The story goes on - FF..UPDATED Part 57 ~*~ - Page 17

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Posted: 17 years ago

cool update...keep going😊

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Posted: 17 years ago
as i always say ...way to go D!
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Posted: 17 years ago
@tanya, bubbly@12, amsjms

Thanks a lot guys! 🤗
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Posted: 17 years ago
caught up with the remaining parts today, wow you did a tremendous job, i hope there would not be a love triangle between sandhiya, mayank and nupur.
can't wait for the next part.
love ur ff.👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
@demi lovato

Hey..thanks soo much..I am really happy you liked it.. 😊
Thanx for reading! 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
Cut to: Mayank's home
He is in his room working on the project when his Mom calls him for dinner.

Mom: Mayu! Chal uth, dinner time.
Mayank: bas ek minute ma, yeh khatam karke aata hu.
Mom: no ek minute, do minute. Ek ghante se yahi bol raha hai. Chalo chalo get up now! (As she goes into the kitchen to get food ready, the phone rings.) Phone uthana Mayank, shayad office se hai. Kehna ki main bas aa rahi hu.
(Mayank goes upto the phone and picks up the receiver.)

Mayank: hello..just hold on a minute..Mom aa rahi hai.
Nupur: haye kyun? Tum baat karna bhul gaye ho kya?
Mayank: Nupur!! Oh sorry, mujhe laga Mom ke office se phone hai. (His Mom has come into the room with the food and seeing that it is Nupur's call, gestures Mayank to go on. She takes the food back and Mayank is distracted for a moment.)
Nupur: sorry…tum busy the kya?
Mayank: arey nahi nahi…tum ghar aa gayi? Gunjan ne toh kaha tha kal aane wali ho.
Nupur: haan wo chachaji aaye hue hai na toh hospital se jaldi discharge ho gaya.
Mayank: (happily) great. Toh kal se phir tumhari baatein sunne ko milengi college me.
Nupur: kyun? Mujhe miss kiya tumne?
Mayank: of course miss kiya Nupur.
Nupur: (pleasantly surprised) sach?
Mayank: aur nahi toh kya. Tum mere saath hoti ho toh tumhari bak bak ke darr se koi mere paas nahi aata. Security ho jaati hai na thodi.
Nupur: Mayank! Tum toh bilkul waise hi ho.
Mayank: (softly) kaisa hone chahiye tha?
Nupur: mujhe laga ke mere accident se tumhe meri thodi zyada kadar hone lagi ho. Par nahi, heere ki chamak to johari ko hi hoti hai, Mayank ko nahi.
Mayank: yeh wala muhavra naya seekha hospital me?
Nupur: (making a face) kya chutkula tha by God! Khaer Mayank, maine yeh bolne ke liye phone kiya tha ke kal project ke notes le aana. Aur mera kaam mujhe samjha dena, thik hai?
Mayank: oho, naya naya josh kaam karne ka.. I am impressed..
Nupur: hai na Mayank, by God! Jabse tumse jhagda hua tha na maine khud ko bahut kosa. Ab apna kaam khud hi karungi. Hamesha.
Mayank: mujhe impress karne ke liye?
Nupur: jee nahi. Bas yuhi, apne liye. (Suddenly Gunjan calls her from behind, asking her to come to dinner.)
Acha Mayank, main phone rakhti hu.
Mayank: kyun, kya hua?
Nupur: waise bhi tum meri baato se thak jaate ho na isliye.
Mayank: (to himself) wo to main aise hi kehta rehta hu.
Nupur: kuch kaha tumne?
Mayank: uh…nahi. Main bhi rakhta hu, kal milte hai. Bye!
Nupur: bye!

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Posted: 17 years ago
Coming up:

Sandhya doesn't have a project partner. Deodhar Sir asks her to join Mayank and Nupur.
What is on the cards now - fireworks? 😉


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Posted: 17 years ago
it was v.nice,Mayank-Nupur so cute
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Posted: 17 years ago
Debby! I absolutely loved the conversation between the two! It was so Mayank and Nupur.. Perfectly done!
Love,
Radz
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Posted: 17 years ago
hey Debby
The conversation between the two was so cute and perfect
I loved it
Can't wait to read more
Please continue soon

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