apko achi nahi lag rahi na?
Nupur: shayad tu thik keh rahi hai Gunjan. Wo Mayank bhi na, mujhe kabhi samajh hi nahi aata ke main uske bare me kya sochti hu!
Gunjan: don't worry di…shayad wo bhi aisa hi soch raha hoga.
Nupur: wo aur mere baare me sochega! Wo toh apni kitaabo me khoya hoga..nahi woh toh us Sandhya ke "Hie Mayank! Hie Mayank" me khoya hoga!
Gunjan: di! Phir se?
Nupur: sorry Gunjan. Chal yeh bata, tujhe birthday pe kya chahiye?
Gunjan: (smiles) kuch bhi nahi, bas aap pareshan mat ho.
Nupur: arey main pareshan nahi hu, wo toh bas Mayank na, uska naam monkey hi thik hai by God. Aur kuch bhi nahi matlab? Mera dil keh raha hai ke tera yeh wala birthday bahut hi special hoga!
(Gunjan gets lost in thoughts and wonders if Nupur might be right.)

Cut to: Dia
She is lying in bed but unable to sleep. All her thoughts are revolving around her precious Sammy.

Dia: main jaanti hu Sammy ki tum mujhse pyar karte ho. Woh toh bas Gunjan aur talent parade ki wajah se tumhe ab tak mujhe kehne ka mauka nahi mila. Par tum apni Candy ko nahi jaante. Agar tum mujhse nahi keh sakte, toh main to keh sakti hu. Ke main tumse kitna pyar karti hu. (She turns on her side and smiles, lost in dreams.) Haan Sammy, main jaldi hi tumhe bata dungi ke I love you. I love you sooo much!

Cut to: Mayank

He is sitting on the bed, with the receiver in hand, doubtful about whether or not to make the call, when his Mom comes into the room.

Mom: phone karna hai to kar le na Mayu, isme itna kya soch raha hai?
(Mayank hurriedly replaces the receiver.)
Mayank: arey nahi Ma, wo main dial tone check kar raha tha.
Mom: raat ke 12 baje?
Mayank: uh…
Mom: han soch le koi excuse, main wait karti hu. (She laughs and comes and sits by him on his bed.) Kya baat hai Mayu, bol na.
Mayank: nahi. Bolunga to aap phir waisi baate shuru kar doge.
Mom: waisi kaisi? Nupur jaisi?
Mayank: maa!
Mom: (imitating him) maa! Itni books padhne ke bad bhi tu uske bare me itna confused kyun hai? Ab nayi baa kya hui?
Mayank: ma aaj hamare project team me Sandhya aa gayi hai. Aur na jane kyun Nupur usse itna ajeeb behave kar rahi thi, jaise use bhagana ho. Use aise pehle kabhi nahi dekha.
Mom: but of course Mayu, she's jealous. Bahut hi normal reaction hai.
Mayank: jealous? Par kyun?
Mom: (hitting him lightly on the forehead) buddhu! Nupur tujhe pasand karti hai isliye.
Mayank: pasand…kaise?
Mom: jaise tu use karta hai, waise?
Mayank: ma tum phir shuru ho gayi.
Mom: (smiles) thik hai thik hai. Main jaati hu. Tu so ja. Sweet dreams!

(After his Mom goes, Mayank sits back and wonders about what she had just said. Was she right? Did Nupur really like him more than just a friend and did he reciprocate her feelings?)

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Posted: 17 years ago
tooooooooo
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