AkhIra OS || One Last Time

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Here's a short one-shot on the beautiful hug between Akhilesh and Ira in today's episode. Just something I wrote down quickly, hope you like it :)
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AkhIra OS || One Last Time

"Kaa bole hum? Naya jamana hai... Chalo thike nahi lo ashirwad kam se kam ek dusre ke gale toh lag sakte ho ki nahi?" giggled Pushpa.

Before Akhilesh could even utter a word, Ira had launched herself at him, arms around his neck, tears soaking his collar as she felt him tense.

"Please, Akhilesh..." She cried softly, her hot breath against his neck. "Ek akhri baar..." And that was all he needed. "Pushpa Aunty ki khushi ke liye," she offered weakly still clinging on to him.

The idea that this was truly the last time he could ever do this - without any inhibition, without a shred of doubt of whether she'd want this or not - hit him unexpectedly and all of a sudden his arms had wrapped tightly around her waist, involuntarily. He let out a sigh of relief, her embrace comforting him and he didn't realise when he'd started crying...

And somehow this was different. It wasn't a hug masked behind gratitude or admiration. No. This was... something else. Much stronger. Much more consuming.

Somewhere in the distant he heard a dull murmuring sound but he couldn't bring himself to move... not so soon anyway.

She burrowed her face into his neck. He felt so solid and warm and it wasn't enough. She wanted to get closer and stay like that for... for just a little longer.

One last time.

Gripping her tighter, his gaze finally landed upon the empty room. How long had it been? Akhilesh wrenched her arms away from his neck, watching her hastily wipe her eyes.

Taking a deep breath to gain some composure, recalling why this was necessary, he nodded towards the door, "Chale?"

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I know, this was incredibly short but it was just something I came up with like in a very short period of time... sort of like an epiphany in the form of fan-fiction. 😆
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SymphonyStar thumbnail
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Beautiful OS Inka on that AkhIra hug 👏 Akku's feelings put beautifully.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Super Like Inka, Super super like.
A nice piece you wrote about the equally nice excellent sweet ... 👏👏👏 scene .

I read this OS before watching the episode today, it seems the script of the scene.
You write very well.

Now take your time and give us this kind of excellent writeups time to time.

👍🏼

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: SymphonyStar

Beautiful OS Inka on that AkhIra hug 👏 Akku's feelings put beautifully.


Thanks, Star 😃
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Bonai

Super Like Inka, Super super like.

A nice piece you wrote about the equally nice excellent sweet ... 👏👏👏 scene .

I read this OS before watching the episode today, it seems the script of the scene.
You write very well.

Now take your time and give us this kind of excellent writeups time to time.

👍🏼


That's very sweet of you, Bon Bon (hope you don't mind me calling you that 😆) And yes, I'll definitely aim to write more, and to be honest the writers of MHB are so talented that it doesn't take much effort to become inspired :)
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: InkandFire


That's very sweet of you, Bon Bon (hope you don't mind me calling you that 😆) And yes, I'll definitely aim to write more, and to be honest the writers of MHB are so talented that it doesn't take much effort to become inspired :)


Bon Bon 😃... IF ke IF.. its a super like for the name also ... DO write more ... I'll be eagerly but patiently waiting ...
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Ink this is awesome!
honestly you portrayed their feelings so beautifully!❤️

please do continue...

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