OS: Marking You As My Own - Page 2

Hey LM.. 😊 how are u girl.. An OS after a long time.. ❤️ ❤️ a perfect potion for our sinking hearts on this dreadful day..

now coming to this.. beginning was so cute with their friendly banter.. ranveer caught drinking by her & his antics was ❤️ .. but this Ishani so involved in herself, par bechari kya kare, she needed revenge & since it was against chirkut we are also supporting her .. but pyaar se bhi to she could've handled ranveer but kahan..😆 😆 we are dreaming too much.. 😆 baby is crying now, see Ishani u always do this.. lekin one good news and he is cheered up.. kitni khushi vali moment.. 😆 & their samosa party .. but here Ishani surprised me.. how come she turned so brainy.. 😲 how perfectly she read his soul 👏 , amazing & the way u summarized his fear through her words in that one para is amazing.. it is so real.. 👏 👏 & at end her one line again, haa.. how much I wish to see this Ishani in real.. but in this entire part, some lines caught my fancy & I mixed them, see how it turned out.. "He'd barely been in his senses that time, when she had dragged him to the car and forced him into the passenger seat he was on the verge of tears".. see again many interpretations can happen 😈 😈 .. pata nahi why I always become mad after reading ur work, kuch na kuch mil hi jata hai.. 🤣 🤣

ok.. where was I, coming back to present times with everything changed & she all alone, poor girl.. 😔 nothing is there for her & she is holding on a false hope, she don't admit this but deep down she knows.. & then a ray of light is back for her but past storms are so heavy to bechari kaise kuch samjhe , & here comes back hamari pagal Ishani .. but the way u described her inner turmoil is so good.. 👍🏼 she knows she can't hate him but also can't fall week & therefore trying to break him again but very late she realized that he have nothing left now to loose, how wonderfully realization of his fear dawned upon her.. last part is very well written.. 👍🏼 👍🏼 this realization will increase either her guilt or anger.. But hats off for this brainy version of Ishani.. & in between those hints of undercover passion from her side was 😳 😳

& now the main thing, the new lookout u gave to his wrist lock & thumb impression was really really shocking.. it is him marking her as his own 😲 😲 .. aise to kabhi door door tak bhi nahi socha 🤣 but this is more than welcome.. 😃
U know when I read the heading, I thought it may be something funny or naughty but it turned out entirely different & I loved it but now can you give us something from her side, I mean ranveer did what max he can, now it's sunny's turn.. ab bhai jab he can show his authority on her then she also must settle the scores na 😉 😉 .. do give a thought to it.. 😉
and now we all want continuation.. this u have to do, any random thought will suffice but we want more from you.. 🤗 🤗

"He'd barely been in his senses that time, when she had dragged him to the car and forced him into the passenger seat he was on the verge of tears".. see again many interpretations can happen 😈 😈 .. pata nahi why I always become mad after reading ur work, kuch na kuch mil hi jata hai.. 🤣 🤣

exactly my thoughts after reading what was she doing to him but i controlled of writing it in reviews because i thought LM will come running with chappals for finding something always in all love filled innocent moments.

U know when I read the heading, I thought it may be something funny or naughty but it turned out entirely different

ditto i thought this was something on the lines of the ice trick of ranveer from the US but it was all sober and simple nothing naughty so i controlled my urge otherwise LM would say how much demanding i have become but see LM now don't blame me i have supporters for these demand and its not at all our fault your writing takes us into an overdrive of imagination where we explore all the possibilities.😆😆 so a marking from her side is definitely pending.


this brought back the nostalgia of US and nids i really missed reading your comments and also the fact that only you are my true companion in these imaginatory overdrive.😳😳

Originally posted by: dvprt418.py

exactly my thoughts after reading what was she doing to him but i controlled of writing it in reviews because i thought LM will come running with chappals for finding something always in all love filled innocent moments.
[B]ditto i thought this was something on the lines of the ice trick of ranveer from the US but it was all sober and simple nothing naughty so i controlled my urge otherwise LM would say how much demanding i have become but see LM now don't blame me i have supporters for these demand and its not at all our fault your writing takes us into an overdrive of imagination where we explore all the possibilities.😆😆 so a marking from her side is definitely pending.


this brought back the nostalgia of US and nids i really missed reading your comments and also the fact that only you are my true companion in these imaginatory overdrive.😳😳

Hey Dv.. How r u dear..

And yes, LM can't blame us for this.. ye sab karni pehle Ishveer ki aur fir hamare dhamaka writers ki hai, varna we are to pure innocent souls.. 😆 😆
and even I was thinking ke pata nahi what LM will think, that how much shameless I am.. but it's really too good to know that I am not alone.. & m sure there are many others also who will support us, so LM u have to consider our demands.. 😉 😉

Untold stories was magic.. at that time one side was her story & other side was all comments.. I also used to read all, that was a different world in itself.. I too miss them badly yar, but koi nahi, let's make LM continue this, we'll start this again.. 😉 😉

Hey Dv.. How r u dear..

hey hi dear I am fine. How are you?

And yes, LM can't blame us for this.. ye sab karni pehle Ishveer ki aur fir hamare dhamaka writers ki hai, varna we are to pure innocent souls.. 😆 😆

that is the thing we were innocent people unless and ishveer and LM created a thing for passion and sizzling romance otherwise we use to think straight and good but now whenever LM and ishveer are there we don't have control over our mind.

and even I was thinking ke pata nahi what LM will think, that how much shameless I am.. but it's really too good to know that I am not alone.. & m sure there are many others also who will support us, so LM u have to consider our demands.. 😉 😉

thank you so much dear i really needed a backing here and i know how much innocent we are just like each other. now we can back up each other and LM won't think that we are dirty mind infact many people want this we are to just a medium to voice out their opinion. so LM you have to consider it.

Untold stories was magic.. at that time one side was her story & other side was all comments.. I also used to read all, that was a different world in itself.. I too miss them badly yar, but koi nahi, let's make LM continue this, we'll start this again.. 😉 😉

true that the US and the comments on those were highlight of the day no matter whatever the time or mood is it always use to cheer me up and your comments were always a laugh riots and while re reading the whole book i make sure to read those comments again it in itself is a entertainment factor.

hey hi dear I am fine. How are you?

M also good..


that is the thing we were innocent people unless and ishveer and LM created a thing for passion and sizzling romance otherwise we use to think straight and good but now whenever LM and ishveer are there we don't have control over our mind.

Vaise this is somewhat really true.. I can't say that we were entirely shareef & innocent but at least I was sane and little hesitant, initially when I used to read chat on this forum I always wondered ke kya kya likhte hain yaar, and now see, I wonder on myself ke main kya kya bolti rehti hoon 😆 is this also same with you.. I mean do u also sometimes wonder your own thoughts.. 😆


thank you so much dear i really needed a backing here and i know how much innocent we are just like each other. now we can back up each other and LM won't think that we are dirty mind infact many people want this we are to just a medium to voice out their opinion. so LM you have to consider it.

so true.. most people here are crazy like us, we are just like voice of ishveerians.. & have to say, LM is so generous with us, she'll definitely listen..


true that the US and the comments on those were highlight of the day no matter whatever the time or mood is it always use to cheer me up and your comments were always a laugh riots and while re reading the whole book i make sure to read those comments again it in itself is a entertainment factor.

Oh yes.. they are the best mood lifters, ek to Ishveer aur fir itne sare thoughts, maza ata tha.. and m glad that I can give some entertainment but honestly many times my own comments give me face palms feelings, purane paap saamne aate hai to jhatka to lagta hi hai na.. 🤣

M also good..

that's good to know.

Vaise this is somewhat really true.. I can't say that we were entirely shareef & innocent but at least I was sane and little hesitant, initially when I used to read chat on this forum I always wondered ke kya kya likhte hain yaar, and now see, I wonder on myself ke main kya kya bolti rehti hoon 😆 is this also same with you.. I mean do u also sometimes wonder your own thoughts.. 😆

something is really special today you are saying exactly my thoughts even i was a stalker first and started posting first only on NC that to small reviews but later to where that phase went i didnt knew infact many times i have embarrassed myself on my altered thinking now. These are exactly my thoughts whenever i read my reviews.

so true.. most people here are crazy like us, we are just like voice of ishveerians.. & have to say, LM is so generous with us, she'll definitely listen..

LM is generous with us and we keep on pestering her so stop herself from more pestering she keeps our demand but most of the times she herself surprises by coming up with something which i badly wanted in the story.

Oh yes.. they are the best mood lifters, ek to Ishveer aur fir itne sare thoughts, maza ata tha.. and m glad that I can give some entertainment but honestly many times my own comments give me face palms feelings, purane paap saamne aate hai to jhatka to lagta hi hai na..

its good that LM is tolerant otherwise I would have been banned from this forum or atleast from her threads. and honestly that's why i keep on writing in my reviews that bear with me because i cannot control myself you see there is this mini me inside my head which keeps on churning one thought or another 😆😆😆 and i had the most jhatkas of my life reading my own reviews now this is seriously the biggest face palm situation. Most importantly and appreciate LM for putting up with all of these with a happy face. But really her writing does add fuel to fire and the least said about writing passionate moments the better because then to she creates a beauty and we get attracted like bees on food. She actually creates a laahu muh lag gaya type situation for her writing by writing so well and so passionate.

Did you just read the US again after she edited and added few parts if not then do read it and if you want to know the exact change effect after the add on read all those passionate romance from the book you will get a fair idea how much more interesting she has made the book now.( goes in hiding before LM comes)

Originally posted by: matsh

Lovely surprise LM,!! :-):-)

It's beautiful as always!! And yeah it's been one year.. Time flies but some wounds remain!
Please continue to write more!!

Thank you so much, mommy! 🤗🤗 I'm so happy that you liked it! ⭐️⭐️ And yeah, some wounds do remain but hopefully time should help us heal them. 😛😛 As to continuing this, hopefully I will if time permits. 😃😃


Thank you so much once again! ❤️❤️

Originally posted by: dvprt418.py

now please tell me its not a dream.
really girl what a surprise or to be precise an antidote to the pain of ishveer ending not to forget in such a drastic way.
finally your work to read *does a hoopla*🥳
How are you dear? how is your college going on?

This whole thing was mesmerizing wait is it not always? so yeah like every time it was awesome.
their whole relationship connected with one event and covering the changed equation of both of them.

so good to read that she read his eyes the pain in it but still couldn't figure out what it was that was so sensible otherwise she was more interested in samosa and chutney in serial.

she bailed sane girl. but that was so apt explanation for her she hated him not for crossing loyality for love but was more angry on her condition and he leaving her at such difficult times and yet she knew in her heart the guilt and hence was blaming everything on him to ease her pain and suffocation. She knew deep down that on that night whatever happened to him was not done willingly and was nagging her and HP in there subconscious. It was his sudden departure that broke HP.

perfect each and every description and more interesting part is she is seeing fire in his eyes and coldness in his attitude but still his longing for his essence and still cannot make herself conform the hatred is harmful to her in anyway. It's just her habit of giving scars to satisfy the pain of her own.

perfect dear perfect totally and i so wish that this continue further because there were many things in the show storyline which we all wanted to happen. I had told even elvish about it that i so want that an FF on the show storyline should be there. Greedy I am.

this was definitely brilliant.
hope to read more from you.

lots and lots of love, hugs
DV

Thank you so much, darling! 🤗🤗 I'm so happy that you liked it! ⭐️⭐️ And well, you certainly aren't dreaming. 😉😉 I'm doing good and college is going well too, and I hope it's the same at your end as well. 😃😃


Coming to the review, I'm thrilled that you did like the concept overall. 😳😳 I wasn't sure whether it'd work out the way I hoped it too, but I'm a lot more relieved after reading the overall response. 😛😛


And yes, Ishaani still has brains left here unlike the one in the show who, like you said, had her mind more in samosa and chutney. As to her whole point of view, you've explained it beautifully as always. And when Ranveer and Ishaani are in a single frame, sparks, fire and ice are all to fly around. ☺️☺️


Thank you so much once again! ❤️❤️ As to the request part, I will be pursuing this if time permits and I will be taking in requests as well. 😊😊 And don't worry, the way the show has left us high and dry, we all have our own little wish list left. 😕😕


Loads of love, hugs and kisses,
LM

Originally posted by: adrita08

Hi LM 😊
Nice update 👏
Please continue

Thank you so much, dear! 🤗🤗 I'm happy that you liked it! ⭐️⭐️ And I'll definitely try continuing this soon. 😳😳